Although Sen Xia still wanted to chat with the uncle, it was just that the uncle checked out after returning from the mountain, and Sen Xia did not see the other party.

However, the other party left a note for Sen Xia, with the other party's message written on it: "Looking forward to seeing your new EVA work, a passing cartoonist.。 ”

Speaking of which, what is your name?

Although he didn't know the identity of the other party, this did not affect what happened to Sen Xia next.

The next day, Mori Xia and Yukino originally wanted to go down the mountain to buy some souvenirs, but the weather was not beautiful, early in the morning, it actually rained heavily, and as time went by, the rain not only did not become smaller, but became heavier and heavier, and there were two thunders from time to time.

"It's not fun to travel at times like this. The glass window was closed, and looking at the pouring rain outside the window, Sen Xia let out a sigh, "Uncle will come over tomorrow, can we only soak in the hot springs today?"

If they had transportation, they could have walked around, but in this climate, they really didn't want to go out, and they really went out at this time...... It's death.

"There's an indoor hot spring here, but it's said to be open at regular intervals. Yukino looked at the hotel's introduction, "It's mixed bathing time." ”

In some places, because there are not many baths, they will be open in turns, and men, women, and mixed baths are basically the same.

"Well, there's nothing interesting here......"

Senxia looked around, and the room seemed to be very ordinary, and there was nothing particularly interesting. Although there is an FC game machine, but Sen Xia really has no interest in the 8-bit old machine Qì, if there is a machine like SFC or SS now, he can continue to play, but Contra and Super Mario are two games, Sen Xia at least recently does not want to play.

"Then finish the manuscript at hand. How much can you write...... "Mori Xia thought about it, and started writing a drama about a girl falling in love with her sister.

There is no love in the drama version, so there are a lot less worries, and after Senxia briefly listed an outline, he began to write the script.

"Well, I'll start writing too. Yukino also smiled, then pulled out two pieces of manuscript paper and began to write.

"Eh, Yukino you still brought this thing. Senxia was surprised.

"Hmm......" Yukino's expression was a little drifting, "Well, I'm not learning to write a novel." Occasionally, I feel like I want to write something, so I bring a few with me. ”

"Oh," Senxia nodded, then picked up his pocket notebook, "It's even better if it's practical, and if you have any inspiration, you can record it when you're alone on the road." And it's convenient, too. ”

"That's right...... Hehe. ”

Yukino's smile was stiff, and Mori Xia was a little puzzled as to why Yukino was always so strange after hearing about the novels she had written herself. Is it because what is written is so childish?

It's right to think about it, Yukino is different from herself, she is a real high school freshman, in the novels written at her age. It's nothing more than articles similar to the princess being saved by the prince and the president falling in love with a working girl, for some in-depth and difficult articles. It's really hard to get used to.,So at this time,Yukino must be ashamed because the past articles were too naïve.。

Don't worry, Yukino, my brother won't laugh at you!

Mori Xia looked at Yukino with encouraging eyes, and Yukino's face ...... Well, let's just say that the expression is quite subtle.

Anyway, Sen Xia has already begun to work the writing of the drama at this time, if it rains all the time today, these times can always be used for writing, he thinks that he should be able to write about 10,000 words today, the script of the drama is not a novel, 10,000 words is already a lot.

Generally speaking, the best time for a drama is about 1 hour and 45 minutes, and the length of the entire script is about 10,000 to 50,000 words, depending on the script and the number of people. Originally, the school drama could be casual, but according to the instructions of the senior sister, they wanted to be "professional", so Mori Xia conducted it according to this specification.

"Hmm......"

After writing a lot of words, Mori Xia yawned and looked at the time again, it was already noon.

The drowsy weather outside was a little brighter at this time, and the lightning had stopped, but the rain didn't seem to have abated at all.

On the other side of Mori Xia, Yukino had stopped at this time, and she was lying on the table looking at herself.

"What's wrong?" Sen Xia wrote more than 4,000 words on his hand, and he was about to take a break at this time.

"When my brother was writing seriously, he was really amazing. Yukino smiled, "Before I knew it, I was fascinated." ”

"Whew...... It's almost time to take a break, and we'll go to lunch later. Mori Xia pointed to Yukino's manuscript, "How much did you write?"

