Song Ci looked at Tong Jizhou with a question mark on his face, for fear that he would waste time, so he turned his head back to write the manuscript again, and hurriedly compromised:

"Well, let's say this article you wrote.

At present, the basic rhythm of the writing is no problem, it is very refreshing, relaxed, it looks comfortable, and it also pays attention to the setting of suspense, which makes people look forward to it.

Of course, the writing skills are also good, the writing is smooth, the wording is elegant and straightforward, easy to understand, and not tired of reading, which are all advantages. ”

Tong Jizhou looked at her calmly:

"But?"

Song Ci laughed, the young man really understands the routine.

She is as good as a streamer:

However, there are still deficiencies in the plot setting and character setting.

To put it simply, it's not innovative enough, it's not eye-catching enough, you know?"

Tong Jizhou opened a pair of dull and blank eyes, and the thick dark circles under his eyes were very eye-catching.

Song Ci compromised again, well, he didn't understand.

"Let's give you an example.

As soon as you write an emotional drama, it is easy to write about how good the male protagonist is and how good the conditions are, and it is especially easy to attract excellent women to fall in love at first sight.

For example, in this paragraph, the young lady was rescued from falling into the water, and then promised to each other. It's not that it's bad, it's just a little thin, and it looks bland, you know?"

Song Ci looked at him expectantly, but he still got a dead fish-eyed gaze, and he couldn't help but feel a heart stop.

This person is still too honest! Thinking too regularly, he seems conservative.

That's not going to work.

That's not what she's going to see.

"Okay, I'll be specific about my thoughts, you can refer to it.

This young lady fell into the water, it can be set like this.

As for her, she is not an innocent victim, but deliberately designed.

She is not the daughter of the prefect's family, there must be many sisters, concubines, cousins and cousins. 7 Q

In ancient times, the rules were strict, and the women of the official eunuchs did not go out of the door, and it was rare to see foreign men, basically blind marriages and dumb marriages, and it was like being reincarnated as if they were married, who should not carry a heart?"

Tong Jizhou nodded silently, indicating that he was listening.

Song Ci drank the rock sugar pear soup boiled with milk to moisten his throat, and then said:

"In this environment, when you suddenly meet a talented person like the male protagonist, it is easy to lead to competition.

It's like a concubine in the palace, all kinds of competition for favor, you know?"

Tong Jizhou nodded again, opened his mouth to speak, but was stopped by Song Ci.

"Listen to me first.

This young lady is one of the candidates for the heroine, so there can't be too many black spots, and even if there is, it must be washed strongly.

Under this premise, I would design it like this.

Miss was indeed designed by her sister to fall into the water, and she wanted to make a fool of herself and then go out;

But the young lady saw through the plan in advance, so she planned and brought the male protagonist to rescue, which was the later personal promise.

And the male protagonist recognized Miss, turned his head and left after saving people, refusing to be responsible, making Miss a laughing stock. ”

Tong Jizhou couldn't hold back and asked:

"Why? Miss's reputation is damaged, isn't this the life of Miss?"

Song Ci smiled unscrupulously, took another sip of pear juice and said:

"Look, you want to know the inside story too, right? It's called anticipation.

There are many reasons for this, so I'll just talk about it, and you can listen to it.

Miss and the male owner knew each other before.,And greatly offended the male owner.。

For example, the young lady was not in good health before, and went to Beizhuang to recuperate, and the male owner in distress came to ask for help, and the maid secretly used the young lady's property to help the male owner, but the defendant sent it to the young lady, saying that they gave it to each other privately.

If the maid has a bad reputation, the young lady will be implicated.

It just so happened that the young lady came to Bezhuang for the first time, and she was afraid that the slave bully would not be easy to manage, so she killed the chicken and set an example for the monkey, and sold all the children born to the maid's family.

All the property obtained by the male protagonist was confiscated.,Even half of the snacks were taken away and fed to the dog.,So I hold a grudge against Miss.。 ”