After returning to the dormitory, Xu Wangqiu began to pull the outline of the script of "Falcon" and began to list the plot points of the script. According to the routine of Hollywood commercial films, there are fifteen plot points in excellent commercial films. The development of the plot of a Hollywood movie will follow these plot points, and what should appear when is fixed.

Because the story is the same from the character mode to the story routine, Hollywood commercial films are considered assembly line products, and even criticized because of the serious routine. But the benefits of this are obvious, it can tell the story with ups and downs, and it can keep the movie at a good pace.

According to the classification method of the famous Hollywood screenwriter book "Save the Cat", "Falcon" and "Saving Private Ryan" both belong to the epic Golden Fleece type in the Golden Fleece genre. The word "Golden Fleece" comes from the story of the heroes of Iason and Argonaut in Greek mythology. In this story, Iason is sent to find the Golden Fleece so that he can become king. In order to succeed, Prince Iason assembled a team that included Hercules, the famous god of the time. They went through many hardships and dangers, and in the end, Iazon overcame himself and succeeded.

One of the characteristics of this type of movie is that a team or group embarks on a treasure hunt for a certain goal or some kind of reward. This team will go through many tribulations, will go through many difficulties, and in the end it is possible to get treasures, or not to get them, but these are not the most important things, what really matters is that the protagonist grows after going through the hardships.

Writing this type of script is familiar to Xu Wangqiu, and "The Rape" is a typical epic Golden Fleece type, and he also wrote this type of script in his previous life. As for the movies of the same genre that I have watched, there are even more, "Saving Private Ryan", "Ocean's Eleven", "Pirates of the Caribbean", etc., all belong to this genre.

"Lightning Action" was watched by Xu Wangqiu when he was a child, and his memory has long been blurred, and most of the plot has been forgotten. What he remembers more clearly is that at the end of the movie, the actor made a few gestures with his hands to measure the position of the enemy's artillery group, and then our army's 10,000 artillery guns fired in unison, and the Vietnamese army's position was wiped out.

This is not difficult for Xu Wangqiu at all, it doesn't matter if he can't remember the plot of "Blitzkrieg", he remembers the plots of many movies of the same type, just move the plots of these movies directly. But even so, it took several hours just to pull out the plot points, and Xu Wangqiu was busy until two o'clock in the morning before falling asleep.

At six o'clock in the morning, Xu Wangqiu got up from the bed, and after a simple wash, he lay on the table and continued to write the script. Since "Falcon" and "Saving Private Ryan" are of the same type and have similar stories, Xu Wangqiu directly transferred the plot of "Saving Private Ryan" to attack the radar station to "Falcon".

The Falcon squad engaged in an exchange of fire with the enemy, and during the battle, the announcer fell under the enemy's machine gun in order to save a little girl, and even worse, his radio was damaged. The radio is the only communication tool between the Falcon team and headquarters, and without it, even if they find the enemy's artillery group, they will not be able to pass the news back. In this case, the Falcon squad could only risk attacking the enemy's radar station, seizing the station from the enemy.

Xu Wangqiu was writing happily, and the sound of hurried footsteps sounded, and then the door was pushed open, and Su Bai hurriedly walked in. She was slightly relieved when she saw Xu Wangqiu lying on the table writing, but her face immediately rose again, and she said, "I've been waiting for you in the bedroom, but you never came." I want to come to you, but I'm afraid I'll miss you. By 11 o'clock, I couldn't wait, I was afraid that something would happen to you. ”

Xu Wangqiu looked at his watch and it was almost twelve o'clock, knowing that he was too involved in writing and forgot the time, he smiled embarrassedly: "What can happen to me, at most I will be robbed by a female hooligan, and I will definitely be fine." ”

Su Bai said angrily: "You are not allowed to be hippie and smiley, do you know that I am worried about you?"

Xu Wangqiu hurriedly took Su Bai's hand, asked her to sit down on the edge of the bed, and said softly, "I'm sorry, it's me who is not good." I woke up early in the morning, so I wanted to write a script for a while, and waited until 8 o'clock to enter the city, but I didn't expect to be so involved in writing that I forgot the time. ”

Su Bai snorted angrily and said, "I thought something had happened to you!"

Xu Wangqiu took Su Baidi's hand and shook it gently: "It's me who is not good, you have a lot of adults, don't be angry!"

Su Bai slapped Xu Wangqiu's hand and pulled his hand out: "I'm not angry, I'm just worried about you." ”

Xu Wangqiu stared at Su Bai's big eyes. Her gaze was gentle, full of concern. Xu Wangqiu felt as if his heart was soaked in warm water, warm. He took Su Bai's hand and smiled like a child: "Su Bai, it's good to be able to meet you." ”

Su Bai was originally a little angry, but when he heard this, his anger disappeared: "It's already twelve o'clock, you started writing in the morning, and you haven't eaten, you must be hungry, do you still have noodles in your bedroom?" ”

Hearing this, Xu Wangqiu couldn't help coughing twice: "There are noodles, forget it, let's go into the city to eat." ”

Su Bai chuckled and said: "You continue to write, if you have inspiration, you should write quickly, otherwise when the inspiration disappears, you won't be able to write if you want to." Give me the key and I'll come below. ”

After the school holidays, Xia Gang did not bring the kerosene stove and kerosene home, and left them in the dormitory. After Xu Wangqiu came back from the magic capital, he bought noodles and instant noodles to facilitate the evening meal, and the things were ready-made. Now that Su Bai wanted to cook noodles, he took the key and handed it to Su Bai.

