Liu Qianqian said: "In this way, this island was originally set up by anti-machine humans, after a hundred years, biotechnology matured, when Emma arrived on the island, it happened to be the first batch of Y chromosomes were born not long ago, almost all of them were babies, however, infanticide is something that should not be filmed, even if the heroine thinks she is righteous, the opposite side is just a helpless baby, this kind of plot is too dangerous, and it is meaningless." In the original design, I thought they were all adults, but there were many things that were logically difficult to explain when they became adults, and I didn't pay attention to this part. ”

"You're right," Ebenezer said, "and Emma isn't really a positive image, but infanticide is still too cruel to the audience." ”

Luke said: "We can avoid this part, don't design it in such detail, don't mention whether the other person is an adult or a baby, just say that Helena is a baby, and Emma faced Helena and did not choose to kill her, but to take her with her to raise her." ”

He clicked on the computer a few times and reopened a document: "This is the timeline of the story, my idea is that the plot takes the method of flashbacks and interludes, at the beginning Emma and Helena live together, Helena learned the idea of hostile robots in school, and when she comes home and tells Emma, Emma doesn't think so." ”

"I still have a thought," Ms. Liu said, "why did their biological experiments have to succeed? Could it have failed?" ”

"How?"

"The story is a true line and a false line, and the false line is the information that Helena got here, from her point of view, there have been serial murders on the island, dozens of men have died, and the murderer is still at large. ”

"Where's the true line?"

"The real thread is that after Emma arrived on the island, she found that those Y-chromosome creatures can't be called humans at all, they can only be called aliens, so what? Before we were too obsessed with their biotechnology, they were all successful and perfect, and there was no need for such a perfect situation in a story, as long as they carried the Y chromosome, it was a failure, not like a human at all, all kinds of strange shapes, and it can also prove that the islanders used many kinds of animals for biological experiments, but they all failed, only Helena of the XX chromosome succeeded, she was the only female. ”

"It doesn't make sense logically," said Luke, "but along that lines, we can give the reader another set." ”

Liu Qianqian asked, "What do you say?"

"Helena is a perfect human being, and that in itself is illogical in this story, the islanders are doing biological experiments to give birth to humans with the Y chromosome, so they will first eliminate the embryos of the XX chromosome and keep only the XY chromosome, right?"

"Theoretically, that's true. ”

"So working backwards, Helena is just an ordinary human. Luke said, "It's Emma who unilaterally suspects Helena, because when she found Helena, she was with genetically modified creatures and called him Daddy, so Emma thinks that Helena was genetically modified by humanoids and gave birth to humans, and because she is too human, Emma can't hurt her before she doesn't judge that she is not human, and those before her are not like humans." ”

Liu Qianqian was typing frantically in her notebook, and she couldn't keep up with Luke's train of thought: "So Helena is actually an ordinary human, but has she been adopted by humanoids?"

"It can't be said to be an adoption, she has her own mother, her mother lives with this humanoid, and let Helena call him Dad, Helena herself has nothing to do with humanoids, although humanoids are not humans, but animals raising human children is not a rare news, maybe after Helena's mother died, humanoids raised her for a while, so that Helena and Emma met at an age of about a year, already able to speak, but the memory is not so deep. ”

"The real thread of the story is," Liu Qianqian thought for a moment, "Emma wants to protect Helena and take her away from this island, which is from a homicide - I don't think it's appropriate to use a murder case, after all, according to the new setting, it's not a human being who dies, but animal cubs - the airport and dock have been closed since the beginning, and the radio wave shield has been turned on, and Emma has to stay on the island, while raising Helena, while dealing with the rest of the island. ”

"What do you mean by messing around with the others?" Ebenezer asked.

Liu Qianqian said: "Think about it, what was the purpose of the original people on this island? It is to modify the genes of organisms, break the reproductive isolation between other organisms, especially humanoid organisms and humans, and then ///// for natural reproduction. So the island is based on the genetic research institute as the core, spreading outward to build residential and commercial areas, of course, considering the number of people, and the other party is a member of the anti-machine organization, so they should not come much, and may bring some low-intelligence robots to assist, the airport dock on the island has been operating normally before the homicide, and people will come every week, on the surface it seems to be tourism, but in fact, it is to send resources to them. When Emma destroyed the genetic research institute, they chose to close the airport dock in order to find the murderer, and this closure was closed for more than ten years, and Helena was already a girl. ”

Liu Qianqian opened the document and began to type as she spoke: "In the past ten years, the island has been completely closed, and the only people living on the island are the researchers who came over, and the only young person is probably Helena. ”

Luke said, "There can be a little more to it, the research institute and the people who have volunteered to be test subjects. Although an artificial womb has been created in the setting, there is no need for women to conceive in their bodies, but someone also needs to continue to provide healthy eggs, and it is probably not enough to rely on researchers alone, Helena's mother is one of the test subjects, she can fall in love with a researcher, and the two of them secretly used the artificial womb of the institute to give birth to offspring, that is, Helena, on this island, everyone's purpose is to give birth to a naturally produced healthy Y chromosome carrier, that is, male, so fertility between women is not supported, and will be driven away from the island, after all, they want to get married and have children, and go back to the mainland, so Helena's mother must hide Helena's true identity to avoid being driven away from the island. ”

"There's a premise here that once the researchers are on the island, they can't leave," Ebenezer said. ”

Liu Qianqian said: "You can also add another setting, the experimental subjects and their humanoid creatures themselves live together, how to say, it is called cultivating feelings, after all, human and non-human creatures carry out embryonic combination, think about it carefully is a very penetrating thing, in order to prevent the experimental subjects from coming to their senses, the institute should strengthen brainwashing in this aspect." ”