Chapter 888 How to Write an Essay

For Liu Feng, he really doesn't have much experience in writing papers. Now that he wants to write a paper on GMO, he really doesn't know where to start.

Zhao Zhongyao listened to Liu Feng's words, then looked at him again and said: "Writing a paper is actually not a difficult task, as long as you make it clear what you want to say." Of course, be sure to pay attention to some wording. Let the person who reads your paper understand what you are trying to convey at a glance. Therefore, the writing of this paper must be grasped well. If you can't even understand what you want to say, then how can you succeed in this paper!"

After listening to Zhao Zhongyao's words, Liu Feng looked at him and said, "Director Zhao, can you help me think about how I should write this paper?

Zhao Zhongyao listened to Liu Feng's words, looked at him again and said, "That's the case, I have also written papers before, but I haven't written papers recently. However, I can do the checks for you, and if I feel that you can write it, it will almost be published. ”

Zhao Zhongyao is speaking modestly, he is too experienced in writing papers. After all, in his last life, he can be said to have written a lot of papers. From the time he went to college until he was engaged in antimatter research, he wrote not a thousand papers in a few decades, but hundreds. He is very experienced in writing essays.

"Director Zhao, then that's it! I'll write a paper myself, and after I'm done, I'll bring it over, you can help me see it, and if there's anything that is not good, you can help me revise it." What do you think. Liu Feng looked at Zhao Zhongyao again and said.

"Okay, don't worry, I'll fix it for you. Zhao Zhongyao also said the same.

"Okay, then I'll go. Liu Feng listened to Zhao Zhongyao's words, and of course he was very happy.

After speaking, Liu Feng went back first.

When Liu Feng returned to his office, he began to conceive the paper, first writing a draft himself. After I finished writing it, I read one and started to write it officially.

It took him a week to finally write his paper.

After Liu Feng finished writing the paper, he took the paper and came to Zhao Zhongyao's office.

"Director Zhao, I have already written this paper, you can show it to me!" Liu Feng put the paper he wrote in front of Zhao Zhongyao.

Zhao Zhongyao took the paper written by Liu Feng, and he first glanced at the title of this paper. The title of this paper written by Liu Feng is "On Genetically Modified Technology".

Just after reading this topic, Zhao Zhongyao felt that the topic used by Liu Feng was not very good, and it should be revised. Because of this title, people can't feel like they're continuing to read this paper as soon as they see it.

A good essay is the same as a good essay. If you want to publish an article in newspapers and magazines, then the article you write must be read by the editor, and the editor will have a feeling of brightness, and only such an article can be taken by the editor.

But how do you make the editor's eyes shine! First of all, the title of this article. This topic must be done in such a way that the editor will want to continue reading it when he sees it. If you ask the editor to look at your topic and feel that there is nothing attractive about your topic, then people may not read your article and just put your article aside.

"Liu Feng, the title of your paper is not very good, you should change it. Before Zhao Zhongyao could read what Liu Feng had written, he first pointed out that the topic of the paper he wrote was not very good.

As soon as he heard Zhao Zhongyao say this, Liu Feng said puzzledly: "Director Zhao, then what topic do you say is good, didn't I explain this topic at once, what is the focus of my discussion? In that case, I'm going to bring it up at once!"

Liu Feng listened to Zhao Zhongyao's words, he was still a little puzzled, he felt that it was more appropriate for him to come up with such a topic.

Zhao Zhongyao listened to Liu Feng's words, then looked at him again and said, "If you think like this, you are wrong." It's not that you just put the main thing you want to write about on the topic. A good essay doesn't mean that you can just put what you want to write on the topic. The important thing is that what you want to write can attract the attention of the editor. ”

Liu Feng listened to Zhao Zhongyao's words, and then said: "Then Director Zhao, what kind of topic do you think I should use for this paper." ”

"I don't think it's better to call it 'GMO technology makes human life better'. Zhao Zhongyao looked at Liu Feng again and said a topic that he had just thought of.

As soon as he heard this topic, Liu Feng also felt that this topic was a little special, and it felt much warmer than his own topic. My own topic is a little cold, which makes people feel that they are playing tricks.

"Director Zhao, the topic you mentioned is indeed good, compared to my topic, in terms of feeling, it is much warmer. As soon as Liu Feng heard Zhao Zhongyao's topic, he also had to say that the topic he was given was better than the one he wrote.

"Yes, if I give you a change in this topic, it just makes people feel that when they see such a topic, they will want to continue reading. Because, as soon as people see such a topic, they will think about what is in this topic. What exactly is genetically modified technology, and how can this technology make human life better. Zhao Zhongyao looked at Liu Feng again and said.

"Okay, just use this topic, or this topic from Director Zhao. Liu Feng listened to Zhao Zhongyao's explanation, and he also agreed to use such a topic.

"Okay, let me take another look at what you wrote. ”

After discussing the topic written by Liu Feng, Zhao Zhongyao began to read what he wrote again.

Zhao Zhongyao felt that the content of this paper written by Liu Feng was also a bit problematic, and he just wrote about what kind of technology genetically modified it was. As for what kind of changes this technology will bring to people's economy and lives, he did not say. It makes people feel that the technology he developed is just a high-tech technology, but he didn't make it very clear what it is useful for human life.