Su Bai took the key and found that there was only a key on the keychain, not a pendant, so he said: "I'll make a goldfish for you every two days. ”

In this era, many people like to hang goldfish pendants on their keychains, some of which are made of plastic wire, and some of which are made of infusion tubes. Many ingenious girls will make goldfish for their boyfriends, and in the movie "The Love of the Hawthorn Tree", Jingqiu gave the third child a hand-woven plastic goldfish.

Xu Wangqiu heard that Su Bai was going to make a goldfish for himself, and said with a smile: "Okay, I have wanted one for a long time." ”

Su Bai smiled, opened Xu Wangqiu's cabinet, and took out the noodles. She dragged the kerosene stove out from under the bed, poured kerosene into it, and got busy. Xu Wangqiu continued to write the script, but Su Bai was beside him, he couldn't concentrate on writing the script, and would look up at her from time to time. Looking at Su Bai's busy figure, warmth poured out from the depths of his heart, and he really felt that it was a very happy thing to be able to meet such a girl.

After a while, Su Bai cooked the noodles, took the fragrant noodles, and put them in front of Xu Wangqiu for him to eat. Xu Wangqiu took the noodles, thanked him, and ate them. As he ate, he boasted, "This noodle is really delicious, I have never eaten such a delicious noodle, and it is definitely the best noodle I have ever tasted." Su Bai chuckled and said: "It's just plain noodles, there are no vegetable leaves, how good can the taste be?" Xu Wangqiu said seriously: "No, there is a special flavor in this noodle, which is simply unstoppable." Su Bai asked curiously: "What kind of smell?" Xu Wangqiu said: "There is a taste of love, and there is a taste of happiness." Su Bai smiled brightly: "Flim tongue." ”

said so in her mouth, but Su Bai was very happy in her heart, looking at Xu Wangqiu's appearance of eating noodles, and hearing Xu Wangqiu's words, her heart was also full of happiness.

After eating noodles, Xu Wangqiu continued to bury himself in writing the script of "Falcon". Due to the foundation of later films of the same genre, he writes very smoothly, and there is almost no stagnation. When writing that the female agent of the Vietnamese army held a gun at Yan Shuangying, and Yan Shuangying said the classic line of "I bet you don't have a bullet in the gun", he couldn't help but think of Yan Shuangying, who was wearing a black leather coat and was full of coolness, but unfortunately Yan Shuangying is still a soldier of the People's Liberation Army, and he can't be allowed to wear leather clothes. Thinking of this, he couldn't help but laugh.

Su Bai was reading a book, and when he heard Xu Wangqiu laughing, he asked curiously, "What's so funny?"

Xu Wangqiu held back his laughter and said, "There is a Vietnamese female agent who pretends to be a border citizen and goes to the destination with Yan Shuangying. At the critical moment, the female agent snatched a gun, pointed it at Yan Shuangying, and asked Yan Shuangying to put down the gun. Yan Shuangying said very calmly, I bet that you have no bullets in the gun, if I lose, then I will die, if you lose, I will kill you. Because I have a habit of killing someone who shoots at me, even if she doesn't have a bullet in her gun. ”

Su Bai didn't understand why Xu Wangqiu laughed: "I think it's very good, it sounds like Yan Shuangying is very powerful." ”

Xu Wangqiu said with a smile: "Of course it's amazing, he is equivalent to the captain of China! When I make a sequel in the future, I will try my best to make Yan Shuangying China's 007, and each episode will accept different tasks and challenges." In each episode, he meets pretty girls, and these girls always fall in love with him. ”

Su Bai pouted and said: "The story of "Falcon" has not been written yet, and I am thinking about the next thing, and I am also thinking about the beautiful girl. I think you want to choose a beautiful actress for every movie you make!"

Xu Wangqiu was a little unhappy in his heart, I was obviously very serious about sharing my ideas with you, but you just wanted to mess around, you like to mess around, then I will accompany you to fool around, haha laughed: "The parents of the one who gave birth to me, Su Bai who knows me, where can I hide this little bit of caution from you!" As he spoke, his gaze deliberately fell on Su Bai's upright chest, patrolling up and down, like an appraiser.

Su Bai saw Xu Wangqiu staring at his chest, and showed a rogue smile, two red clouds floated on his cheeks, and glared at him: "What are you looking at?"

Xu Wangqiu touched his chin, then shook his head and read: "Looking horizontally, the side of the ridge is a peak, and the distance and the height are different, it is really a good poem, a good poem." ”

Su Bai blushed and said, "Good poems are crooked in your mouth." ”

Xu Wangqiu said with a smile: "You always say that I am a disciple, if I don't become a disciple, I will be ashamed of the ancients." Saying that, Xu Wangqiu stepped forward, and before Su Bai could react, her warm lips covered her soft lips.

Su Bai didn't expect Xu Wangqiu to come over directly, and he was a little dumbfounded. However, after reacting, she only symbolically twisted her delicate body twice, and then responded enthusiastically. Xu Wangqiu's kiss made Su Bai's whole body hot, his face flushed, and his bright big eyes seemed to be covered with a layer of mist, revealing a sense of charm.

Xu Wangqiu kissed Su Bai a little angry, but when he kissed and kissed, he ignited the sleeping volcano in his heart and spewed out a raging flame, and a voice in the flame shouted, Xu Wangqiu Chong! At this moment, he really wanted to have Su Bai, his hand became extremely dishonest, and he reached directly into Su Bai's shirt and covered the soft hills.