Part 2 Summary and Leave of Absence (Asking for a Commuter Pass)

The second part is about 850,000 words.,It's a super long story in the structure.,I have the impression that only the third and fourth volumes of a life are more than it.,Thinking every day.,Write every day.,Although it's very happy.,But it's really tired.,Especially in the next month, there is also a fitness attached.,Almost even the time is gone.。

The name of this part is "Faceling", and it is expected that there are three meanings, attention, attention, and the following is the standard answer for reading comprehension.

One refers to the promotion to "Faceling", which is the simplest and easiest to think of.

The second is to represent Xiao Ke's living state in Beckland, using a fake face, a fake name, and a fake identity to get to know people, deal with things, and get involved in turmoil, but when he returns home, he is still lonely and lonely.

The third refers to those who have been crushed into powder or rushed in the great era, in the history books, they have no name, no appearance, no past, no life, and only exist in simple numbers or descriptions, in a sense, this is not the "Faceling"? The simplest tricks, the least eye-catching cannon fodder, who cares what their faces look like?

Just like the phrase "years of great hunger, cannibalism", how much sorrow, pain, cruelty, blood, and despair are contained in these six simple words, and how many living people without faces and names are condensed? Tens of thousands, hundreds of thousands, millions!

Therefore, I tried to give some descriptions to the old Kohler, Liv, and Freya in the waves of the times, trying to restore the hopes, hardships and tragedies of these "facelings", so that they look like people rather than numbers.

With their passing, more people like them poured in, and the "Facelings" were always there, they were the stepping stones of the era, the pioneers of the era, and the characters who were indispensable to the whole story.

With this in mind, I discarded the sadder and more shocking ending, after all, this one is called Facelings, the worst era and the best era after the reversal of the before and after, can express what I want very well and powerfully, the times are advancing, ruthless and helpless, but there are countless Facelings lying at my feet.

The title of the third part will not have so much symbolism, because the main line is very clear and direct, well, the name of the third part is, "Traveler".

Looking at the text, everyone should be able to imagine something, but we still focus on putting it back to the second part, Bay City actually has a lot of lines that have not been collected, such as the mercury snake related, such as the underground evil spirits related, such as the real plot of the royal family, such as 0-17, such as vampires related, such as psychological alchemy will be related, this is not only because we need to give Bay City's Audrey, Forthth, Hugh, Emlin They have the opportunity to show themselves, but also because Bay City is the most important stage in the whole film, Xiao Ke will definitely come back, and he will definitely stay for a long time.

The second part says scattered.,In fact, in the end, a lot of things are strung together.,For me,Scattered but attractively written.,It's not bad.,The real problem is actually another point.,That is, the rhythm of the story has been relatively tight and tight.,Not loosened.,In other words,Constantly encountering events.,Keep solving problems.,Lack of long enough light enough in the middle.,Reading will be a little tired and irritable.,Although this has the reason for the extraordinary characteristic aggregation effect,But it is also true that there are some problems from the setting.。

The problem is that the tarot will be held once a week, so the timeline is cut into a state of week after week, it is easy to have a sense of repetition and rigidity, and it is necessary to keep a certain amount of things every week, so the rhythm of the transcendent events will be a little tight, and the solution I am currently considering is to skip some less important tarot gatherings directly, and be more free in time control.

Of course, the Tarot Society itself is also the main body, and it will definitely not be less, like the first time Emlin joined, I haven't forgotten, and there are many various things mentioned by friends, such as the reaction of the church, such as another copper whistle, I remember, but I deliberately pressed it and didn't write it, and I was going to leave it until the beginning of the third part.

This is because I don't want to let the details dilute or destroy the overall picture sense and emotional advancement of the final two photos, so I can only carry out a certain amount of technical processing.

After the second part was written, I was very happy that one role after another was erected, so that everyone liked it, and it was not impossible to use 0-17 to end violently, on the one hand, it was still very awesome to write out the church, and it was not without reason to be able to be the ruling class for so long, on the other hand, this is not the end in itself, just a continuation, a connection, pointing to some follow-up things, not to mention the specifics, so as not to spoiler.

Finally, I want to write down the writing, write it down one by one, what I am more and more pursuing is simplicity and piercing, that is, if I can accurately describe it with the most simple and simple words, I will try not to write at length, not to fill it with gorgeous things, and rely on the calmest and most objective white description to accumulate emotions step by step, and at the most appropriate time, use the most accurate and concise language to pierce the barrier and pierce the softest place in my heart.

Now it seems that although there are still many problems, it is barely on the road.

Of course,The characteristics of online writing are destined,I can only do this in the most important and most needed chapters,It's impossible to write every chapter like this,A lot of things can only be repaired when I'm old and free.,In normal times,My vocabulary is actually a lot.,But it's very rusty.,After all, it's all accumulated step by step.,And it's not used much.,That is,When coding words, you will habitually use those in the brain's commonly used list.,So many times it is inevitable that there will be a problem of word repetition.。

Also, similar to the problem of indiscriminate use of some adjectives, I hope to present the clearest, most intuitive and most focused picture in my mind, so I try to create something in the text, but it still needs to be explored and improved.

That's it for the technical summary of Part 2.

Writing an essay is a very hard and torturous thing, but writing it, being praised, being praised, and being praised is very pleasant, and it is very satisfying.

Ladies and gentlemen, I love to write!

I love telling you stories!

I like to create plump characters!

I love to show you a new and interesting world!

Photography is a delight!

Well, the mystery is to this day, the pure starting point platform is only 50,003, but the average subscription has passed 40,01, 24 hours to chase the original 27,2008, and the final seven or eight chapters have officially broken through 30,000, which shows that the retention rate is high, which shows that most of the people who have seen it are chasing, which shows that you are full of love!

Also, the recommended ticket has been in the top 15, the monthly pass has been in the top 5, I'm very lazy, too lazy to have the spirit to brush any data, so, every ticket, every reward, every subscription, is your full love!

Gentlemen, the second part is over, I want to ask for praise and ask for a monthly ticket!

Ask for a monthly pass~ (Groundhog cry)

Finally, as is customary, there are two days off, that is, Monday and Tuesday, and the update resumes at 12:30 noon on Wednesday, which is still the old time.

What, you say Sunday is half a day? I didn't hear it, I didn't hear it...... Well, just kidding, at the end of such a long one, let's rest for half a day.

The third part, "Traveler", please look forward to it.