After sighing, Yang Qiming came to Li Bo's office again.

"Lao Li, how does this chapter feel?" Yang Qiming asked.

Li Bo nodded and said: "Yes, very good, even Genghis Khan has appeared, Gu Yong really dares to think, dare to write, and has enough pen power." Before that, I was worried that he would collapse later, but after reading the third chapter, my worries have decreased. ”

Yang Qiming heard Li Bo say this, his face was a little proud, and his previous feeling was really correct.

I was about to say something, but I heard Li Bo continue: "However, I found another problem. ”

"Another question?" Yang Qiming glanced at Li Bo suspiciously, and said, "What is the problem?" Lao Li, let's hear it. ”

Li Bo said: "This work is a martial arts work, but judging from the first three chapters, it seems that there are fewer martial arts elements. Except for the description of Qiu Chuji and the Seven Monsters of Jiangnan, there are not many martial arts elements.

This third chapter is almost all about the description of the war between the various tribes of Mongolia, as well as the contradictions and frictions between the Temujin tribe and the envoys of the Jin State, and there are few martial arts elements.

Moreover, the protagonist Guo Jing seems to be growing up in Temujin's army. Then, what he has come into contact with and learned should mainly be the desert, the set of marching and fighting, and it seems that there are no martial arts elements.

Of course, I'm not saying that it's not good to write like this, in fact, with Gu Yong's pen power, it will inevitably be very wonderful to write like this.

But this is martial arts after all, and the martial arts element is the most important. Otherwise, it's more of a historical one. ”

After listening to Li Bo, Yang Qiming nodded, did not refute, but said with a smile: "I said Lao Li, you will pick problems." As far as the first three chapters are concerned, this is indeed a problem. However, this is only the third chapter, don't worry, I believe this will be a real martial arts. ”

Li Bo also smiled and said, "I don't mean to find fault, but our requirements must be strict." You're right, this is only the third chapter, and I hope the rest will be as you said. ”

Yang Qiming nodded and said: "Then a few days later, look at the situation of the fourth chapter, to be honest, I am looking forward to it, I like this work more and more." ”

Li Bo added: "To be honest, I also have some expectations, and I like this work a little bit now. ”

"Oh, is it?" Yang Qiming laughed, and then went out, in a very good mood.

After Yang Qiming went out, Li Bo shook his head with a smile, and seemed to be in a good mood.

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Judging from the first three chapters of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", its martial arts elements do seem to be a little less, especially from the third chapter, as well as the development trend of the third chapter.

And the people who noticed this were not only Li Bo, but also Wang Yang, the editor-in-chief of the Great Martial Arts Magazine, as well as martial arts writers Falling Leaves Silent, Wolong and others, as well as some other people who were good at thinking and had vicious eyes.

Great Martial Arts Magazine.

Jian Yishen said with some excitement: "Editor-in-chief, sure enough, throughout the first three chapters, there are really not many martial arts elements, if you don't say it, I haven't paid attention to it yet." ”

Wang Yang smiled: "I didn't pay attention to it before. This is all after reading this third chapter, almost all of which are descriptions of the war between the Mongol tribes, and then suddenly discovered. ”

Jian Yishen said: "I hope Gu Yong himself didn't find out, and after he unconsciously wrote this work more like history, he wanted to focus on 'martial arts', and the transition would definitely be very stiff and unnatural." Then, this work will naturally be over. ”

Wang Yang nodded and said, "That's true." Moreover, he brought Genghis Khan and Mongolia into the picture, and the pattern became larger, and it would undoubtedly become more difficult to control. Therefore, his work seems to be infinitely beautiful now, but in fact, these two hidden dangers are buried, and it may overturn at any time. ”

"That's true. Jian Yijin said, the more he thought about it, the more excited he became.

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In the exchange group of four people, such as Silent Fallen Leaves, Daliyi, Crescent, and Qinsheng.

Falling Leaves said silently: "As soon as this third chapter comes out, there must be no doubt that it is very exciting. But it seems that there is another hidden danger, what do you think?"

"Hidden dangers are indeed hidden dangers, but it's too early to say anything, this is only the third chapter, and we have to read a few more chapters before we can draw conclusions." ”

Crescent said: "It's really impossible to draw conclusions now, let's read the next chapter." However, I Gu Yong should not make such a mistake. ”

Qin Sheng said: "Let's not talk about the rest, the score list will be updated this afternoon, I hope this hidden danger can make the score of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" not continue to rise, so that we can bring the score closer." ”

"I hope so. The three of them said at the same time.

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Not only a few people who fell silently, in fact, almost all of them were waiting for the update of the score list in the afternoon.

Of course, in addition to the score of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", everyone also pays more attention to the score of the works of Daliyi, Crescent, Qinsheng, Shang Buer and others.

Martial arts fans are still very happy after reading today's update of several people's works. Even if it's not as exciting as "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", it's already very good.

Before, only one was available, and everyone would be very excited.

And the official rating list update did not make everyone wait too long.

It's just that a group of martial arts fans, after seeing the latest rating list clearly, were all stunned.

The score of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" has not changed, it is still 7.3 points in the previous issue.

What is the situation? The third chapter, which makes people so burning and excited, even the third chapter summoned by Genghis Khan, did not increase the rating of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes".

Martial arts fans can't believe it.

"Haven't the ratings been updated yet?" someone asked.

"No, it's indeed been updated, you can see that the "Blood Wind Chimes" has risen from 6.7 points in the previous issue to 6.8 points now. In addition, the works of Crescent Moon and Qin Sheng also rose by 0.1 points each. ”

The rating list has indeed been updated, but why hasn't the score of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" changed?

No one wonders if the system is malfunctioning, and no one suspects that "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" has suffered injustice.

After all, it was the jury of the Times Literature Award, and the outside world absolutely believed in its fairness and impartiality.

The only explanation is that the jury of the Times Literature Award believes that the serialization of this issue of "The Legend of the Condor Heroes" is not enough to increase its rating.

But why is this? The vision of the Jury of the Times Literature Award is so "unique"?

A group of martial arts fans don't understand the situation.

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I recommend a friend's book "God-level Flowers", which is also urban, and the author thinks it is very good.

In addition, the author must not tell you that the author of that book is an absolute beautiful college student.

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