Chapter 8 I let you praise me

To write a story, you must first write an outline, sort out the context, and fix the details, which is also Li Da's habit.

Li Da never wrote an outline when he wrote essays in high school, but later he wrote online essays with a length of millions at every turn, and he didn't write an outline, and he forgot about the pit dug in front of him.

This is also normal, it usually takes three or four months for the author to write an article with a length of one million words, which is still a fast update, and if the reader is an immortal cultivator, he can read it in a few days.

So sometimes readers will also ask the author soul torture: Do you remember the summer rain lotus on the shore of Daming Lake?

In short, write the character design first.

Li Da decided to write a heroine-oriented essay, since it is for teenagers, then, the element of love must be there.

But the love of a man and a woman has nothing to touch, at this time, two male protagonists are needed.

A love triangle is king.

The character of the female protagonist should make people feel immersed, but the male protagonist is different, how good is it.

Li Da pondered for a moment, and then wrote down the setting on a piece of paper.

The male one, handsome, rich, indifferent on the outside, fiery on the inside, only loves the heroine to the bone, but awkwardly dare not say it.

Well,This kind of setting girls like it.,In fact, this character is the same as the gender.,Female,Beautiful,Rich,Indifferent appearance.,Hot heart.,Love the male protagonist to the bone.,But it's a tsundere.。

The point of everything is in the very front condition, beautiful.

Then there is the second male, at least he can be competitive with the male one, handsome first, gentle personality, sunny and outgoing, empathetic, and I also like the heroine.

The characters are the essence of the story, and when the setting is complete, they begin to toss their triangular relationship.

The first male is not good at expressing himself, so the female protagonist doesn't know the other party's favor, and then the male and the female protagonist become very good friends, and then the relationship heats up, and the male second finds that the male one also likes the female protagonist, but he doesn't dare to say it, and the male one also knows that the male second likes the female protagonist.

Only the heroine in the audience stayed naturally.

And the first male has an indifferent personality because of a reason that can be made up casually, and he has repeatedly withdrawn, and the second male has sensed the crisis and went out in advance, and the female protagonist is confused, and she also has a good impression of the second male, so the two became lovers.

Next, the male is in pain and has conflicts with his friends, so that the female protagonist knows that his true love is the male one, but the male one decides to study abroad in order not to hurt the feelings of his friends.

Although the overseas terrier has been used up in the future, it is really easy to use.

But on the eve of going abroad, the heroine who decided to face up to her feelings found the male one, and then the emotions of both parties were intensely cathartic, and they knew each other's intentions, and then something indescribable happened.

In the finale, the first male still went abroad, and the female protagonist told the second male with guilt, and then the two sent the male one abroad together.

What happened to the second male and female protagonist in the end, there is no need to say it explicitly, it is best to leave a suspense.

After reading the outline, Li Da was basically satisfied.

The story contains intense conflicts of love and friendship, as well as environmental protection, and more importantly, no one gets a good ending in the end.

The so-called tragedy is to destroy beautiful things to show people, Li Da still understands it very well, this story must be fine!

However, the sense of immediacy seems to be a bit strong.

Li Da became excited, picked up the pen and began to write with a stack of stationery.

The grid of the exercise book is too small, and it will be more troublesome to turn the page, Li Da has already thought about it, and when the manuscript is written, it will still be deleted, and then he will go to the Internet café to type on the keyboard and record it during the holidays, before that, it must be revised many times.

Luo Dongqing has been watching Li Da since he started writing the outline.

It's mainly boring, I don't want to listen to lectures, it's not interesting to play with my mobile phone, and I sleep enough, so I have to pass the time in a daze.

What's going on?

Li Da has entered the realm of self-forgetfulness, the thoughts are surging, the pen is flying, after class, Li Da did not leave the classroom, and then the class is a history class, Li Da got up for a while, and then continued to write hard.

It wasn't until the end of history class that Li Da finally put down his pen.

Don't ask, it's a sore hand to ask.

And estimated the number of words I wrote, which was probably more than 1,000 words.

High school students generally give an 800-word essay preparation time is one hour, Li Da is already fast, but recalling the days when there was a keyboard, Li Da is very congested.

He expected the story to be at least 20,000 to 30,000 words, all written with a pen, and it would be too painful......

But it can't be helped, who let him have no keyboard?

The handwriting efficiency is indeed very low, but Li Da has no other way.

Seeing that Li Da stopped writing, Luo Dongqing stared at the manuscript in Li Da's hand, and didn't speak, just watched.

Li Da felt a little funny and said, "Want to see it?"

Luo Dongqing nodded.

"Take a look, by the way. ”

"Thank you. ”

Luo Dongqing happily took it and looked at it word by word.

Although it is a draft, Li Da's handwriting is not bad, and some words may not be easy to recognize, but it is not difficult to judge the meaning in combination with the context before and after.

It's a bit short, though.

Luo Dongqing watched it with relish, and when he saw the place where he stopped writing, he felt very unhappy again.

I want to see the back, but Li Da obviously hasn't written it yet.

And Li Da had been waiting for her evaluation, so Luo Dongqing returned the draft to him and said, "It's interesting, but this man is a little annoying." ”

The second male has not yet appeared, and Luo Dongqing complained about the male one.

It seems that Luo Dongqing doesn't like that kind of domineering and cold boy, many little girls now like this one, and the female frequency even created a word specifically for this kind of male protagonist.

Evil and mad.

This word and horror dominate the male and female channels respectively.

Li Da smiled and didn't mind this assessment.

Luo Dongqing said again: "I think your plot is unreasonable, the male protagonist is so ruthless, and he doesn't know how to be polite, and the female protagonist is very patient with him, it's too unrealistic, and people like the male protagonist have no friends in reality." ”

Li Da's smile gradually stiffened, and instead of discussing the plot with Luo Dongqing, he asked, "Do you know what are the two kinds of readers that an author likes and hates?"

Before Luo Dongqing could react, he asked blankly, "Which two?"

"One is to post a comment after reading it, pointing out the shortcomings here, the shortcomings there, and how to write it, and the other is to only say that it is well written. ”

Hearing this, Luo Dongqing immediately understood, couldn't help but look at Li Da with wide eyes, snorted heavily, and then sorted out Li Da's manuscript and gently placed it on his desk.

"You said it made me judge!"

"I mean for you to find a way to praise me. ”

"Poof!"

Luo Dongqing, who was originally a little angry, couldn't help laughing.

Author, are they all so real?