Li Da didn't expect that he would also infect Luo Dongqing into a white scientist. Baidu search literature network, more good free reading.

However, it is normal for Luo Dongqing to write this thing, because everything I have seen recently has become like this.

Many people will unintentionally imitate the style of the books they have read when writing, for example, if they often read Han Han's, the articles they write will be sharper, and if they like to read and laugh at Guo, the rhetoric will be a little more gorgeous, and the style of writing will be melancholy.

Of course, in the end, Luo Dongqing's manuscript turned out to be different.

In this version, the heroine bravely expressed her love, and the female supporting actress also chose to silently bless because she valued their feelings more.

In the end, the female protagonist and the male protagonist were happily together.

Looking at Luo Dongqing's outline, Li Da had a feeling of seeing Bai Xue's peers.

Luo Dongqing, this is simply an option for Bai Xue to break the game.

In a love triangle, as long as everyone is brave and sticks to their hearts, at least two people will be happy, and once someone can't keep it, the only thing they will get is the pain of three people.

But

Li Da quickly evaluated Luo Dongqing's outline from a professional point of view.

Because it was during the lunch break, he could only write his opinion on Luo Dongqing's notebook.

"The ending of the story is too idealistic, lacks conflict, and it is difficult to touch the feelings of others, so it is recommended to revise it. ”

After writing, Li Da returned it to Luo Dongqing, and then came to see Tang Youyou.

Neither of them slept, and Luo Dongqing's expression suddenly collapsed after seeing Li Da's review.

How to change this

She just wants to make the heroine and her friends happy

Do you want to add conflict?

The female supporting actress fell in love with someone else again

Obviously, it was a thing, but Luo Dongqing thought of Tang Youyou. Baidu search literature network, more good free reading.

Suppose, Tang Youyou fell in love with someone other than Li Da

hiss

Luo Dongqing didn't know why, so he felt his chest blocked.

Li Da is looking at Tang Youyou's creativity at this time.

The protagonist she writes about is not a human, but a dog.

The dog is abducted from its owner by a dog dealer, and during transportation, the vehicle has an accident and the protagonist takes the opportunity to escape, only to be left in a completely unfamiliar city. Because he lived on the streets, he was chased by the city management, and he was lucky to get the help of a girl who escaped the catastrophe, and then went through hardships and finally returned to the story of the owner.

Because it's just an outline, the so-called ordeal hasn't been thought about yet, but Li Da looked at it and thought it was quite interesting.

Well, this one could be called the dog's way home.

Manually funny.

Li Da thinks the outline is okay and the story is interesting, it depends on how she expresses it.

Li Da was a little curious, how could Tang Youyou open this brain hole.

He wrote down his confusion on scratch paper, and Tang Youyou replied: "Because I saw that some chengguan caught stray dogs before, I thought those dogs were quite pitiful, and I suddenly had this idea just now." ”

"Then you write well, I'm kind of looking forward to your story. ”

Li Da didn't mean polite words, he really wanted to see how Tang Youyou's details would be handled.

When Luo Dongqing was still distressed, she found that Tang Youyou passed it like this, and then she didn't pass it, although she was willing to admit the facts, after all, she had also written for a long time before she passed Li Da's approval and handed in the composition, but now she still has a sense of frustration.

I don't feel like I'm too stupid.

Li Da turned his head and saw her lying on her side, a bit like a puppy begging for comfort, and knew that she might have been hit, which was really cute.

"Don't be discouraged, I'm sure you can do it too. ”

Li Da poured a mouthful of chicken soup into Luo Dongqing, and Luo Dongqing was suddenly high-spirited.

After boosting Luo Dongqing's morale, Li Da began to study on his own.

In the physics class and chemistry class in the afternoon, Li Da didn't waste time listening, and kept doing his own thing, but fortunately, as long as Li Da didn't affect the classroom discipline, these teachers went with him, and I don't know if Fang Wen said hello.

Tang Youyou was also concentrating on writing his own, while Luo Dongqing was still stuck in the first step, still meditating.

There are three people in this row, and none of them study well.

The afternoon passed quickly, and it was time to go home from school, and as usual, the three of them walked together for a while, and then went home.

When Tang Youyou arrived home, she saw that her parents were at home, so she told them the good news.

Li Yu and Tang Weiguo were both sitting on the sofa, and when they heard Tang Youyou say that they had passed the preliminary round of the New Thinking Essay, Li Yu immediately sat up straight and exclaimed: "You are so good, I heard that the topic this time is very difficult, and the pass rate is very low, and only four of us have passed the whole grade of the first middle school." ”

Hearing this, Tang Youyou also felt a little proud in his heart.

"There are only two of them in our school, and they are all in our class. ”

Li Yu took the opportunity to ask: "Who else is there?"

She just asked casually, and she didn't expect to know herself.

"Li Da, the other one is Li Da. ”

Li Yu: ""

Tang Weiguo: ""

"You just said that when you take the next exam, you guys are going to go together"

Tang Weiguo's whole person became vigilant, this is the natural vigilance of growing cabbage against wild boars.

Tang Youyou didn't think too much, so he said, "Yes, Teacher Fang said that he would take us there." ”

"Don't you need a parent to accompany this?"

Li Yu was still a little worried, although Tang Youyou had never been to other places, she felt that there was no need to be too nervous.

"You two are very busy, one is the head teacher of the graduating class, and the other is the big leader who socializes all year round, where is the time. ”

"Where are the big leaders, the small leaders. ”

Tang Weiguo also knew that Tang Youyou was ridiculing him.

"Yoyo, don't worry, I will definitely ask for leave to accompany you then. ”

Tang Youyou: ""

In other words, it's not necessary

However, since Tang Weiguo was not at ease, she would not dissuade her. Tang Youyou felt that Li Da definitely didn't need to be accompanied by his parents.

That's the difference between a boy and a girl.

Boys go out to play, don't come home in the middle of the night, just say it.

If a girl goes out to play and doesn't arrive home at ten o'clock, the parents will be anxious.

If you don't come home at night, the problem is even more serious.

It's the same with going out.

After Li Da went home, he didn't even call home, he forgot about it at all.

On the other side, Luo Dongqing returned home and was just about to go back to rest, when he saw a strange woman wearing a lady's suit and a short skirt in uniform at the door.

"Holly, let me introduce you, this is Lin Li, who is also here to take care of you, and at the same time to help you with your homework, you can call her Sister Li. ”

Wang Xue said with a smile, she asked Luo Dongqing to call her sister, but she didn't want to repeat the mistakes of the past, it was because Gu Liuying asked Luo Dongqing to call her Aunt Xue when she introduced her, and now she is still an aunt

It's just the age of an older sister