The blushing thing is still very easy to fool the past, Tang Youyou said that she ran all the way to prevent Li Da and them from waiting too long. Baidu search literature network, more good free reading.

Li Da didn't think much about it.

In fact, he didn't suspect that Tang Youyou would eavesdrop, after all, he usually didn't say bad things behind his back, so he was naturally not afraid of eavesdropping.

With Tang Youyou joining, Li Da will not be able to beat Luo Dongqing.

I have to say that the way my girlfriend gets beaten is also cute.

Well, Li Da found that something seemed to be wrong with his mind, and he hoped that he would not go astray.

"Since we're here, let's get started. ”

Li Da has always been accustomed to the termination time.

It was the first time for Tang Youyou to practice with Li Da and them, and he was a little nervous.

Luo Dongqing sat upright, Li Da stood aside, Tang Youyou stood in the middle, and then performed on the stage, probably like this.

When listening to the accompaniment, Tang Youyou was adjusting his state, and almost at the same time, the guzheng, flute, and Tang Youyou's singing sounded, which was exceptionally harmonious.

This head drove well, but in the middle section, Luo Dongqing played a few wrong notes because he was not very skilled, and Li Da had always relied on Luo Dongqing to practice, he consciously followed Luo Dongqing's rhythm, but Luo Dongqing overturned, and she also overturned.

These originally had no effect on Tang Youyou, who was singing, she just had to sing, but because Li Da's flute broke, Tang Youyou also laughed.

OK, rehearsal together for the first time, roll over together.

"It's okay, it's just the first time, classmate Tang Youyou, please don't laugh anymore, otherwise you will break your voice, and I will laugh at you too." ”

Tang Youyou didn't laugh at first, but Li Da didn't let her laugh so seriously, but she couldn't hold it back.

"So happy"

Tong Xiaorou pushed the door and walked in, she is Luo Dongqing's guzheng teacher, and the class has been bought, although Luo Dongqing learned almost all of today's tunes yesterday, but Tong Xiaorou still plans to come over and have a look, after all, the money has been collected, and she has to go through the process.

Tong Xiaorou is very fashionable when she dresses up, after all, she is a music teacher.

Art teachers and English teachers are generally the most dressed in the school, and the other teachers seem to be more casual.

After all, math teachers are mostly bald, and you shouldn't expect them to dress themselves well.

It's already winter, and Tong Xiaorou is still wearing a skirt, black pantyhose, and long boots, which perfectly shows off her long legs.

Luo Dongqing, who claimed not to be jealous casually, suddenly lifted his spirits after Tong Xiaorou came in, and said, "Teacher Tong, we are rehearsing." I won't take the guzheng class. ”

Luo Dongqing doesn't plan to be proficient in the guzheng, just be proficient.

"I've already charged you for ten lessons, and if you don't want to rehearse, I'll instruct you. ”

It is impossible to return the money, and Tong Xiaorou is not comfortable taking the money and not working, so she can only find a way to make up for the class time elsewhere.

The teacher's salary is very low, and only small classes can generate income, so there is no way, just the right meal.

If Tong Xiaorou had a heart, she could still make life very nourishing by hugging the thick thighs of a local tyrant, but she was more disgusted with this kind of thing in her heart.

"Okay"

Luo Dongqing had no choice but to agree.

So, the second rehearsal began.

This time, Luo Dongqing did not overturn, and Li Da did not overturn, but Tang Youyou overturned, and in the last sentence, the sound broke. Baidu search literature network, more good free reading.

She sang very well before, and as soon as she opened her mouth, Li Da was a little surprised, originally in his opinion, there were few people who could sing Ahsan's songs well, and some singers deliberately changed their tunes, and Li Da couldn't appreciate it.

However, Tang Youyou sang it, but it made Li Da feel very comfortable.

Tang Youyou's voice is really blessed.

However, after all, she has not received professional training, and when she transposes the voice, she has no skills, and she breaks it directly.

Li Da said with a serious face: "I said, when you break your voice, I will definitely laugh at you." ”

Tang Youyou patted Li Da's shoulder angrily.

Originally, it was a little embarrassing to break the sound, and Li Da deliberately laughed at her, too much

But Tang Youyou wasn't really angry, she just wanted to hit someone.

Li Da is very good at making others want to hit him but not get angry.

To put it simply, this person is skinny.