"Liu Feng, this paper you wrote just explains the genetically modified technology you want to develop. But any technology should serve the production and life of human beings. If you don't say that your technology is of any help to human production and life, then how can your technology be recognized by everyone!" Zhao Zhongyao said again.

As soon as he heard Zhao Zhongyao say this, Liu Feng had a feeling of sudden realization.

"Director Zhao, what you said is really good, you reminded me like this, I feel that the paper I wrote is indeed a bit too boring. I just haven't explained anything about the technology of genetically modified organisms. I didn't say how this technique would help us in our lives, and I felt that the paper I wrote was too superficial. Liu Feng said again.

"Yes, the paper you wrote is just a noun explanation. Just to give an explanation of the technology that you have developed. Such a paper can be said to be a relatively general paper. When you look at a paper like this, it feels like a college student writing a paper.

A good paper, like a good essay, needs to be attractive. Be bright. If there is no attraction and no highlights, then how can it attract others. ”

Zhao Zhongyao looked at Liu Feng and told him some things about how to write a good paper.

Liu Feng listened to what Zhao Zhongyao said, and felt that he had benefited a lot. He looked at Zhao Zhongyao again and said, "Okay, I know how to write, I will write another paper for you." ”

"Okay, that's it, you'll be considered a draft. Write another one for me to see. If I feel like you've written something similar, then you can contribute. Zhao Zhongyao knows that he is very experienced in writing papers. As long as he feels that the paper is well written, then as long as he votes it, it may still be published.

In this way, Liu Feng took his paper and returned to his office, and he began to write this paper again.

This time, he followed the train of thought that Zhao Zhongyao said. Rewrote a dissertation. The title of this paper, which Zhao Zhongyao told him, is called 'Genetically Modified Technology Makes Human Life Better'.

After he finished writing, he read it first, and felt that this time he wrote it very well. This time, he simply explained what GMO technology is. Then some examples were given to prove that this genetically modified technology will be of great help to human life.

Liu Feng spent another three days writing this new paper. After he wrote it, he read it himself. After that, it was brought to Zhao Zhongyao again.

"Director Zhao, let's see if I wrote well this time. Liu Feng said, and put the paper he wrote again on the desk in front of Zhao Zhongyao.

Zhao Zhongyao glanced at the topic of the paper written by Liu Feng this time, and felt that he had already used the topic he had given him. He was also very happy. After all, if people are willing to accept their own suggestions, it also shows that they are an open-minded and studious person.

"Okay, let me watch it again. ”

After Zhao Zhongyao finished speaking, he took Liu Feng's paper and read it again.

After reading it this time, he felt that the paper written by Liu Feng this time was very good. Much better than the last time I wrote it.

"Okay, you've done a great job this time. However, some of the wording needed to be changed. You put it here for me first, and I'll help you revise it when I have time. ”

Zhao Zhongyao feels that Liu Feng is now writing this paper. It's pretty good though. However, in some of the draftings, it still needs to be revised. After all, this good paper, that is, a good article, in terms of writing, should also be paid attention to.

"Okay, then thank you Director Zhao, you can help me revise it again. Liu Feng said again.

At this time, Zhao Zhongyao seemed to think of something again, he looked at Liu Feng's paper, and said, "Liu Feng, where are you going to publish this paper." ”

Liu Feng thought for a while, and said in a timid voice: "Director Zhao, I want to submit this paper to the journal "World Nature", what do you think?" ”

The "World Nature" magazine mentioned by Liu Feng is the most famous scientific journal in the world. The people who can publish articles in this journal are the world's leading scientists. Liu Feng dared to submit his paper to such a world-class academic journal, which was of course a very bold idea.

However, there is nothing about it. After all, World Nature is a magazine. As long as you are interested in academic achievements, you can submit your paper to the editorial office of this world-famous academic journal.

It's just that ordinary people don't dare to think like this, and they feel that their level is not qualified to submit to this world-famous academic journal.

When Zhao Zhongyao heard Liu Feng say this, he was stunned for a moment, and then said with a smile: "Haha, okay, we young people must have such courage." No matter what kind of magazine he is, as long as we have the guts, we can go and submit articles!"

Liu Feng listened to Zhao Zhongyao's words and felt that he was not laughing at himself! So, he said with some embarrassment: "Director Zhao, you are not laughing at me! If that is the case, I will forget it, and I should choose a domestic academic journal to submit!"

Zhao Zhongyao listened to Liu Feng's words, then smiled again and said: "Look where you want to go, how can I laugh at you! I myself have not published a paper in this "World Nature" journal! I am qualified to laugh at you. ”

Hearing Zhao Zhongyao say this, Liu Feng felt that he was thinking too much. Director Zhao is not the kind of person who likes to laugh at others.

"Director Zhao, do you think that my paper can be published in the journal "World Nature"? ”

After all, Liu Feng is a young man who has just graduated from college and has made some achievements in genetically modified technology. Wanting to publish a paper in the journal "World Nature" is indeed a bit ambitious.

As long as your paper is liked by the editors of the journal "World Nature," then how can it not be published? They don't know that you are a young man, a researcher who has just graduated from university. As long as your paper is well written, it will be published in the journal World Nature. ”