Do a poll.

Does the suspense of the mobile phone still need to be kept?

Setting up your phone is a very important prop at the beginning. The function is to let the traveler Han Wei re-acquaint himself with the woman who was a scumbag in the past through the mobile phone, and then atone for his sins.

But until now, no woman, such as Dong Qingrou, Chen Feng, and Zhou Rui, met through mobile phones. And someone mentioned it in the old version before, and I think it's more like an NPC to release a task with a mobile phone.

Later, Lin Feilan picked up the mobile phone. But I didn't use it much until the first few chapters.

Now the problem is this, the role of the first mobile phone to help meet the former scum woman is gone. And I think that now that I know the woman from before normally, the plot is smoother and the plot is reasonable.

The key is that now through a major overhaul, the plot and highlights have been basically determined. It is to meet the women of the past, and then atone for their sins to change their views.

The existence of the mobile phone is like a thunder, I don't know what everyone thinks, at least I think so. Such as a fish in the throat.

Whenever I write about a cool plot, I think about his mobile phone is still a thing.

Maybe it's going to break out and get into trouble at some point. This kind of trouble, if it is big, it is simply withdrawn from the whole network, then the whole book is over. If it's small, it doesn't have the meaning of existence, and there can be a lot of similar small troubles. No need for a cell phone to push.

It's like if you eat pork ribs and eat a peppercorn. It's a disappointment.

And because after the overhaul, the role of the existence of mobile phones has almost been extremely weakened. On the contrary, the disadvantages have always been there.

Now the existence of mobile phones has added to everyone's trouble, and it has become a constraint for me to let go of the waves.

Especially the most important thing is that I wrote the suspense of the mobile phone, and now I have used it for the first time. The effect feedback seems to be average, and even some book friends find it annoying.

So here, I want everyone's opinion. Don't you just don't want it?

Because I found that the plot is advancing normally, it seems that it has been smoothed out without a mobile phone, and the suspense of the mobile phone is abrupt, which adds to the snake.

As for Lin Feilan, the setting is that she looks silly and sweet on the outside, but she is proud, assertive, and scheming inside.

She and Chen Feng may be rivals for a long time.

And she defeated Chen Feng head-on, and then relied on her mobile phone to make small moves, which was a bit ruinous.

The most important point is my personal question.

My books, I know them all. The first heroine was never popular.

The existence of the mobile phone naturally makes book friends feel that she is the first heroine. On the other hand, the other female characters I wrote about were very popular with everyone.

For example, Dong Qingrou and Chen Feng.

I know that everyone is tired of watching that person, and I am tired of reading it, and it makes me sick to write.

This is also a change and breakthrough for my book.

Just don't set up a heroine, at least not an emotional heroine.

Lin Feilan doesn't have much ink at present, but everyone has expectations and expectations for her heroine, which is not what I want.

I said in the group before that this book has no emotional heroine, at most how many scenes there are.

So when the phone is removed, she is just a collaborator in Han Wei's career, not the first heroine, and I never said that she is the first heroine in feelings. I have a special respect for women, they are all equals. All have their own charm and brilliance. I really love each one of them! There is no high or low, and a bowl of sea water is very flat.

Hehe......

Far from it.

Chen Feng vs Lin Feilan.

They are supposed to be each other's rivals, throughout the book. It has little to do with Han Wei, at least for the two of them, the other party is the master, and Han Wei is the second.

There is another point, Lin Feilan defeated Chen Feng head-on.

It's like a martial arts master battle. The leader of the martial arts alliance defeated a challenger with martial arts openly, and the challenger was not convinced and had to come back to continue the challenge.

The leader of the martial arts alliance began to poison and use hidden weapons to defeat the challengers he had defeated. Even this challenger is very powerful, but this martial arts alliance leader is a bit unauthentic.

And having said that, there are indeed resources in the entertainment industry, and they don't need to be above board.

But Lin Feilan, at least this high-minded, proud, and assertive character is certain. The black belly is also reflected in the scheming, which is not a small means.

The role of the mobile phone has weakened the glory and purpose that she should have carried.

That's why I'm thinking about removing it.

But this is a big deal, and I'm going to ask for everyone's opinion.

The text has been changed frequently before, and there are already many book friends who are dissatisfied. I can't say I can't help it, it's a scoundrel.

Actually, I don't know about other authors, but every time I write and write, I think, oops, the plot can't be designed like that before. But I was still young at the time, so I thought about it and already wrote it. After that, anyway, I am very talented, my mind is open, and I can come back to a complete circle.

Now I'm old, I'm 25 years old. It is a person who has no talent and physical strength, if he does not retire and still wants to work hard, he must rely on hard work, diligence, and carefulness.

First of all, I would like to say sorry to those book friends who are dissatisfied and unhappy because of the frequent changes to the text.

It was my fault. I didn't set the book right at the beginning, and it was my fault.

But I just hope you tolerate a 25-year-old author who wants to make everything better.

Now the book grades are average, or even bad. Many book friends also said that the fat man had lost his popularity in the past and his new dream of falling in love and was outdated.

It's uncomfortable, but it's not as glassy as it used to be.

Everyone should feel that when you see this book, you should feel that the fat man has been trying to break through himself.

Character design, or plot, or many previous problems are avoided as much as possible.

I have seen book reviews and talks, and there are many people who look at fat people with old eyes, hypocritically and self-contained.

You're welcome. Sincerely, this is what you should do.

If I accept the honor and support of the past, the debt I owe will now have to be repaid.

But everyone knows that fat people are not people who like to digress, just watch my performance.

If you feel that the fat person has changed, continue to encourage them.

If you think that the fat man is still the same hanging, then the fat man deserves it.

But I was a little confident that I wasn't very good at writing, but I still had something.

Ha ha!!!

I'm sorry, I haven't been so shameless for a long time, and I'm a little blunt and uncomfortable.

Anyway, back to the topic.

Whether the suspense of the mobile phone should be kept, everyone gives an opinion.

If it's okay, I'll make my own decision.

As for the reason, I have also told you, I hope you will forgive me. Tolerate the fat.

Kneeling down to thank !!

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