The witch costume that Yukino is wearing today is different from the usual one, it seems to be new, and it is more delicate, on top of the white clothes, there are red trims, which is more gorgeous than the original white hakama.

At this time, Yukino was wearing the witch costume, and her long black hair was tied back and became a ponytail, but the feeling of this ponytail was very different from Senxia's short ponytail.

Against the backdrop of a ponytail and a shrine maiden costume, Yukino looks very heroic.

If it was a change to Mori Xia on weekdays, he would definitely praise Xue Nai after seeing the current Xue Nai, but after hearing Xue Nai say that he had completed all the manuscripts This big news, Mori Xia's attention has been distracted.

"Yukino, you've finished writing all the scripts?" After hearing the news, Mori Xia was still a little incredulous.

However, Yukino's answer was the same as just now: "Yes, I've done it all!"

"Eh, it seems to be interesting, let's show us first!" Qianjia said quickly.

"Okay, I've printed it out, wait a minute. ”

After Yukino finished speaking, she walked upstairs, while Mori Natsu and Chika took off their coats and went to the living room.

As soon as they opened the kotatsu in the living room, Yukino over there had already come over with the manuscript.

"100,000 words have been completed, it's really worthy of Xue Nai!"

After Qianjia finished speaking, she took the manuscript and then got into the kotatsu.

The so-called kotatsu is actually a small table covered with a quilt, and the table has a charcoal fire or electrical appliances for heating, which is a common winter utensil in Japan, and people like to sit in the kotatsu and watch TV while eating mandarin oranges.

Although the pace of winter has passed, because of the sudden drop in temperature now, Senxia and they seem to be back in winter, and Qianjia is looking at the manuscript at this time. While eating mandarins.

It's okay for her to do this, but it hurts Sen Xia next to her, and Sen Xia came behind Qianjia at this time, supporting her body with her hands, and only then did she see the content of the text.

But when he saw it, Senxia couldn't take his eyes off.

The script assigned to Yukino is actually a very simple part, which is the daily script.

In Galgame, "everyday" is almost the main theme in the script, not to mention 90%. At least more than 80% of the scripts are related to daily life, even if it is a very bloody combat story, sometimes you have to stuff a large section of daily life and college plot.

Mori Xia is no exception.,The first high school in Tennozu where Sakura Manji is located, as well as Sakura Manji and his school classmates.、And Katsura's daily life.,These are all there.。

But in Senxia's game, daily life only occupies a very small part of the script, which can only be said to be the icing on the cake. That is, more than 100,000 or 200,000 words, and the part handed over to Xue Nai is already more than half of them, or even all of them. Originally, the part of the story was very tight. Behind the story, there is no room for daily life at all.

But what Mori Xia never expected was that it was this part of 100,000 words, but Xue Nai's grammar was very good.

The previous plot is the plot of the Sakura Manji that has not yet seen the part of the prayer. Here, Xue Nai vividly presents the entire school in front of readers or players.,Through the communication between Sakura Manji and others,The entire Tianwang State School Park is described as "alive".。

That's a very good level.

in and after the section. Skipped a plot in the middle.,The next thing is the daily script of Kaji and Sakura Manji.。

It's a very warm script.,The relationship between Sakura Manji and Kaji is naturally excessive in the daily script.,But it doesn't exceed the requirements of the outline.,As far as the plot itself.,This feeling is really good.。

"Emotional depiction is Yukino-chan's strong point......" Chika nodded.

"Well, yes, the relationship between Kasai and Sakura Manji is vividly reflected through this daily life...... No, it's better than you think. Mori Natsu also admired Yukino's talent.

What does it mean to be "alive"?

When Kasai and Sakura are together, there is a very warm feeling.

I just don't know why this feeling makes people feel ...... Well, there's an inexplicable sense of déjà vu?

Yes, I don't know why, Kaki and Sakura Manji seem to have a very familiar sense of déjà vu in this script, but Mori Xia is very sure that this is not a similar fragment in some galgame or novel.

To be precise, I should have seen it "in reality".

But where? when?

"I feel that the level of this script is even higher than that of Mori Xiajun!" Qianjia said with a smile, "And the format of the script is also very good, this kind of content does not need to be organized, and can be used directly in the program." ”

"Really, that's great!" Yukino was very excited when she heard the news.

"Although Mori Natsu-kun's article is also excellent, in terms of this part of daily life, Yukino is even better. I noticed it when I was re-take before.,Yukino seems to be particularly suitable for writing this kind of warm plot!" Chika discovered this important point.

