Thanks to the first reader who left a message
In the morning, when I browsed through my work and updated the chapters, I was pleasantly surprised to see that the book had its first reader's message.
Click on this reader's avatar, I was even more surprised, his name is "Liu Family Fourteen Shao", he is the author of two novels, one is "Jade Space" 1.37 million words (so powerful, amazing), and the other is "Rebirth America 1858" 330,000 words.
It is said that more than 90 percent of the authors' works are under 200,000 words. Therefore, I believe that "The Fourteen Youths of the Liu Family" must be a web novel cow with a structure in his brain and a keyboard like a god. Here, I thank you for sending the first message for my novel, thank you!
"The Fourteenth Younger of the Liu Family" wrote two comments this time. The first is the general comment after the latest chapter, which is roughly "The part of the protagonist's recollection of his past life is too verbose", and the second is in the comment section of "Chapter 7: Cherish Every Second of Rebirth", which reads "Hehe, what does it mean that you can't sleep?"
I'm a newcomer, this is my first web novel, and I take all the "firsts" very seriously. After thinking about it, I didn't reply to the comment area to "The fourteenth of the Liu family is missing, and I will open a chapter to write my thoughts."
As for what is mentioned in the first comment, it is not the protagonist's memories, but the novel's explanation of the big mistakes that the protagonist did in his previous life, and it took four chapters to write. Don't worry, there are more "verbose" in the later chapters, the emotional entanglements between the protagonist and the heroine, I will write very carefully, which may annoy some readers, but such a detailed emotional drama may also make another part of the readers very happy, which is also what I am looking forward to.
With regard to the second comment, I must say a couple of things. As of chapter 7, the male protagonist has been trying to correct a big mistake in his previous life after being reborn, which is not to sleep with Zhang Juan, because he put Zhang Juan into sleep in his previous life, and then Zhang Juan committed suicide, which is the origin of the protagonist's tragic life in his previous life. So after the protagonist is reborn, no one can sleep with Zhang Juan anymore.
Readers, don't worry, the outline of the novel frames a lot of beauties in the later chapters, including the school flower of the university (female protagonist), the bank beauty (the first female supporting actress), the female announcer of the radio station, and the business beauty who is the first in appearance in this book, as well as the female colleague of "You can sleep with me at any time if you want to sleep", twin sisters who went to study in France, landladys who rented houses, European female students, African little sisters... The eccentric Lin Ling'er who appeared in Chapter 12 is also a potential stock. Are you looking forward to it?
Don't look forward to it.,My novel has a main mission.,As I said in the preface.,The male protagonist was reborn to save his parents' lives and find the lover he missed in his previous life.,The other female supporting characters are really just supporting roles.,There are a lot of plots I can't make up my mind now.。 Who to sleep with, who not to sleep, or you help me make up my mind? What should I do after I sleep? Let the male protagonist rush between several women? Buy a private jet and rush to bed all over the world every year?
By the way, let's talk about the money-making plot. The main line of the male protagonist is to save the lives of his parents and find the lover he missed in his previous life, and making money is just a branch. As mentioned in the preface, the male protagonist will not be a reborn superman who punches Ali and steps on QQ, he may know Ma Xiaoyun by chance, Ma Xiaoteng, Li Xiaohong, Shi Dazhu, etc., but he will not break his wrists with these big guys, and the male protagonist is not reborn for this matter.
I've written a lot of drafts for the next chapters, and I'm working on the time to revise and beautify the text, and I'll do my best to code the words and update them as quickly as possible. At least two shifts per day. The love scene between the male protagonist and the female protagonist and the first female supporting role, I don't dare to say how wonderful it is, but at least I wrote it with my heart.
Readers who want to enjoy the rebirth of those who create a bunch of companies and defeat a bunch of rival companies, please look for another novel that will make you happy. Don't scold me, my novel is really not this kind of structure.