Some gossip
Let's talk about the layout and setting of the work. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info
The male protagonist who is full of force is usually surrounded by strong enemies.,The male protagonist with outstanding intelligence always can't help but be caught in a conspiracy;or dull or ** male protagonist is always surrounded by all kinds of beauties.。 Generally speaking, there are probably these routines. Of course, more often than not, the male protagonists are portrayed as a man who is both explosive and intelligent, sometimes dull and sometimes uninhibited. The reason why there are these routines is also in line with the sentence - no book can be written without coincidence.
However, the daily life I want to portray is the kind of daily life with a local flavor. As the protagonist of the book, Mo Ming, I deliberately wanted to portray him with fireworks. After all, most of the girls in Gensokyo are too otherworldly. Mo Ming puts herself in the trivial, so that the girls' lives can be more humane, and they are pulled from the extraordinary clouds into the mortal world, becoming like the daily life around us. After all, what kind of pattern there is, what kind of vision there is, and different positions determine the different content to see.
However, Mo Ming's attributes must not be as wooden as Mu Ne, it is better to say that because this thing is too agile, I don't even dare to let the girls show obvious affection for him, otherwise this guy will definitely climb the pole......
As for the genre of this book, it is estimated that it is unlikely to follow the stream of practice upgrades. When I was chatting with the children in the group before, the book was rated as "a niche within a niche", and I didn't believe it at first. After all, in my opinion,Although Gensokyo fanfiction is indeed a niche,But there are definitely a lot of daily books written by Gensokyo fandom.。 But then the reason was pointed out.,It's probably the protagonist of this book-Tsundere Lolita Control Mo Ming Master [Shenma, you say he's not Tsundere Lolita? Okay, I believe it.。 ],This guy is not going to get the superpower of Shenma.,That "running five kilometers in one breath" is of course a joke.,Even if it's the book synopsis that says "the ability not to be deceived by lies",It's actually not a superpower.,There's no guarantee that you can use it successfully every time.。 It's said that such a wasteful setting doesn't sell well at the beginning, but I think that's the best-case scenario.
An ordinary person, in fact, can't be completely limited to the category of ordinary people, but Mo Ming is definitely not a superman, and what he can do is also bound by the limits of human beings themselves. But it's this kind of daily life that can give us a sense of intimacy and substitution.
My favorite masterpiece "Ordinary People's Gensokyo" (unfortunately the author deleted the previous article...... otz), probably didn't let the protagonist's abilities exceed the limits of humans. Once you learn to use force, you will inevitably use force to think about problems. We don't know martial arts, watching the hero drag the angry bully to destroy the enemy, and then fire a mouth cannon, is that still the way of thinking and acting that human beings should have? Anyway, in addition to feeling unclear, we definitely can't have a feeling like "everyday". Compared to youkai, the strength of humans lies in wisdom and flexibility, rather than brute force that can be overcome by force. In order to increase the sense of immediacy in daily life, this is the reason why I insisted on not letting Mo Ming have force value.
Of course, there is a foreshadowing, the Shikigami of Hakurei Reimu, which is mentioned in the Black History Chapter of Volume 0. As for whether this foreshadowing can be used, what do you think? Mainly because Reimeng's level is too high, if Mo Ming becomes his god, good guy, he will definitely become a hanging sky. That's not what I want to see.
Let's talk about some of the principles of setting. Although it is said to be based on one design, but one design is too rough, and if you want to describe the detailed daily life, you have to add a lot of two settings to improve. It's better to set up two things, in fact, it's one of the fun of the East. But I'm not going to let this article get any "messy". It is impossible for characters from other works that we are familiar with to be included, because this will make the article read out of place and make a play. A while ago, I originally added the specific character design of Grandma and the plot after that, but I deleted it again, because Grandma has no name. Grandma is the character in the Oriental Young Lingmeng that we know, the name is not introduced, if you give a random name, it will be a sense of disobedience, after all, we have the impression that the name of the independent, strong and lovely woman is "Grandma", not anything else. Moreover, Grandma is actually a very good girl, in her early twenties, that is, independent, strong and super beautiful, I can conclude that with Mo Ming's character, if I meet Grandma, I will definitely fall in love with her. But here's the problem...... With Mo Ming's character, if you fall in love with someone, you won't run away. I'm not a lover of evil, although Grandma and Reimu are not related by blood. Then this article will either be reduced to an old virtual ending where no one is happy, or at the end Mo Ming and Lingmeng Grandma will be together, but this is very inconsistent in my eyes. Therefore, just because of the "sense of disobedience", I deleted the plot of my grandma's "return", which I felt was very brilliant.
The above is probably the more central idea of my writing. "Daily" and "main line" do not conflict, the main line is carried out in daily life, because of the existence of Mo Ming, a bug-level character, foreshadowing and the like probably can't be buried for long, this guy has been digging foreshadowing professionally for thirty years.
However, I think that the best part should be the various reactions of the girls in different situations, and this is the essence of what I think. Every time I think of the expression of the eldest lady when the second lady got up in the alarm clock listening to the eldest lady's "sister control declaration" and was discovered by the eldest lady, I want to be happy. Whether it's teasing the little crispy bones when setting up a stall, or arguing with Reimu, I think these are the essence of daily writing.
If you want to talk about the progress and text of writing, now there are more than 200,000 words, probably only less than the beginning, and I now have about 500,000 words of content in my draft, plus some temporary daily life, I am afraid that there will be no card text within 100 chapters.
Well, this one is a bit messy, there is no idea, I really want to write where to write, and some originally wanted to write but now I don't remember, so forget it.
The above is all gossip, and the following is the right thing [serious face].
Recently, because the weather was too hot, I escaped to the Internet café.,A few more articles were read.,It seems to make everyone think I'm back up and down....... In fact, I'm sorry to ...... I'm still in the pit period, after all, the graduate school entrance examination is also a lifelong event, and now that I have graduated, I belong to the social idlers, whether it is from my family or society, the pressure is still quite great...... So the update is still unstable, and when there is time, the normal daily update recovery time is still January next year.
I would like to bow and apologize to all of you.
By the way, sell a cute, eh ♂ hey [stick out your tongue].