"Yes, because I wrote this script according to myself and my brother!" Yukino smiled.

"Me?" Senxia suddenly realized, no wonder he felt that this plot had an inexplicable sense of déjà vu.

"......" Chika glanced at Mori Natsu, and then at Yukino, "Is this really okay?"

"Of course not!" Yukino said, clasping her hands, "I've heard my brother say it before, Sakura Manji and Kasuki are actually brother and sister. ”

"If you are related by blood, it should be a brother and sister, and if you are related, it should be an uncle and a niece!"

"No, it's brother and sister!" "Xue Nai insisted inexplicably, "Sakura Manji and Sakuraman's real name are sisters and brothers, and Kasuki is made by Sakuraman's real name, but Kametsu's actual age is younger than Sakura Manji, so it's a sister!"

"......" Senxia is inexplicable, why can this kind of plot still quarrel, what the hell is this?

Mori Natsu was dumbfounded.

"Well, it's better to think of it as a brother and sister, but if it's the text, you can't write it like that!" Senxia stood up.

"Well, this relationship can only be hinted at, I know!" Yukino said as she nodded earnestly towards Mori Xia.

And Sen Xia could only cry and laugh.

Japan's ACG world,In the eighties and nineties, the atmosphere can be said to be extremely open.,Even in films for children like Doraemon.,There are that kind of girls who don't wear anything.,But at this time, the ethical outlook is not as open as that of later generations.。

In the 21st century, because of the complaints of parents, the art and gentlemanly atmosphere of the ACG world gradually disappeared, and they had to compromise with reality, but on the other hand, scripts such as "Brother can be" and "Only Brother Can" began to become popular, and in this respect, the atmosphere of this era seems to be open again.

But as Senxia feared, this part of the plot, which would be hinted at now, would definitely be controversial when written.

And although Yukino is hinting at the brother-sister relationship, this feeling is not obvious after the script is integrated into the overall environment, especially after combining the context, this part of the content produces another feeling.

This feeling is similar to "foreshadowing".,It's a kind of foreshadowing of the revelation of Kaji's true identity.,It's because of this part of the plot.,Later, when Sakuraman's real name appeared,The content of the article became more reasonable.。

"Well, if you look at it this way, it seems to be ......" Senxia nodded.

"Na, brother, is this kind of plot okay?" Yukino looked at Mori Xia again, her eyes full of anticipation.

"Well, it's totally usable!" Mori Xia gave Yukino a thumbs up.

"Great!" Yukino jumped up, but then she came to Sen Xia's front and looked at Sen Xia with hopeful eyes, "Na Na, can you let me write the script in the back?"

"...... behind?"

it!

Senxia was dumbfounded.

Speaking of which, he originally wanted to keep Yukino away from their creations, but why is it that now he and Chika are both rave about Yukino's works?

The corners of Senxia's mouth twitched.

"Well, you can, you can arrange this part of Sen Xia-kun. However, Qianjia didn't know the little abacus in Senxia's heart at this time.

She paused for a moment, and then continued: "I think the battle and the plot of the second middle school, Mori Xiajun is stronger than Xue Nai, if you can, it would be good to continue to arrange Xue Nai to play in the daily life and emotional scenes." ”

After watching Re-take, Chika has already made some assessments of Yukino's situation.

As far as the battle plot is concerned, if you compare "Earth Defense Boy" and "EVA-Retake", you can find that Mori Xia is better in this regard, his language is crazy, the plot depicted is whimsical, and the whole plot is described, without the kind of petty family atmosphere of Japanese battles at all.

And Xue Nai is very prominent in the daily aspect, especially the warm emotions between the hero and heroine, she is especially able to show it. And although he didn't say it in front of Mori Natsu, the kind of color in Yukino's language when he described the battle suit, Rei Ayana, and Asuka ...... Well, great.

"I'll find a way to arrange it......"

Senxia sorted out the current situation, and he still has 600,000 manuscripts on hand, and the plots of this part are relatively compact, suitable for writing in one go.

And it's only 600,000, if it's more compact, Senxia is confident that it will be all done in May.

"You can also add a part of daily life to the back of the outline, so that it will not make people feel top-heavy, and it can also create a sense of tension and warmth for everyone before the big war......" Sen Xia thought for a while, and then made a decision, that is, to add another script of ten or two hundred thousand to the text.

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Today's second update!

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Also, there is a fine oh today, baa hahaha! (To be continued.) )