Chapter 11 Teach tips to top students
Xiao Xiaoren is as her name suggests, a small one, about one and a half meters tall, Li Da stood in front of her, and was directly more than a head taller.
"School Committee, let me help you!"
Xiao Xiao is a member of the study committee, which naturally became her nickname, and ten years later, Li Da mentioned her and also called the school committee, but there was relatively little contact.
Although there are many high school classmates, the friends who will really keep in touch with each other, that is, the single digits, and then more detailed, it may be possible to count them on one hand, and it is even more impossible for male and female classmates to keep in touch all the time, but occasionally at class reunions, someone is mentioned.
Xiao Xiao, the school committee, is a person who is often mentioned, there are a lot of people who like her, Li Da has a little friend who likes her very much, however, Xiao Xiao is a scholar, and it is estimated that he only studies in his heart, but it is a pity, and later he played abnormally in the college entrance examination, and he did not choose to repeat, a key candidate with 985 and 211 strength, and he went to the second book.
Later, every time Xiao Xiao was mentioned in the chat, there were always people who sighed and sighed, thinking that she was a pity.
Li Da looks at Xiao Xiao now, but he thinks in his heart, the school committee looks like a primary school student, do people who like her want to commit crimes?
"No need. ”
Xiao Xiao refused a little shyly, but Li Da directly lifted her bucket of water, and now, he was more relaxed.
"Let's go!"
"Thank you. ”
Xiao Xiao thanked him, and then obediently followed Li Da's side, and after walking for a while, Li Da heard what she was thinking, and couldn't help but say curiously: "School Committee, what are you talking about?
"Well, I'm in the Back Orchid Pavilion Gathering Order. ”
Xiao Xiao was a little embarrassed and said, Li Da was helping her carry water, but she was endorsing.
Li Da was speechless, this is too hard!
"It's not good that you've been studying, learning still has to be a combination of work and rest, moderately relaxed, and it's not necessarily a good thing to keep tightening a string. ”
Li Da admonished that Xiao Xiao did not repeat it after that, maybe it was too much pressure.
"I know, it's just that I can't memorize this all the time, and I'm going to take the exam in a while. ”
Xiao Xiao explained that language is her weakest item, especially poetry and modern literature appreciation, poetry appreciation, which gave her a headache, so she had to spend more time on language.
However, she can easily memorize mathematical formulas, physics formulas, and chemical formulas, but it is difficult to memorize a poem.
Li Da thought for a while and said, "School Committee, don't you know how to sing, and you don't listen to songs often?"
"What does this have to do with memorizing texts?"
Xiao Xiao looked dazed, but Li Da put down the bucket and explained: "Ancient poems and songs all have rhythm, as long as you find that flat sense of rhythm, it will be easy, and the ancient text pays attention to neatness, sentence to sentence, so it is easy to remember." ”
Li Da still has a lot of say in this regard, he learns the Lanting collection for one day, and the next day he can recite it fluently, probably after reading it two or three times, he starts to try to memorize it, and he can recite it after two or three times. That's his talent.
Even now, he can't memorize the full text, but he still remembers most of it.
"For example, in the second paragraph, the sky is clear, the wind is smooth, looking up at the vastness of the universe, looking down at the victory of the category, do you feel it?"
Xiao Xiao looked confused, but Li Da said: "Your bedroom has arrived, slowly come to your senses!"
Li Da is naturally inconvenient to send her upstairs, at this time, the girls should be taking a bath or something, if Li Da sees something, it is not good.
Therefore, the little man Xiao Xiao went upstairs with difficulty on the water, as for what Li Da said, she understood, but ......
She still couldn't.
She couldn't find the sense of rhythm, but she remembered the battle.
In fact, Li Da also has a small routine of reciting ancient texts, that is, he translates this ancient text by himself, and then remembers what he is talking about, and then deduces the meaning of the ancient text according to this content, so that he can not only exercise his ancient translation ability, but also accelerate his recitation efficiency.
casually helped Xiao Xiao a little, Li Da was also in a happy mood, the previous people taught to help others for fun, but with the advent of the information age, helping others is naturally a thing of the past.
However, Li Da still felt that it was best to help.
There is no need to verify the correctness of this idea, anyway, there are always different opinions, in short, Li Da is already such a character.
After taking a hot shower, Li Da went back to the classroom to continue writing.
He will work hard when he is stimulated, and today's mustard has stimulated him, so he must hurry up and make money.
According to his own beginning, Li Da estimated a little that it would take about 30,000 words to write the whole story, which greatly exceeded the submission requirements of others.
10,000 words is already the limit of the other party.
However, Li Da has written about 2,000 words, and the second male has not yet appeared, and it is expected to write about the entanglement of the three, at least after 10,000 words, and then write about the painful struggle in the middle, it will be a few thousand words smaller, according to the habits of online writers, even tens of thousands of words, and then the final ending, it will also be 10,000 words.
Li Da calculated 30,000 words, which has already been compressed.
However, it is still too long.
The habit of long-form authors is still difficult to break, and they always like to write in detail.
This is also a question that Li Da suddenly thought of now, he must compress it again, otherwise he will write hi, and in the end, people don't want it, how much energy he has to waste.
This is actually the most difficult, let Li Da water out 30,000 words of content from 10,000 words, Li Da can do it, but compress 30,000 words to 10,000 words, which is a bit of a mentality.
However, when I think of making money, my mentality has to be compressed.
In the end, Li Da began to cut the whole story, which is divided into five parts, the first two parts, which write about the complex relationship between the three people, the third part, which enters the green stage, the fourth part climaxes, and the fifth part ends.
Each part is 2,000 words, and the fifth part is as little as possible, which is redundant.
Li Da wants to try to keep the article no more than 10,000 words, and there must be some leeway to come out.
With this framework, Li Da did not directly delete the previous ones, and continued to write, but the writing was more strict, and the small plots were also deleted as much as possible, and a lot of emotions were written with a little bit of plot.
Luo Dongqing is a day student, and now he has gone home, so in this back row, it is Li Da's world alone, he is completely devoted to writing, writing that the male one secretly kissed the sleeping female protagonist, and was seen by the second male, and the second male confessed directly to this part, Li Da felt that his hands were not his own.
However, when I look back, I feel that my words and expressions are very good.
Perfect, it will be finished tomorrow.
Li Da planned it, one draft in two days, and then spent one day revising, and the time to consider the class can be graced to four days.
If there is a manuscript in four days, then he can make two manuscripts of less than 10,000 words before the holiday.
If he can pass, the manuscript fee of the magazine is 80 words per 1,000 words, and he can get more than 1,000 manuscript fees at the lowest price of 8,000 words per article (less than 10,000 words......
Poverty alleviation is just around the corner!