Part 3: Summary and Leave of Absence
The third part is called "The Traveler", so I booked the style to be more relaxed, and the structure is very simple, as I said before, one person walks and stops, sees some scenery, meets some people, accomplishes some things, but is not very deeply involved.
Frankly speaking, the content of this kind of partial travel sense is still a little difficult to write, and it is not easy to create a character, familiar with a place, and have a sense of difference in customs, so I have to leave and continue to embark on a journey, which is a great test of the ability to quickly introduce characteristic characters and interesting events, now think about it, before Xiao Ke was promoted to "Secret Puppet Master", I did a good job, and then I was busy buttoning my buttons, there were too many things to write, and it was basically a revisit, so I omitted the past, relatively speaking, it was a little urgent.
I see that many people say that my outline is very detailed, in fact, there is no thing, I am detailed with a variety of settings, the outline is often what the theme is, what structure to write, which lines will be pulled over in front, what new foreshadowing needs to be set, which suspense will be unfolded, and then it is free to play, only to think about the outline of the next story at the end of a story, so hundreds of thousands of words of content, to think about each plot in advance, not only a waste of time, but also very dull, because if you don't really write it, you really can't know how this plot is, how to pick it up later, and on the way to write, there will often be new inspirations。
Just like when I wrote the scene at the end of the last film, when Xiao Ke left Beckland, there was a picture and finishing touch at the end of this part returning in the turbulent undercurrent, and there was also a reservation for my brother and sister to appear, and at the same time, when I sorted out the outline, I also had the mark of the world in the book, but compared to the ending, there was no more specific, and after that, when I wrote about the release of "Nightmare", I had the inspiration to bring a message to his daughter for him and present another meaning to the end of the trip, writing "Grossell's Travels" , began to set up the specific characters in the book, and when I got a Rune soldier, I suddenly had the inspiration to return home, and these together, I have a very clear idea of how to write the third part at the end.
The third part is bland, which is determined by its own structure and predetermined style, and I also said it in advance, and I want to see friends who have a big event at the end, and they may be a little disappointed, as I just said, what I want to create at the end is a feeling of turbulent crisis in the undercurrent, including Ince's appearance, including the malice of the mother tree of desire and the attack of the rose school, stretching these up, and setting off the picture of Xiao Ke's return to Beckland.
Well, in the third part, one is that the previous travelogue is difficult to write, and the other is to write two copies, the relics of the divine war and the world in the book, which is quite a test for me.
Friends who have read my previous ones, you should all know,The passages of the copy under the doom and the arcane can be said to be relatively dry.,It's rough.,Not too attractive.,The former is strong at the end of the dungeon.,The latter.,I thought about it seriously.,Probably the part of the dungeon that copy of the dream and the new world boasting about God's forced grid is more interesting.,The others aren't too good.。
In the first life, many copies have expanded into a world with the help of the infinite flow of architecture, which can be slowly written, introduced, and paved, and many times there are companions, relatively speaking, the attraction is much higher, but a few copies alone, such as the one in the Zhenwu Doubtful Tomb, still have the problem of dry and rough, relying on suspense.
There is basically no copy of the martial arts.,There's a section in the war-torn area.,There's not much.,There's nothing to summarize.,When it came to the third part of the mystery.,I seriously thought about how to deal with these two big copies for a long time.。
Based on my experience, I first decided on "suspense" and "companion", and based on my experience before and during the writing, I decided on "interesting", but I always felt that it was still a little worse.
Later, I remembered that when I chatted with Douzi before, I found that the creative methods of the two of us were different, I first wanted to tell such a story and a world view, and then finalized a few more characteristic main characters according to the story and background, and then slowly added new ones, he first thought about such interesting people, and then finalized what kind of story these people would meet, peers, and grievances.
Although I have been sticking to my own creative philosophy, I am also slowly incorporating some of his experience, so I wondered if it was possible to change "companion" to "character" in the dungeon, create some unique and interesting people, let them collide together, unfold some stories, enrich the content of the dungeon, and make it more attractive as a whole, and then there was an attempt at the relics of the gods.
The result is not bad, this is when I wrote a copy, the first time the follow-up not only did not fall, but kept rising, close to 100,000 words of content, has been very interesting to write.
When I arrived at the world in the book, I made another attempt, because the first exploration of this copy will be very short, and it is impossible to expand the past of the characters in it, and it will not be able to express their joys and sorrows in a very appealing and rendering way, so I am thinking about how to express it.
In the end, the title "Traveler" made me think that as a traveler, I can't go deep into other people's lives, everything I see is just an external performance, and then I will have different feelings, for example, during a trip, I see a girl drunk and vomiting and crying on the side of the road, some people will think that she really doesn't love herself, some people will wonder if she has experienced something sad, and some people will feel noisy.
Based on the fact that the joys and sorrows of human beings are not the same, I deliberately did not write about Groselmobet's past, to exaggerate their emotions, but only to faithfully and objectively and calmly record their words and performances, without involving their inner monologue at all.
If you look carefully, you will find that in that paragraph, I basically did not directly write about Xiao Ke's inner feelings, and deliberately left it blank.
Therefore, some people will feel a little embarrassed to forcibly sensationalize, some friends will be more sentimental, and some will imagine and extend deeply, trying to restore.
That's what I want to achieve, the joys and sorrows of human beings are not the same, and even more so in the eyes of a traveler, laugh.
I wrote a lot, and the big summary of the third part is that the characters and the story are well combined, but there is a bit of a rush when buttoning the buttons, and some parts can be stretched a little more.
Okay, the more you write, the more difficult it becomes, you need time to relax your mind, organize the outline, and you have to ask for leave again, and your stomach has been uncomfortable this week, so I hung up a number and went to see it tomorrow, and rested for three days, well, from this total settlement, it was two and a half days, and the fourth part was updated from noon on Saturday.
I'll update the characters later, so let's mention them here, lest I forget.
By the way, some friends guessed correctly, the fourth part, "The Undead"!
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