Closing remarks
It's the real end when it's over.,Come up and make a speech.。
To tell the truth, this extras were conceived by the original scheduled ending, and the original scheduled ending should be the ending of the single heroine who learns to the end in vain rather than the ending of the harem.
I used to think that the best way to finish this book was to finish after Yoyo sang a song to Li Da.
Li Da is with Luo Dongqing with regrets, so there will be such a side work with Tang Youyou as the protagonist.
It's a text, an extra, and it's fair.
However, later the author changed his mind.
Feel......
If Tang Youyou and Li Da weren't together, everyone would definitely be uneasy.
Therefore, it still gives the characters a harmonious ending.
And then......
I haven't been able to find a suitable node to finish it.
The plot is advancing all the time, and everyone criticizes the plot a lot in the back, but, according to the setting, the excellent Li Da will definitely gain the love of the girls around him, which is a trend that the author can't change. So you said I'll continue to write, Xiao Xiao and Su Qing can't escape, and my sister-in-law didn't run away.
This kind of urban literature, once the head of the harem is opened, and if it is not finished in time, the harem will really become endless.
It's not suitable to write too long, because if you write it, there will definitely be a Holly's emotional line, and then ......
It's too difficult for me to open a harem without being reborn.
What's more, when Luo Dongqing has matured, it is unlikely that she will have that kind of relationship that she can't let go.
In a word......
I'll give myself a score of seven for this book.
A perfect score of 10, barely passing, too far from the excellent.
If it had been done earlier, it should have been possible to give an eight.
At the end of the book, I also looked back at the previous content and reflected on the mistakes made in this book.
In short, strive to work hard in the future and write a reasonable harem essay.
Everyone complained about the sloppy ending, that's because of the urban text, there is no end to writing......
Finally, the middle holly was marginalized, and in fact, there was no way.
When I wanted to continue to write about the plot of Tang Youyou and Holly, the incident of Bao Moumou happened, and then the whole network was more sensitive to this aspect. As soon as I wrote about their sweet interaction, it was directly on 404.
But might they not interact sweetly?
There is no spark of love between men and women, and physical friction is indispensable.
It's also a chance meeting.,This book didn't become the best.,It's also the author's inappropriate consideration at the beginning.,If the setting makes the male protagonist in the third year of high school instead of the first year of high school,It's much simpler.。
Age will not be an issue either, and the plot can be more coherent.
It's a pity, it's a
When I wrote this book last August, it was too casual, it was hypothetical, if I had been born again......
Then, according to my ability, I felt that I would definitely go to college again, and I would take a good university entrance exam, and I would not be able to get in the third year of high school, at least two years. And then......
At the end of the day, we still haven't been able to open a global perspective when it's time to open a global perspective. I didn't think about it that much at the time, I was sloppy.
In short, everything is over, and it is too late to regret it.
But anyway, I have summed up some problems.,The next one will be better.,It's like a rollback.,In fact, when I wrote a backtrack,,It feels like it's more charming than returning.。
Unfortunately, there are still flaws.
There is still something to be done before true consummation.
Let's hope the next one will.
I have written this book for more than a year, this is the longest book I have written, thank you for your company, it would be best if you could continue to chase my new book, if you are not happy, then ......
Goodbye to the rivers and lakes, maybe one day you will see a work on the street again......