Mori Natsu and Yukino are having various discussions about Yuu and Qiong's various plays. Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info

It's obviously a very dirty topic, but the expressions of the two people are very serious now.

But if you want to talk about it, the expressions between the two people are still slightly different.

Mori Xia's expression is focused and deep, while Yukino's expression is eager to try with a little anticipation.

"But when it comes to the plot, I think we need to consider the audience's acceptance, not everyone likes to use props, or likes very specific types of things. "Senxia took into account the feelings of the audience, and this problem needs to be solved.

"It's better to start from the top of the posture. "Yukino has a good suggestion.

"Oh?"

"For example, we can ask Yuwa Dome to go home and then can't wait to do something unspeakable here in the entrance, so ......"

Yukino spoke her mind.

After hearing Yukino's words, Mori Xia suddenly thought of such a scene in the original plot...... It seems to exist.

"The brother and sister like to play all kinds of taboo games, and the best way to show it, in addition to using props, is only a variety of postures. Yukino added.

"That's right, but you need to think about it. Sen Xia was thinking, "I think the plot of the following part should be something that can be written, so I'm thinking about how to do it now." ”

"I think that the first time I present a scene like this to readers and audiences, it must be shocking enough, but it must not be offensive to the audience. Yukino was supplementing Mori Xia's suggestion.

Mori Xia nodded approvingly.

"So what to do?" Senxia thought.

"I think it's nice to have hot springs and baths. Xue Nai said, turned around, and then straddled the body under him, and the two of them sat facing each other like this, "Let my sister Dome take the initiative to sit on my brother's body like this, so it's okay." ”

"Hmm...... Very good indeed. Generally speaking, hot springs and baths are the easiest places to get off the hook, and if they are placed here, they will be more acceptable to the audience. ”

Declare in advance that Sen Xia doesn't have any crooked thoughts now, and the brother and sister are just discussing the scenes in the novel very purely, and then presenting them through the method of deduction, other than that, there is absolutely nothing strange about it.

"But a simple picture like this, it is really 'simple' to the point that only the aesthetic feeling remains, and it can't reflect the entanglement of the brother and sister under pressure. However, Yukino herself has a negative opinion on this.

It should be said that it is not a denial, but on top of this, it needs to be completed.

After hearing Yukino's words, Mori Xia was also pondering at this time.

yes, what should be done here?

"At first, it was in the hot springs, but after that, there were more cases. I don't think it's necessary for the brother and sister to play just for the sake of playing...... How about having them play like they did when they were kids? This can symbolize the siblings reminiscing about the good old days. Senxia made another suggestion.

"Ah, in this case, I think our previous life is also very valuable!"

Yukino and Mori Xia are also brother and sister.

After hearing Mori Xia's words, Yukino simply hugged Mori Xia like an octopus.

"I've always liked to hold my brother like this!"

In the hot spring, Yukino happily sticks to Mori Xia's body, such a scene, showing the beautiful family relationship between the brother and sister and the trust between them.

"Also, through this method, it seems to be more interesting than simply showing the deformed relationship between the brother and sister!" Mori Xia can be said to be deeply convinced of Yukino's suggestion, "When I was a child, no matter what kind of actions the brother and sister did, it would not cause strange thoughts to outsiders, but when they got older, some of the original innocent behaviors would deteriorate in the adult world." ”

Hearing Sen Xia's words, Yukino also fell into deep thought: "Yes, maybe what has changed is not the relationship between the two siblings, Yu and Qiong, but the opinion of outsiders? ”

Yes, perhaps it is not the Yuhe Dome that has been distorted, but the entire outside world.

"Yoyo and Qiong's behavior may be a silent indictment of the filthy adult world. ”

Senxia thought that might be good.

After adding such a layer of relationship, the main theme of the whole story is actually a torture of the dirty hearts of adults, which is an indictment of the world and a reflection on the human heart.

Therefore, the brother and sister are actually victims, and their actions are a struggle against the outside. Xue Nai's gaze at this time also became as serious as Sen Xia.

"But it's precisely because of this that the relationship between Yu and the Dome can cross that great line. ”

Because of this, the relationship between brother and sister has been sublimated.

