Chapter 56: The Second Package

For dinner, Bai Xiaosheng was just hastily eaten, ate some casually, and sat impatiently in front of the computer.

Looking at the results of today's work, Bai Xiaosheng was still quite satisfied.

"Lao Wang, Xiao Song, they really deserve to be veterans, this copywriting is really good! And the similarity is at least seventy percent or more, almost invisible, from the hands of the two, and there is no need to even modify it!" Bai Xiaosheng couldn't help but praise repeatedly.

But having said that, if you don't change it, Bai Xiaosheng still expects to rely on it to get points.

"I have to keep improving, at the very least, if Li Mingtong doesn't play a scoundrel, I can't find fault!" Bai Xiaosheng pressed his fingers and gurgled with enthusiasm.

The copywriting of the building book is, in essence, an extension of the planning idea, and the planning idea of the building book is Bai Xiaosheng's own.

So, it was easy for him to find something wrong.

"Red Lotus, give me this sentence and express it in an idiom. Bai Xiaosheng pointed to a sentence that was barely considered long.

"Okay, master. Red Lotus's voice was light and agile, and the corresponding idiom was retrieved in an instant.

Bai Xiaosheng replaced the text, looked left and right, and still felt dissatisfied.

"Find out all the idioms with similar meanings for me. Bai Xiaosheng thought for a while, "Also, I will also find out the ancient poems, modern poems and lyrics that can express this meaning." ”

"Okay, master. When Red Lotus responded, Bai Xiaosheng had more than a dozen choices in his mind.

Bai Xiaosheng compared them one by one, and finally his eyes lit up.

He pinched off the head and tail of a lyric and put it on it, and the effect was really different!

Bai Xiaosheng was very satisfied and continued to look for the next place worth revising.

With the search weapon of Red Lotus, he only needs to see where there is a problem, let Red Lotus search for the right language vocabulary, and then he can choose the most suitable one, which is as easy as a primary school student doing multiple-choice questions.

In less than half an hour, all the words were read by Bai Xiaosheng.

After the change, even he himself felt very satisfied.

"Complete the correction and improve the quality of the work product, plus two points. At present, the total score is sixty-two points, and there are still thirty-eight points away from being promoted to the manager level!"

Just add two points? Bai Xiaosheng frowned.

This kind of revision is difficult for others, but for me, it is the difficulty of a multiple-choice question, and it is really not worth many points. ”

"It's really unpleasant!" Bai Xiaosheng was a little depressed, "Do you want me to make it more difficult for myself?"

Forget it, you still have to get these things in front of you first, and then find a way.

Bai Xiaosheng made up his mind and began to adjust the design draft.

In the design draft, Bai Xiaosheng's part was plagiarized from international publications, and Ye Zi was copied from him.

However, after comparing it, Bai Xiaosheng quickly found that the leaves had been changed in detail and appeared more flexible!

"This little girl, what a design material!" Bai Xiaosheng couldn't help but praise, and began to revise his own ones and learn from Ye Zi.

When it comes to the application skills of retouching, Bai Xiaosheng only needs one thought, and Honglian will imprint the detailed steps in his mind, so that Bai Xiaosheng can be handy.

The repairs and modifications were completed in less than an hour.

"Complete the correction and improve the quality of the work product, plus three points. At present, the total score is sixty-five points, and there are still thirty-five points away from being promoted to the manager level!"

That's not much of a point!

Bai Xiaosheng smacked his lips and got up to pour a glass of water.

After sitting for more than an hour, he was indeed a little tired.

"How can I make it difficult for myself and raise my score?" Bai Xiaosheng held a glass of water in his hand and looked at the computer screen with a frown.

Now even he finds it difficult to find fault with these things.

"I can't delete it, let's do it again......" Bai Xiaosheng muttered.

But my heart moved.

Why delete it, I'll just make another copy myself!

I'll do it alone!

The more Bai Xiaosheng thought about it, the more excited he became, and suddenly his waist was not sore, his neck did not hurt, and he immediately put down the cup and sat down.

The idea of this version of the building book made today is just one of Bai Xiaosheng's original ideas, and he has another idea!

"No need for business style, change this time...... In a warm style!"

Crackling, the sound of Bai Xiaosheng tapping on the keyboard was like flowing water, and it was continuous with his thoughts.

This feeling is so cool!

Bai Xiaosheng forgot everything and devoted himself wholeheartedly.

Writing copywriting and designing, the second set of plans was finally made by him, and the progress was comparable to the first set!

Bai Xiaosheng let out a sigh, blinked his sour eyes, and glanced at the time.

Before you know it, three hours have passed.

"Almost!" Bai Xiaosheng looked at it again with satisfaction.

In terms of his personal preference, the second set is a little more than the first.

"However, the first edition is always the result of everyone's work, so let's use that, this is considered a reserve. ”

Bai Xiaosheng can see it.

"Complete the original work content, the evaluation grade is excellent, plus eight points, and the current score is seventy-three points. The red lotus's chime came.

Eight points in one go! Not bad, not bad!

Bai Xiaosheng was more satisfied.

These are only part of the building book, after all the work is done, will he be directly promoted from the employee level to the manager level?

Manager-level, just around the corner!

Bai Xiaosheng had just been happy for a few seconds, and Red Lotus's voice sounded again.

"If the upgrade process exceeds 70% at this stage, the system prompts that there are 30% of the remaining stages at the employee level, and the difficulty factor for you to get points will be doubled. This state continues until the next stage begins!"

As soon as Bai Xiaosheng grinned, he couldn't laugh anymore.

What bullshit rules this is!

"Red Lotus, you play with me!" Bai Xiaosheng couldn't help but exclaim.

"This order cannot be executed!" Red Lotus responded.

Bai Xiaosheng was discouraged for a while and turned off the computer.

"Sleep!"

Next.

Bai Xiaosheng, as usual, went to work.

When he arrived at the promotion department, he was surprised to find that Lao Wang and the others came earlier than him today, and they had already started to work, and even assigned the workload. If yesterday they completed one-third of the entire book, then today they are allocating one-half of the entire content, which is more!

"There's another fold to be done, and even though it's simple, it's not slack. In addition, our manuscript has to be overhauled, the style, and content must be changed and unified, which is a huge project!" Lao Wang said to Bai Xiaosheng.

"But I'm done with the revisions. Bai Xiaosheng took out the USB flash drive.

"It's done!"

Lao Wang's eyes widened in surprise.

"You mean that you changed everything from yesterday!" Xiao Song looked incredulous.

"Hurry up and show us!" the leaves were in a hurry.

Bai Xiaosheng opened the revised content, Lao Wang's head pierced, his head was on the top of his head, his eyes widened, and he looked at it carefully, and when he saw the end, everyone looked incredulous.

"How is this possible?"