Li Da just asked casually at first, mainly because he didn't really want to ask Luo Dongqing why he wanted to ask this question, just to express his shock. Baidu search literature network, more good free reading.

However, seeing Luo Dongqing's eyes dodging, Li Da felt that something was wrong.

Pull an erhu, what are you shy of

Then, he quickly understood.

The corners of his mouth rose slightly, revealing a smile that made Luo Dongqing panic.

"What are you laughing at?"

Luo Dongqing said fiercely, but Li Da bullied him, and after Luo Dongqing was so scared that he took half a step back, he looked at Luo Dongqing and said slowly: "I find that I like you more and more." ”

"You, you, you"

Although Luo Dongqing has been said this many times by Li Da, this is the first time that the two are facing each other and are still in a separate room. She heard her own heartbeat as if she were beating a drum.

And Li Da took another half step forward, and Luo Dongqing subconsciously closed his eyes, not daring to look at him.

In this way, it seems that he is ready to be kissed by Li Da.

Li Da didn't want to do this, after all, this was in Luo Dongqing's house, and Wang Xue and Tang Youyou didn't know where they were.

But Luo Dongqing is such a picture of wishing to pick up, who can withstand this

Li Da put his hands on Luo Dongqing's shoulders, and Luo Dongqing seemed to realize what was about to happen, and his whole body tensed.

"Holly"

Tang Youyou's voice suddenly came, accompanied by the sound of knocking on the door, Luo Dongqing was startled and quickly pushed Li Da away.

"May I come in?"

Tang Youyou's voice came from outside the door.

Luo Dongqing ran over and opened the door, but in fact, the door was not locked, and it could be opened from the outside.

"What are you doing?"

Tang Youyou asked, Luo Dongqing then remembered that she had also been here for a long time, and she also played an erhu, no wonder Tang Youyou would come over. Baidu search literature network, more good free reading.

"Nothing. ”

Luo Dongqing said in a panic, Li Da was expressionless, but he was complaining in his heart, do you look like nothing

Sure enough, Tang Youyou immediately asked, "Why is your face red?"

"It's very hot, I just played an erhu song for Uncle Da. ”

Luo Dongqing's explanation was very reluctant, but Tang Youyou didn't delve into it, just said: "That's it, it's a pity I didn't hear it." ”

"It's okay, I can pull it again. ”

"No, no, let's go learn first. ”

Tang Youyou took Luo Dongqing's hand and said with a smile, and then, it was natural for several people to go back to the study to continue studying.

And looking at Luo Dongqing's manuscript, Li Da also had a lot of headaches.

This is indeed the best version Luo Dongqing has written so far, but it is still a little short of Li Da's requirements.

Li Da has been an editor, and his review ability is no worse than that of a Chinese teacher, which is good, but not excellent.

It's just a little bit worse.

"You're still not emotionally invested, the story is actually okay, but the feelings are still not in place. ”

Li Da took a look at this story, it is a very common story of couples who fail to get together under the intervention of their parents.

It's a very cliché plot, but the more cliché it is, the more royal it is.

It is precisely because of the royal road that there are many people who write, and when there are many people who write, it has become vulgar.

To kill from many of the same kind, the only way to do this is to write your own new ideas and express your feelings. It may not be the best written, but it can give people a sense of brightness.

And Luo Dongqing's manuscript did not do this, mainly because of the lack of emotional rendering, and it could not resonate with others.

Luo Dongqing drooped his head, about to enter autism mode.

Li Da has not given up yet, he prompted: "You just write according to this framework, but you imagine that you are the protagonist of this story." ”

Luo Dongqing began to imagine that she was the protagonist of the story according to what Li Da said, and then

She was completely in the middle of it.

She thought of the scene where she and Li Da were beaten by her father, and the whole person was about to be autistic, and Li Da thought that she was just feeling the feelings of the protagonist, so she reminded on the side: "You can start writing and grasp this state of mind." ”

Luo Dongqing nodded and began to write.

And in order not to affect her state, when Li Da explained the topic to Tang Youyou, he didn't make any sound, but just wrote down what he wanted to write on paper.

"Thinking must be flexible, as long as you see through the intention of the questioner, these are easy. ”

Li Da once again taught the secret, to see through the intention of the questioner.

This is the key to winning the exam.

Tang Youyou: "I think the person who wrote the question just wants me to die." ”

An hour later, Luo Dongqing finally finished writing the composition, but Li Da looked at her eyes and seemed to have tears in them, and he was stunned at that time.

This is to move yourself to tears

This is also a common thing, if the author writes something that can't even impress himself, let alone impress others.

But Luo Dongqing's big reaction still made Li Da very curious, what she wrote

Taking a look at it, Li Da's expression changed slightly.

The heroine of the story is a rich man at home, and the male protagonist is a very poor but very good person, and they also have a female friend in common, and the heroine and the male protagonist were finally forced to separate from the male protagonist due to family reasons, and then the male protagonist was with that female friend.

NB, Luo Dongqing, are you also a white scientist?

Li Da complained wildly in his heart, but I have to say that Luo Dongqing finally succeeded.

She wrote it by substituting her own feelings.

No wonder it's so sad.

"It's well written, it's okay to pass. ”

After Li Da finished speaking, he put down the manuscript.

Luo Dongqing didn't look happy, and her mood was still very low.

And Tang Youyou also curiously took Luo Dongqing's manuscript, and after reading it, she looked at Luo Dongqing's expression a little complicated.

But he didn't say anything, just sent the manuscript back.

Li Da's task has been completed so far, and after looking at the time, it is already half past nine in the evening.

It's almost time to go back now.

He has no intention of staying at Luo Dongqing's house, if Luo Dongqing really can't write it, he will do it, if Luo Dongqing can finish it, then he will have nothing to do to stay.

It's better to go back to the codeword.

Luo Dongqing didn't keep Li Da either, but just asked the driver to send Li Da.

As for Tang Youyou, he was left by Luo Dongqing.

"I'll send you too. ”

After Li Da got in the car, Wang Xue also got in the car.

Li Da had no opinion on this, he guessed that Wang Xue should have something to say to him, so he would come to see him off.

As he expected, soon after Wang Xue got in the car, he said: "The boss told me that he plans to let Holly transfer to Junsha, probably, it will be the beginning of spring next year." ”

Li Da: ""

I'm going to Luo Holly to be a prophet