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Sun Quan is reading Shenji's new book "Nourishing the Gods".

Shenji's "Yang Shen" has not yet been officially published, has not been published, and has not been published on the Internet, and the draft of this new book at this time, the reason why it appeared in front of Sun Quan's eyes is because Shenji found Sun Quan through QQ this morning.

Shenji asked Sun Quan to help him read his new book and give some advice after reading it.

This situation is very common among online writers, and many authors will find one or two friends in the circle to help them palm their eyes after starting a new book.

Because the longer I write a book, the more I can understand what it means to be a fan of the authorities.

When many authors write a new book, they write very highly, write proudly, and feel that they are too powerful, and once the book is published, it is likely to be superb.

Then the god of slaughter preached, earning a million a year, living in a villa, driving a luxury car, and all kinds of beauties were just waiting for leisure.

This is a delusion that many authors are prone to in the new book period.

So over time, when many authors open a new book, they like to give a few glances at the beginning of the new book to their friends in the circle, and then listen to the opinions given by their friends from the perspective of pure readers.

Because the latter sentence of "the authorities are confused" is "the bystanders are clear".

Shenji opened the new book "Nourishing the Gods" to Sun Quan for this purpose.

Sun Quan gladly accepted this.

He knew that "Yang Shen" was a good book and had great learning value.

And it's been a long time since he last read this book, and the specific plot and characters have almost forgotten, and now it's bound to be a pleasure to rewatch it again.

For this reason, he suspended the code word work in his hand today, and prepared to spend a few hours to read the 100,000 or so words sent by Shenji.

But looking at it, his expression gradually became wrong.

A little stunned and a little confused, he frowned and looked up at the ceiling from time to time, trying to remember what the plot of the version of "Yang Shen" that he watched before he was reborn was probably like.

But the last time he watched "Yang Shen" was really a long time ago, at least ten years from now, and the characters and plot of "Yang Shen" have long been forgotten.

So his efforts to reminisce were all in vain after all.

In the original version of "Yang Shen", he only vaguely remembered that the actor and his biological father seemed to have become enemies of life and death, Lao Tzu wanted to kill his son, and his son wanted to kill Lao Tzu.

It's just that both father and son are very perverted.

Lao Tzu's miraculous skills are world-famous, and his blood is as prosperous as a furnace.

And the son is talented, refining the body and cultivating the spirit, and his skills are advancing by leaps and bounds, so Lao Tzu can't kill his son, and his son can't kill Lao Tzu.

As for the rest of the plot?

Sun Quan only remembered a Wu steward and a champion Hou.

Can......

The plot of this version of "Yang Shen" that Sun Quan watched today does not seem to be developing in the direction of cannibalism between father and son.

The relationship between the male protagonist and his father turned out to be quite simple and warm.

This......

Sun Quan patiently looked at this version of "Yang Shen" with doubts in his head, he really wanted to ask Shenji - the relationship between the characters in this book, you don't plan to revise it?

If "Nourishing God" does not have a plot of cannibalism between father and son, can the plot conflict in the early stage be so intense?

With the plot of this version of "Raising the Spirit", the more he watched it, the more he watched, and the question in his mind gradually had an answer.

Shenji is really a little expert in pulling hatred and creating plot conflicts.,In this version of the plot,Although the male protagonist and his father are filial to their fathers,But their family still has a scum.,It's the uncle.,The big brother of the male owner's father.,Divine skills.、High power.,But I always want to destroy the whole family of the male owner.。

The reason is that the last magic power of their family's ancestral magic is inherited in the hands of the male protagonist's father and son, and the male protagonist's uncle wants to destroy the male protagonist's whole family, just to receive the last magical power of the family magic in his hands.

From the plot conflict of the story, Sun Quan feels OK, there is no problem.

But when he watched the plot later, he always felt a little uncomfortable.

Maybe it's because of preconceived ideas! He had seen the version of "Nourishing the Gods" in the original time and space, so he was deeply impressed by the plot of the cannibalism between father and son in the book "Nourishing the Gods".

As the old saying goes: Tiger poison does not eat children.

But in the original "Raising the Gods", the hero's father just wanted to kill his son.

This is the main plot that is difficult to see in most online articles.

Because such a plot will definitely feel highly toxic in the eyes of many readers.

Father and son cannibalism?

Few readers will want to see a plot like this.

