Chapter 1056: It will collapse later

About half an hour later, Li Bo came to Yang Qiming's office with "Laughing Rivers and Lakes".

Yang Qiming smiled and said, "Lao Li, what do you think of it after reading it?"

Li Bo returned the magazine to Yang Qiming, and then said: "It's really good, if it becomes more and more exciting in the future, it is indeed possible to meet my requirements." However, Lao Yang, don't be too optimistic, this work is set in the Southern Song Dynasty Ningzong period, the starting point is a bit high, and it will definitely be difficult to control later. After all, this is a long-form work, at least hundreds of thousands of words, not a short story like "The Sword of the Yue Woman". So, I'm not too optimistic about its future development. ”

"Oh?" Yang Qiming smiled, "Lao Li, you don't have confidence in Gu Yong." ”

Li Bo said: "No matter how talented Gu Yong is, after all, he is still young now, and there is no problem in controlling a short story like "Yue Nu Sword". But at length, to be honest, I'm really not optimistic. Of course, I'm not denying his strength, in a few years, ten years, then I will have confidence in him. ”

Yang Qiming nodded and said: "What you said is not wrong, although there is no definite evidence, but from all aspects of information, it can be inferred that Gu Yong's age should indeed not be very old, and it is indeed a little difficult to completely control the "Legend of the Condor Heroes". However, I have a strong feeling that he is perfectly capable of handling it, for no reason, just a feeling. ”

After hearing this, Li Bo smiled and said, "Cheng, Lao Yang, I hope your feeling is correct." ”

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Official communication platform.

At this time, there are many people who have already finished reading the first chapter of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", and the discussion about the first chapter has become the mainstream.

"When I watched "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", I felt like I was watching a picture scroll slowly unfolding, and that feeling was really good. It is worthy of the work we are most looking forward to. ”

"That's it, those media said before that it was wrong for us to rate the expectation of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" as six stars, what will they say now?"

"Their vision is not good at all, and the professional media is not as good as the vision of our martial arts fans. ”

"Have you noticed what Qu San said? Is there really such a person? What kind of existence should that be? I'm looking forward to it anyway. ”

"Of course, I noticed it, and when I saw it, I was so excited, I was looking forward to it. ”

"Yang Tiexin turned out to be the descendant of Yang Zaixing, a famous general under Yue Fei, I guess Gu Yong dared to write like this, but it's a pity, I don't know if I'm alive or dead in this first chapter. ”

"Yes, it's really sad, I thought he and Guo Xiaotian were the protagonists at first. Now it seems that it should be their children, Guo Jing and Yang Kang are the protagonists. ”

"The protagonist should be Yang Kang alone, because only Yang Tiexin's wife Bao Xiweak was rescued, and he should be able to successfully give birth to Yang Kang. And Guo Xiaotian's wife Li Ping doesn't know whether she is alive or dead, maybe it's already there. Poor little Guo Jing hasn't been born yet. ”

"Speaking of the person who saved Bao Xi's weakness, I always feel very suspicious, Guo and Yang's families suddenly suffered a catastrophe, I guess that kid did it. The reason is that he fell in love with the beautiful Bao Xi and wanted to use this method to get Bao Xi weak. ”

"I don't think that kid looks like a good person. However, I think Changchun Ziqiu is also responsible, if he hadn't done it with those black-clothed people outside the Guo and Yang families, there would have been no black-clothed man who was injured and not dead, and Bao Xiweak would not have saved the black-clothed man, and there would be no follow-up. Of course, it was Guo and Yang who took the initiative to invite Qiu Chuji to drink, so they couldn't blame Qiu Chuji, and could only sigh that fate was like this. ”

"How many points do you think the official website will score for "The Legend of the Condor Heroes"?"

"That's not easy to say, what we think is good-looking, they may not think it's good. However, it shouldn't be lower than yesterday's sword and leaf silent works. ”

"It's hard to say, let's wait until the afternoon. ”

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Martial arts fans are curious, how many points will the official score for "The Legend of the Condor Heroes"?

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Sansheng Village, the edge comes to the front.

Li Fan asked with a smile: "How is it? Second Elder, are you still satisfied with "The Legend of the Condor Heroes"?"

Liang Sheng was extremely satisfied, when he read it yesterday, he was very excited and excited, and he could feel that this book would be very extraordinary.

With this book, it should be possible to meet the requirements of the Times Literature Award jury, so that martial arts can successfully seize this opportunity, and Gu Yong's kid will not disappoint.