"If you have more than 6,000 words. Yukino said as she handed the text to Mori Xia, and then she said, "By the way, brother, I think I can revise it here." ”

Mori Xia was frightened, Xue Nai actually wrote more than himself, but he thought about it, dramas and novels are not the same, and it is reasonable that Xue Nai can write so much.

"This is the first draft, and it will be revised later, where are you talking about?"

Mori Xia took Yukino's manuscript and then watched as the other person put his finger on his text.

"Although Mizuho is a boy, Maria had warned him not to show his stuff before, so I think it would be better if Mizuho at this time used a feminine tone. ”

In Japan, there are some differences in the pronouns and tones used by boys and girls, and although they are translated as "I", there are actually some differences. In the case of boys, it is usually "servant", and in the case of girls, it is "private".

As for Maria, it's Mizuho's childhood sweetheart.,The one who helped Mizuho disguise herself as a girl in the story.。

"Then this place should be Mizuho speaking with a somewhat hesitant demeanor and tone. "Yukino came up with his own Jianyì.

"Well, that's true. Senxia heard Yukino's Jianyì, and then added a line of annotation at the end, "Well, I'll see what you wrote." ”

Then he picked up Yukino's manuscript again and looked at it.

"Huh...... The writing is unexpectedly very sophisticated......"

Before seeing the article, Mori Xia originally planned to look at Xue Nai's writing, but Xue Nai's writing really scared Sen Xia.

The content of the first chapter is to tell about the things that Shinji flashed back to the past after the world has been ruined, and then there are continuous interludes and flashbacks in the article, explaining clearly the things that the world has ruined Miè and the things that Shinji "crosses".

"Even if I had written it myself, I am afraid it would not have been better than this. "To be honest, the level of this first chapter is quite high, and Mori Xia really didn't expect her to have such a strong pen.

"But I still like my brother's style.,I've always thought my brother is a genius.,Although some things will do some strange things.,But my brother is really good.。 ”

Yukino smiled.

Mori Xia did not answer Yukino, but continued to look at the article in his hand.

Xue Nai's style of writing is a little different from Mori Xia's, Mori Xia's writing is more frantic and middle two, while Xue Nai's writing is very delicate, for a stream of consciousness work like EVA, this delicate description is more important than Mori Xia's madness.

In just over 6,000 words, Shinji's entire character image has already been reflected in Mori Xia's heart.

After traveling through time and space, Shinji was puzzled and shocked at first, and then this emotion gradually changed to a different mood. Shinji doesn't want to see the earth destroyed again, and Shinji doesn't want to see the destruction of the qiē that led to his own mistakes.

The plot of this paragraph, Yukino corresponds to the plot of the last two episodes of EVA's TV version, telling a kind of detachment in Shinji's state of mind.

"It's really amazing. Sen Xia couldn't help but sigh again.

But after the admiration, Sen Xia blushed a little, he seemed to want Xue Nai to become a talent before, but now after seeing Xue Nai's article, Sen Xia felt that his cheeks hurt so much.

"Huh...... Wait a minute. Mori Xia looked at this wonderful brushstroke, and seemed to think of something, "This style always has a sense of déjà vu, and I always feel that I have seen ...... somewhere."

What the...... What the...... Where exactly?

"Eh?!" Xue Nai was still listening to Sen Xia's praise of herself with a smile on her face, but after hearing this, she shouted out in a lost voice, and then said in a panic, "Probably because I have read a lot of famous books, so I subconsciously imitate their pen to write, hehehehe......"

"Well, it's true that he has the demeanor of a famous person. "Yukino's talent, even Mori Xia can't deny it, "In this way, if the eva-retake is handed over to you, I can rest assured!"

If you can,Next, give this article to Ji Ye senior.,Just let her draw illustrations.,Since Qianjia said that Ji Ye senior is very good at drawing sister paper.,Then the sister paper of this novel will be handed over to her to draw.。

"Whew, that's it for now, let's go to lunch first. Mori Xia put down the manuscript, and then beckoned Yukino to go out with him.

Well, with Xue Nai's joining, there shouldn't be anything wrong in the second half of the year, it was chaos caused by a lack of manpower before, but if there is Xue Nai, it will be fine.

Thinking about it this way, the future is really wonderful, as long as it goes on like this, Senxia's ambition can also be realized......

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This is the third chapter of the supplement! There are still 18 chapters to follow!

It's time to catch up!

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