"Like last time, you can take a look and talk about what you think. ”

From Yang Lin sending this material to everyone's hands, the delicate students can guess that this material must be a negative example.

If it is used as a model, it is completely possible to name this student and let this student accept the worship of other students.

But no.

When they read this article, they are more convinced of what they think.

It really doesn't look like it was written by a high school student.

"Let me start by saying that the material in your hand is not a template, it has an obvious error, I don't know if you can see it. ”

"You don't have to guess who wrote it, it's made a copy and everyone sends a copy to avoid you guessing. ”

Yang Lin guessed the little Jiujiu in their hearts, and also stopped a group of people from exploring.

But there were people who jumped out in a hurry.

"Teacher, I think this article is very good, whether it is logic or writing, I don't think most people can write such a good article. ”

The people who jumped out didn't surprise them.

Jenny Liu.

Some people were just suspicious of her words just now, but now they are sure that the material at the moment is from Liu Jenny. Otherwise, a person like her who only seeks "profit" really doesn't think she is someone who will stand up for anyone.

"Jenny Liu said that this article is first-class in terms of logic and writing, which I do not deny. Yang Lin said, "But this material is missing the most important and core point." If you don't write this correctly, even if you write it wildly, your score will not be high. ”

"Who knows what that is?"

Mo Meng answered lightly: "Idea." ”

Not an interrogative sentence but a declarative sentence.

"Yes, classmates, it's the idea!" Yang Lin's tone was very excited, "The idea of an article is the soul of the article! Your soul is lost, the article is the walking dead! No matter how rigorous your logic is, no matter how gorgeous your rhetoric is, it is just a beautiful makeup for the dead, and by the way, explain how reasonable the death of this corpse is." But in the end, it's dead. ”

They rarely saw Yang Lin so excited, even angry. Su Tang also saw in her anger that hatred of iron does not become steel, and it seemed that this fierce emotion was not aimed at this material, but the student who wrote this material.

Who is it?

If the material in his hand is discarded by Yang Lin's intention, Su Tang feels that it is really well written. The emotions are sincere and full, but the values conveyed do not agree.

The material is centered on a small incident experienced by the author. It's about TA going to visit his company's company and meeting someone who comes to give gifts. This would have been the beginning of a good story, and TA could have written that the gift giver could not have been successful, and the giver was educated. Elevate the mind and carry forward the principle of being well-off.

But in the material, this person gave a successful gift. And the author writes a lot about this matter, TA "sees the big from the small", thinks that this society is also so dark, and conveys a lot of negative energy.

In such an article, it is estimated that no one will agree with the three views it conveys.

Regardless of whether this article was written by Jenny Liu or not, just by standing up and speaking just now, it can be shown that this person's three views are not much different from the three views of the author of this material.

They are all unrighteous people.

The students below were silent, and no one dared to speak at this time.

Yang Lin paused for a while and continued to lecture.

"We are generally divided into three classes. The first class, combined with the original meaning of the topic, elevates the mind. The second class, not digression. Third, I digress and express negative, dark, and unoptimistic thoughts! I don't care what dissatisfaction you have with this society and what opinions you have to mention. I'll put it here, the college entrance examination affects you, and this society can't be shaken because of one of your essays. Students. ”

Yang Lin said earnestly: "The title of the essay is to let you express your true feelings, but you don't have to be so upright." You want to spread positive energy and ideas that are in line with your core values. I admit that it is well written, but I can only give you 0 out of 60. ”

"Teacher. When she stood up, she looked at Liu Jenny and said, "If you can't express your true feelings and pretend feelings, will you still move the teacher?" Since you can't get a high score, why can't you express your true feelings?"

"Yes, teacher. Jenny Liu echoed, "Our students symbolize the future, if the school only serves as a training instrument, and the students who teach it are like robots, without their own thoughts, then how can this society progress." What future can we have?"

Jenny Liu's righteous indignation startled everyone, no one thought that it could go from an essay to such a serious point.

"Isn't there a difference between a score of 0 and a score of 20?" Yang Lin is used to being gentle, this is the first time she has lost her temper, and her voice is also thin. The power is like the spring rain hitting the face, and there is no threat at all.

The students were respectful, but they were also frightened by her first anger.

Anyone with a little emotional intelligence should choose to shut up at this time. But Jenny Yoo's low emotional intelligence is notoriously high in school.

"Teacher, if I have a choice, I am willing to keep my mind to myself. 0 points is 0 points, and I believe that 0 points in the college entrance examination will become my future star. Become my sword to overcome obstacles and fight against power!"

Su Tang pinched her ears, she couldn't bear it from the beginning when Zhou Qing spoke, and this time Liu Zhenni's speech completely made her unable to sit still.

"Teacher Yang's meaning is not to make you lose yourself, but to know how to keep your edge when the time is right. Su Tang didn't get up when she spoke, she didn't even look at Liu Erren, she said, "What do you say to change the future and change the existing status quo of society." As far as you are doing now, thank God for not going out and causing evil. ”

"Su Tang, what are you talking about, let's talk, it's your turn to be a little lady......"

The little sister had already reached her lips, and she swallowed it stiffly. The current Su Tang doesn't look ostentatious at all, and he doesn't look like a little sister. If Liu Zhenni said this, it could only make people look down on her.

So she changed her tone and said, "It's not your turn to speak!"

"Every group in this society has the right to speak, and if you now prohibit a student who is not good at studying to speak, then can I understand that if you are in a high position of power and fame in the future, you will also oppose my speech today, and oppose the voice of thousands of people who have no status and no power in this society?"

Su Tang's words were sharp, and her eyes looked directly at Liu Jenny.