Tong Xiaorou listened to the rehearsal of the three of them, and said: "It's not bad, the guzheng is a little jerky, just practice more, there's no problem, it's the flute, you are playing with Luo Dongqing's rhythm, right, you have to have your own rhythm, it's no problem to perform once, but if you get used to it, it's not good, you can't play the flute without Luo Dongqing in the future." Finally, there is the lead singer, the lead singer has a good voice, but lacks emotion, you sing too stiffly, and your skills are also very poor. ”

Our Lord cwas struck by the other side.

"I see you practice the flute and the guzheng together, and I'll give your lead singer a separate lesson. ”

Tong Xiaorou's proposal, no one objected, although Li Da and Luo Dongqing didn't hear Tang Youyou singing without emotion, they only thought it sounded good.

Tong Xiaorou took Tang Youyou to train alone, first of all, she didn't teach Tang Youyou how to sing emotionally, but only taught her how to pronounce and turn her tone.

As for singing with feelings, this is relatively simple, just like reading a text with feelings, and it is good to experience what kind of emotions should be expressed by yourself.

Tang Youyou on the side is here, Li Da and Luo Dongqing can cooperate naturally.

Time flies quickly, and in a blink of an eye, it's time for lunch break, Luo Dongqing is almost good, as long as Luo Dongqing is okay, Li Da can follow her rhythm.

When the formal performance is performed, there is an accompaniment tape, and Li is probably used to moving his fingers to the rhythm of Luo Dongqing when he arrives.

Of course, it's only when it comes to music that he does that.

When the three of them returned to the classroom together, Li Dacai said to Tang Youyou: "At the commendation meeting in the afternoon, you sit next to me and just discuss the new book together, you can think about it now." ”

Luming's efficiency has always been very fast, and the results of last week's exam will be released after the weekend, and then a mid-term commendation meeting will be held today. Crisp and direct.

It just so happened that the weather was good today, so you could bask in the sun.

Of course, Li Da wouldn't study under the sun, which would hurt his eyes, but it would be too much of a waste of time to do nothing and sit stupidly, so he pondered using that time to train Tang Youyou.

"Ahh ”

The two words correspond to Li Da's two sentences.

As a result, when it was time to prepare for the commendation conference, Luo Dongqing sat in front of Tang Youyou, Tang Youyou sat in front of Li Da, and Luo Dongqing leaned back in Tang Youyou's arms, looking very comfortable.

Li Da suddenly lost the mood to teach.

They were at the end of the line, and Liu Yang and Yang Yu didn't know what to do, so they came very late, so they simply put the stool behind Li Da.

They didn't know that Li Da and Tang Youyou were planning to teach, and when they saw this sitting method, they all showed ambiguous expressions.

But neither of them said anything, and sat silently in the back.

Tang Youyou was holding Luo Dongqing in his arms, feeling a little pressured.

Because there are a lot of people in the class, the seats are all wooden stools, the kind without backrests, Tang Youyou bears a lot of weight, Luo Dongqing's leaning on makes Tang Youyou even more tired, and Tang Youyou is always difficult to lean into Li Da's arms.

"Holly, you get up, and there must be an Azi who listens to the class. ”

Li Da said that he was not envious at all.

But that's it

Girls and girls are good, they can hug and hug, but Li Da and Luo Dongqing are not good, although Li Da is not afraid that his relationship with Luo Dongqing will be discovered, but he is not afraid, it does not mean that he should act recklessly.

It's not appropriate to cuddle in school, school is a place of learning, and if you want to do something, you should wait until you get home.

And then the two people behind him began.

Liu Yang and Yang Yu were relatively far apart, he leaned back and pillowed on Yang Yu's knees, so uneasy.

After Luo Dongqing sat upright, Li Da began to lecture.

"You've been able to publish articles in physical magazines, so what I'm going to talk about this time is mainly related to entities, but if you want to get involved in online articles in the future, this should also be useful. To put it simply, it's how to satisfy the reader, but also yourself. ”

Tang Youyou immediately asked a question.

"If I write a book, I should improve my writing and then write a good story, what does it have to do with readers, after writing it, there will naturally be readers."

Tang Youyou's speech is obviously a new speech.

Although this is a very reasonable sentence, if you taste it carefully, there are still some incomplete points.