It's just that at this time, Liang Sheng smiled faintly and said, "Well, it's really good." However, the starting point of your book is a bit high, and it is estimated that it will be difficult to control later, and I am a little worried about whether your kid can control it well?"

Zheng Jie said: "Judging from the beginning, it is indeed very good. However, it is not enough, and it needs to be more and more exciting in the future. ”

"Really?" Li Fan smiled faintly and said, "Then please ask the second elder to continue to look forward to the rest of the story." ”

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In the afternoon, in the expectation of countless martial arts fans, the official score list of the Times Literature Award was finally updated.

Gu Yong's "The Legend of the Condor Heroes": 7.1 points

Vigorously stroke "Blood Wind Chimes": 6.7 points

Crooked Moon "Sword Swinging Rivers and Lakes": 6.6 points

Piano "Chivalrous Love": 6.6 points

In addition, the scores of the works of Shang Buer, Xiao Liang, and Yun Huasheng are: 6.2 points, 6.1 points, and 6.3 points.

The rest of the work scored below 6.0 points.

With yesterday's scoring criteria, martial arts fans are not surprised by the scores of today's works, and they are not far from what they guessed.

Including the 7.1 score of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", everyone also guessed a rough idea.

"I knew that the score of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" would not be too high, but I believe that the score will be higher and higher in the future. Many martial arts fans say so.

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Great Martial Arts Magazine, the personal workshop of Jian Yishen.

Jian Yishen made a fist with his right hand and slammed it on the table, his face was full of resentment, he could accept that the score of the works of Fallen Leaves and Silent was slightly higher than him, but he definitely couldn't accept that the score of Gu Yong's works was higher than him, and it was several points higher.

Gu Yong was once his defeated subordinate, and he was forced to leave the martial arts world for a while.

Now that he is back, he can only continue to be trampled under his feet, how can it be that the score of the work is even higher than him.

Jian Yishen only felt that his face was seriously damaged, and he felt that the entire martial arts world seemed to be laughing at him.

Outside the door, Wang Yang looked at the situation of Jian Yishen and let out a long sigh.

He also read the first chapter of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", objectively speaking, it is indeed better than "The Prodigal Son Washing the Sword".

Gu Yong is really still Gu Yong's, and it is really not so easy to be defeated.

However, Wang Yang is not too worried now, and he can also see that the starting point of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is too high, and it is not easy to control it at all, even if the author is Gu Yong.

He knocked on the door and walked inside.

Seeing Wang Yang come in, Jian Yishen adjusted his mood and said, "Editor-in-chief, you're here." ”

Wang Yang nodded, sat down on the sofa next to him, and said, "Xiao Tang, you have also read the first chapter of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", what do you think?"

Jian Yishen said: "That's it, I really don't understand why I can score 7.1 points." ”

Wang Yang frowned slightly, and said: "Xiao Tang, you have to analyze objectively, even if you look at an author no matter how unpleasant it is, you must objectively analyze his work, analyze its advantages and shortcomings." ”

Jian Yishen looked at Wang Yang, sighed lightly after a while, and said: "With the real history as the background, this is what he is very good at, and his pen skills are becoming more and more sophisticated, and the character portrayal, the environment is brilliant, and the conflict of events is extremely good, which is indeed better than the beginning of my work." ”

Wang Yang nodded with satisfaction and said: "Only by objectively analyzing the advantages and disadvantages of his works can you surpass him." So, what do you think are the shortcomings of his opening?"

"Disadvantages?" Jian Yishen thought for a moment and said, "Shortcomings are a matter of benevolence, and wisdom is wise. Maybe what I think is bad is what others think is the highlight. So, it's hard to say. ”

Wang Yang nodded and said: "This is indeed not wrong, however, there is one biggest shortcoming in his opening, well, maybe it shouldn't be said to be a shortcoming, that is, the starting point of the opening is too high, and it will be very difficult to control in the back." ”

Jian Yishen's eyes lit up and said, "What does the editor-in-chief mean that he will not be able to control this book in the future, leading to a collapse?"

Wang Yang said: "This possibility is very high, even if he is Gu Yong." Therefore, there is no need for you to get angry now, concentrate on writing the back well, and sooner or later you will surpass his. ”

Jian Yishen was overjoyed after hearing this, and then thought carefully about Wang Yang's words, and the more he thought about it, the stronger the joy on his face became, and said: "Editor-in-chief, I know, my "Prodigal Son Washing Sword Record" will definitely surpass his "Legend of the Condor Heroes". ”

Wang Yang nodded, and a faint smile appeared on his face.

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