Xu Chunqiu walked in with the door.

The space in the conference room was very large, with a long table, but after Jiang Man slammed the door and left, there were only two people left.

In addition to Tu Zisu, there was also a lady in her thirties with gold-rimmed eyes, Xu Chunqiu guessed that the eight achievements were Shen Zhilin.

"Sit down. Tu Zisu said to Xu Chunqiu very casually.

"White, watery, bookish. Shen Zhilin glanced at Xu Chunqiu's face, and immediately called out Xu Chunqiu's name in the play accurately: "It's Qin Sese, right?"

Xu Chunqiu nodded politely and agreed.

Shen Zhilin's thinking was very jumpy, and he was still asking Xu Chunqiu in the last second, and after getting a positive answer, he turned back to Tu Zisu and continued to talk about what he had broken halfway before.

"What is this story, I still don't have a lot of ground on it. ”

"Is this story really interesting enough? Is it really captivating enough?"

"I think the existing plots will be a little interesting, but for a good show, a few good characters have to come out, and the logical chain of these scenes before and after must at least be dredged. When Tu Zisu said this, he frowned, and then turned his head to ask Xu Chunqiu, "Come, little Xu girl, tell me, what do you think of this book?"

"Or say that you understand the character, don't be too restrained, just say whatever you want. ”

Xu Chunqiu nodded.

Qin Sese......

"A pampered, somewhat boyish girl. ”

This is Xu Chunqiu's summary of this role.

She was originally a young lady who played the piano, danced ballroom dance, and went to church school, but once she fell into the opera garden to serve the lower ninth class in her cognition, and the gap at that time made her unacceptable. ”

While she envied Jinse's beauty, she spit on her in her heart. ”

"She despises singing from the bottom of her heart. ”

Shen Zhilin nodded frequently on the side, this is the Qin Sese she created.

But Xu Chunqiu changed his words and suddenly said: "But there are some things I always can't figure out. ”

Shen Zhilin raised his eyebrows: "You say." ”

"Why would Qin Peimin send his daughter to the opera garden to avoid disasters, isn't it better to go to church or school?

"Why does Qin Sese have such obvious hostility towards Jin Se? The daughter of a rich and noble family does look down on singing, but is that kind of emotion really a grudge? I think it's more of a disdain, right?"

"Why did the Japanese enter the opera garden, put the pillars aside, but took a fancy to a milky hairy girl, and came over twice?

"And what is Jin Se's motive, what is it that is willing to make her give up her life to save a rich little girl who looks down on her everywhere, just because of the last sentence that her surname is Qin?"

Xu Chunqiu read the book and pondered for three days, almost every question hit the nail on the head and hit the nail on the head.

Shen Zhilin rarely made her speechless when she asked, the book that was originally written with a framework turned out to be full of loopholes and holes.

Tu Zisu asked her with interest: "Then how do you think this book should be changed to be reasonable?"

Xu Chunqiu was silent for a moment: "I don't think it can be changed." ”

Shen Zhilin listened to such an unkind comment, and instead of getting angry, she let out an interesting "oh".

Xu Chunqiu continued: "What is the theme of your play?"

"Sacrifice and redemption. Shen Zhilin replied, "The easy-to-use and charming drama in the social arena willingly replaces a pure white and clean soul to bear the destiny that should belong to her." ”

But Xu Chunqiu said: "Why is her soul pure white and clean? Just because she is the daughter of the wealthy businessman Qin Peimin, just because she is a female student?"

She seemed to be complaining about Jin Se in the script.

"Why isn't Jin Se's soul pure and clean, and why should she die for Qin Sese?"

"Is it just because she's a servant? Is it because she's a ninth-rate?"

"But aren't all men created equal?"

Everyone is born equal, which is the first concept that Xu Chunqiu accepted when he traveled to this stable and peaceful world.

Her script doesn't hold up from the core.

Shen Zhilin retorted: "I arranged for Jin Se to save Qin Sese, it was not the female actor who saved the female student, but the woman who saved the girl." ”

"She did it voluntarily. ”

But as she spoke, even she realized that her conclusions were untenable.

From the very beginning of her design, she designed Jinse's status at the lowest level of society, doing noble things with a lowly body, and protecting the cleanest and purest soul.

From the very beginning, Jin Se and Qin Se were not equal.

Tu Zisu nodded heavily, he agreed with Xu Chunqiu's statement: "The characters stand, but the story line is too vulgar." ”

"It's a bit of a bit unworthy to go to such a story for half a year to shoot for more than half a year. ”

But Xu Chunqiu said coldly: "In fact, as long as you change one point, this story can stand immediately." ”

"The intention is still sacrifice and redemption. ”

Shen Zhilin turned her head to look at her, and Tu Zisu silently put down her overlapping hands.

I just listened to Xu Chunqiu's story.

"Let the schoolgirl save the play. ”

Since all human beings are created equal, it is better to let the so-called "noble" save the "lowly" than to let the "lowly" save the "noble" and fall into the cliché.

Shen Zhilin's eyes lit up, and he suddenly said excitedly: "I understand what you mean." ”

"The existing storyline is all overturned, so that the logical chain can be built. ”

She began to talk to herself: "No, Jin Se's identity still has to be on the stage a little more, the drama is not enough, she is not only a drama, but also a prostitute." ”

"Beiping fell, there was chaos everywhere, Ruyilou couldn't survive, so he took over the work during the day and at night, Jin Se is not only the top brand of Ruyilou, but also Qin Sese's father Qin Peimin's lover, so Qin Sese has such undisguised hostility towards her. ”

"The Japanese pointed out that what they wanted was not Qin Sese at all, but Ruyi Lou's famous top brand Jin Se, so it was all logical. ”

"But why did Qin Sese save Jinse......

Shen Zhilin muttered quietly, crossed out the content of the blockbuster on the script with a brush, and wrote down new inspirations, and finally put down the pen for a long time.

She held Xu Chunqiu's hand with both hands, and thanked her with a gleam in her eyes, but then she showed embarrassment.