It's not just impulsive or for some other reason, the brother and sister can be able to transcend obstacles, cross the invisible realm, and then go forever, and the feelings in this are very heavy in Senxia's opinion.

"I remember Mr. García Márquez once said that after a character is created, it is his own personality that determines his life, not the author. ”

Sometimes, maybe the author likes a certain character very much, but when the character's life progresses to the end, even the author can only helplessly let the character pass, and it is not the author who determines the role, but the character itself, if the character does not do this, then this is no longer the role.

This is the heaviness of a literary work, not that dreamlike Happy_End are not allowed, but in the story, everything is decided because of the character of the character, and the author's own wishes cannot change this load.

From the initial play ticket, to the later Rifan, and then to the current story, Sen Xia found for the first time that he had such a strong urge to write.

He wants to show the kind of life of Yu and Qiong, he wants to write about the life of the brother and sister, and he wants to present all this to the world like a dream, but such a realistic story.

Returning to the story itself, Mori Xia continues to think about what follows.

Yukino also let go of Mori Xia at this time, and then sat down next to Mori Xia again.

"Well, this place, just write about the two brothers and sisters playing. When the brother and sister grow up, they still play the games of their childhood, which in itself has a strong contrast. After saying this, Senxia stood up.

"Maybe we can learn a little bit from each other?" Xue Nai felt that since they were both brothers and sisters, maybe the relationship between himself and Sen Xia could also become a breakthrough that could be used for reference?

"Well, this can be used as a reference, if there is no reality to support it, even if such a plot can be written, this must make people feel very empty. "At a time like this, you need a scene like this to show it, and there are things you can learn from, and this effect is definitely very good.

"But I don't think it's a good fit if it's between us. ”

Well, although more than ten years ago, Senxia's physical age was indeed very small, but the mental age gap or something, there is no way to make up for this.

There are indeed a lot of good memories between Mori Xia and Yukino, but if you think about it carefully, that kind of thing itself is different from the life course of ordinary people!

"I think it's great!" But Yukino didn't seem to think so, "That's the most precious and important memory of me and my brother, isn't it good to show this kind of thing to everyone!"

"No, no, no, our situation is too special to be used as a reference. If I write such a plot, when the novel comes out, the audience will definitely scold me!"

This kind of thing, it's not like adding a special effect to DuangDuangDuang to become real and believable.

However, Yukino's opinion is different from that of Mori Xia.

"But I think my brother was great at that time!"

After finishing speaking, Xue Nai simply pounced on Sen Xia's body: "At that time, no matter how we played, my brother was very happy!

It's really a joy to watch my sister grow up.

"But these are two different things. The past of Yowa Dome should be real. ”

Senxia felt that it was necessary.

"What's so bad about having a fantastic childhood!" Yukino pouted, "At that time, when we were soaking in the hot springs, I liked to throw my brother into the water like this, isn't it fun!"

Because it's a pool, you won't get hurt if you fall down, and the pool is very shallow, so you won't drown, and when you are in the family hot spring, you can be free because there are no outsiders.

Of course, there are still a lot of games and memories between siblings, but here, both of them have specific thoughts on the hot springs.

"Maybe you need some games or actions that look ordinary when you are a child, but are very sultry when you grow up. Senxia struggled to his feet, then retreated and changed his mind.

"Is that so?" Yukino lifted one leg and put it on Mori Xia's shoulder, with Yukino's flexibility, it wasn't a problem, she put her leg on Mori Xia's shoulder, and then the whole person came to Mori Xia, and her body was attached to Mori Xia.

"Ah, is it Mori Natsu-kun......" The words suddenly came from outside, and then stopped abruptly halfway through the conversation.

When Senxia heard this voice, he instantly came back to his senses.

Standing at the door was Lihua.

"Well, it's an academic discussion! It's definitely not a strange thing!" Senxia quibbled in a hurry.

......

Really, this is a very pure, serious academic discussion!

What? You ask Mori Xia and Yukino to play together? It's nothing, it's just a very ordinary child's game......

Today's first update, this is the festival ~ (to be continued.) )