At first glance, Niu Haibo was somewhat expectant of this essay title.

So I read along with the article.

At first, he felt that the student who wrote this essay should not be a good student with high Chinese proficiency.

Because most eugenics will be decorated with flowery sentences, this also leads to an essay that is basically a template.

Gradually, however, he was drawn to the content of the composition.

He was very surprised, Niu Haibo didn't understand why a junior high school student who was only 15 years old could write such an insightful composition.

In particular, the sentence "The dream is far away, I want to seize the day" touched Niu Haibo's heart.

Once upon a time, he also had an unrealistic dream in his heart.

That is to become the first person in the country to win the Nobel Prize.

But then it was defeated by reality.

After reading this essay, Niu Haibo even had an urge to get to know this student.

Unfortunately, the test number and name are not allowed on the computer screen.

Niu Haibo immediately gave 50 points for the essay, and this essay was the first full score among the nearly 1,000 essays he changed!

"It's really well written!"

Niu Haibo couldn't help but sigh.

An essay needs to be graded by two teachers, if the difference is not large, then the average score of the two teachers is chosen, but if the difference is very large, the comprehensive score of the third teacher is required.

Niu Haibo felt that any teacher would be attracted by the content and depth of this essay when he saw it, so he was not worried about the second teacher's marking.

But unexpectedly, it just came.

The second grading teacher who commented on Li Hao's essay was an old teacher who had been teaching for more than 20 years, and when he clicked on this article "My Dream is Ordinary and Realistic", his brows furrowed.

"What is this written! Full of anger! Completely lifeless! Not at all like the attitude of a young student!"

To a certain extent, this impression score affects the judgment of the old teacher.

So, it took him just ten seconds to finish the marking.

21 points!

This is the final grade given to this essay by the old teacher.

Because of the large deviation between the two teachers' grades, the computer system automatically assigned a third teacher to mark the papers.

The third teacher took a brief look and finally gave a grade.

38 points!

The scores of the three teachers were all very different, which led to the essay attracting the attention of the head of the third marking department.

The head of the language team of the three departments is a special teacher named Sun Chuanhong, who has participated in the examination papers for more than ten years.

He called all three teachers who were in charge of correcting the essay to find out the specific situation.

When Niu Haibo learned that the other two teachers had only scored 21 and 38 points, he was very surprised and exclaimed: "I think this essay is very well written! The idea is clear, there are your own ideas and attitudes, and there is no piling up rhetoric committed by ordinary students, and the content of the essay is in-depth, so it should be a full-score essay." ”

The old teacher was disgusted: "Little cow, you may change the paper less, I don't know how much I change this kind of negative energy composition every year, he is actually a person who is not willing to continue to work hard, what is said in the name of the United States is not as good as others, but in fact, he has not taken action! How can this kind of student give full marks?"

The third teacher gave his opinion: "I think this essay is decent, not very bad, not very good, anyway, that's what I think." ”

Sun Chuanhong was curious when they said this.

He organized all the teachers present to stop the grading papers in their hands, and called up Li Hao's essay to each teacher's screen.

"This essay, everyone in the big group will read it and talk about their opinions. ”

Many teachers are tired of the boring marking mode, and suddenly a controversial essay comes, and they are all interested for a while.

"I think this essay is good! It's a good essay, and the depth of the content is good. ”

"It's hard for me to imagine a junior high school student writing such an essay, and I suspect it's a set of essays. ”

"It's not enough to set the article, I don't think there is a mental age in my thirties who can't write such feelings. ”

"Why do I think the student who wrote this essay is cowardly?

......

Everyone talked a lot and gave their opinions.

Sun Chuanhong asked everyone to mark their own scores.

After a while, he looked at the table of statistics and fell into deep thought.

Among the 30 teachers, more than half of them scored full marks, but many of them scored low.

In the end, there was no way, Sun Chuanhong had to call the person in charge of the Chinese marking of the high school entrance examination, Teacher Feng Xiang.

When Mr. Feng Xiang read this essay carefully, he couldn't help but sigh: "I'm really curious about what this child has experienced, so that he can have such a feeling, think about it, the essays you usually read are not all I want to be admitted to Peking University, I want to be an angel in white, and I want to become a policeman." ”

However, in this essay, he doesn't want to be a scientist, he doesn't want to be admitted to Peking University, he doesn't want to be a teacher, and his dream is no longer that kind of lofty ideal, but a small goal. ”

"Look at the last few sentences he wrote: I will say, I want to do well in this high school entrance examination, I will say, I want to do well in this subject, I will say, I want to get a full score in the essay, this is actually his dream, but we usually talk about the dream, the premise is the dream, but the premise of his dream is to think. ”

Teacher Feng Xiang finally said: "He wants to do well in this high school entrance examination, and we may not be able to help him in this Chinese test, but he wants to get a full score in his composition, and I think we can help him achieve it." ”

Sun Chuanhong heard Teacher Feng Xiang's words and understood the meaning.

So he immediately decided: "This essay is a perfect score!"

"Great!" Niu Haibo was very happy, he secretly clenched his fists, and wanted to meet the student who wrote this essay.

"If this kid can go to Hengjiang No. 1 Middle School, I must personally take him to the subject of Chinese. ”

At the same time, the reporters of Hengjiang Daily happened to be at the marking site, and when they learned that there was a full-score essay in the third marking department, they immediately rushed over with the machine curiously......