"What does it mean to do a good workDifferent people will have different judgments on the same thing, what you think is good, readers may not think it is good, for example, there is a plot, you think it is necessary, so that the article can be sublimated, but the readers are very annoying, feel unbearable, what will you do"

"If it were really necessary, I would probably choose to stick to my own ideas. ”

"Very good, when you have this kind of thought, the manuscript you write will definitely not pass the editor's review, and most of the manuscripts will hit the street after the review. ”

"You mean I should listen to other people's opinions more, and if a lot of readers hate it, change it, and if they like it, don't change it, right?"

Tang Youyou felt that this understanding should be correct.

"Wrong, if the writer doesn't insist, it can only hit the street, and it may please the reader for a while, but it won't be long before the whole text collapses. ”

Tang Youyou was speechless, turned his head and said, "Then do you want to insist on yourself?"

So what I'm talking about is how to satisfy the reader, satisfy yourself, satisfy the reader, you have to understand what the reader likes, what you don't like, satisfy yourself, just know what you want to express, what you want to get. It's as simple as that, but it's something you need to figure out before you write a book. ”

Tang Youyou: ""

You can say that at the beginning

Well, Tang Youyou was just complaining in her heart, she actually felt that what Li Da said made sense.

But after thinking about it, what did I want to express?

I don't seem to have anything to express, I just feel that writing a book is more enjoyable, and then I see a lot of stories, and I want to write my own try, and I don't want to get anything.

Pure amateur author.

As for what readers like

How did she know that

Tang Youyou said she couldn't figure it out at all.

"This brings us to the point we want to talk about, which is the sense of substitution. The stories and characters you write should make people into the play, that is, they have a sense of substitution. The world in is illusory, and because it is unreal, it can satisfy the reader's fantasy. ”

"Yes, yes, Uncle Da is right. ”

As soon as Liu Yang heard this, he suddenly became energetic, and couldn't help but make a difference, and said: "It's like an urban rebirth text, everyone knows that people can't be resurrected after death, and it is impossible to go back to the past, but there are always people who think so, what will happen if they go back to the past." Then you write in it that you redeem your failed first love in the past and meet all kinds of beauties, and the reader will like it when you look at it. Of course, you girls may not know much about this, but you can probably change to a handsome guy. ”

He has been watching Rebirth Chasing X recently, and the protagonist in it has hooked up with n wives, all of whom are very beautiful, in short, it is very cool to watch, so at this time, Liu Yang spoke.

Li Da: ""

Have I given you the floor, you sit down for me

"If you were given a chance to go back in time, would you also go back to your first love?"

Liu Yang heard Yang Yu behind him ask in a kind tone, and said without changing his face: "You are my first love, where am I going back?"

The dangerous word on the door of Liu Yang's head disappeared.

Li Da couldn't help but sigh, this natural reckless man is really a show

"However, if there is a chance to be reborn, then I will definitely be reborn until I am six or seven years old, I have a small hair, now super beautiful, but when I was a child, I was very ugly, running behind my ass every day, I was very annoyed with her at that time, and now it is too late to regret it"

Li Da: ""

Liu Yang is handsome for no more than three seconds.

Now it is estimated that he will not survive for more than three seconds.

Big brother, you don't know how to write dead words, right?

"So you're thinking you can trick girls back to when you were six or seven years old, right?"

Yang Yu said coldly, whoever is has to be angry.

Who asked Liu Yang to step on the mine accurately

Amen, may you be born again.

Liu Yang finally realized that the situation was wrong, and hurriedly remedied: "Then how can I do it, I'll just say that." ”

"Heh, it means that you must be thinking about her in your heart, it's not too late, hurry up and chase her"

"Eh, how can I have you. ”

"It's not easy, it dumped me. ”

Yang Yu became a great onmyoji, and his speech began to be yin and yang.

"How is it possible, I will not regret it for the rest of my life if I dump you. ”

"I don't believe it. ”

Having said that, Yang Yu's attitude has eased somewhat.

Then Li Da listened to Liu Yang coaxing Yang Yu in the back, Li Da stopped giving Tang Youyou a lesson, and ate melons in the front row.

"Xiaoyu'er, I'm really just joking, I promise I only like you alone"

Liu Yang turned his head and was still talking to Yang Yu, and now he was almost coaxed.

However, Fang Wen had already reached three meters to the right.

After Li Da found out, he quickly patted Liu Yang's leg, but it was estimated that it was too late