But the cultivation system of "Yang Shen" is innovative, and Shenji's description of various fight scenes is also exceptionally good, so the plot of father and son cannibalism can be endured, and after gradually chasing it, it will become more and more deeply involved in the male protagonist because the reader is substituting for the male protagonist, and substituting into the entire plot, he will empathize with the male protagonist and share the same hatred.

And Sun Quan is watching this version of "Yang Shen" at this time, the male protagonist and his father are written as father and son filial piety, and after the enemy of life and death becomes an uncle, there is no problem with the conflict of the plot.

But in terms of unique novelty, it has faded a few points.

Maybe this kind of plot is more acceptable to readers?

Or perhaps, such a plot will make "Yang Shen" seem less special?

Sun Quan couldn't judge accurately for a while, and he didn't even give Shenji a suggestion - let Shenji write according to the version of the original time and space.

Because how to say it?

Tell Shenji - "Swap the identities of the protagonist's father and uncle! Let the protagonist and his father and son kill each other, it may be more interesting!"

If he really suggested that, Shenji might think he was a psychopath.

How can anyone suggest that someone else kill their father? Even the murder of their father is unacceptable to many authors.

Because when the author himself writes such a plot, he will inevitably substitute himself into the identity of the male protagonist, and writing about the male protagonist's murder of his father is no different from writing about his own murder of his father.

So, he can't advise Shenji like that.

In addition, Sun Quan watched this version of "Yang Shen", and he also had a feeling - that is, Shenji's ability to write fighting scenes seemed to have regressed a little.

He couldn't remember how the original version of "Nourishing the Gods" was written.

But he remembers that when he first watched the original "Yang Shen", every time he saw the fight scene written by Shenji, he felt his blood boiling, and he felt very exciting.

But when I watched the fight scenes of the current version of "Yang Shen", although I felt that Shenji wrote it very well, it was just a little bit worse than the feeling I had when I watched the original "Yang Shen".

Is Shenji regressing?

Or have I read too many books over the years, so my vision has improved?

Regarding this point, Sun Quan couldn't accurately judge it for a while.

The main reason is still that - he doesn't remember how the original "Yang Shen" was written, and without a direct comparison, it is naturally difficult for him to judge accurately.

From his personal point of view, he thinks that this version of "Yang Shen" is of good standard and well written, but it doesn't seem to be as exciting as the original "Yang Shen".

He was still watching the plot later, but his phone suddenly rang.

When I picked up my phone, I saw that it was a call from Le Chao.

Sun Quan was a little puzzled, why did Le Chao call him at this time? It's only been so many days, could it be that Le Chao has already changed the plot of "God of Fighting"?

He thought it was unlikely.

He didn't know that Le Chao had the guidance of Nangong Yan, the female frequency god, in revising "God of Fighting".

In Sun Quan's opinion, with Le Chao's level, it is by no means possible to change "God of Fighting" into a single heroine's text.

Connect the phone and hold your phone to your ear.

Le Chao's voice came from the mobile phone: "Old classmate! Han Li just said that she was going to break up with me, have you heard?"

Sun Quan's brows condensed slightly, a little surprised.

"No, what's wrong? You two quarreled?" asked Sun Quan.

Le Chao: "Oh, sort of! She came to me just now, I was wearing headphones, I didn't hear her enter the door, and then she saw the content of my chat with a female netizen on the Internet, alas! We men, you should be able to understand, when chatting with female netizens on the Internet, it's always easy to talk about flowers, right? Han Li just saw the content of my chat with the female netizen Kouhuahua, so just now she left angrily, and when she left, she said that she broke up with me, alas! I have a big head now......

Sun Quan: "......"

Le Chao's explanation, Sun Quan didn't believe it, but if the facts are really as Le Chao said, he can really understand that when he chats with female netizens on the Internet, he occasionally talks about it and is happy.

"Do you want me to help you persuade Han Li, or do you want my wife to help persuade her?"

Sun Quan was silent for a moment and asked.

Le Chao: "Well, if you can help me persuade her more, of course it's the best, I'll thank you first, thank you! Really, if I reconcile with Han Li, I'll invite you and my sister-in-law to dinner and drink......"

"That's not necessary, eating and drinking are free!" Sun Quangang heard Le Chao say this, so he interrupted with a smile and said no.

Le Chao said on the phone: "I want it! I will definitely invite you when the time comes!"

Without waiting for Sun Quan to answer again, Le Chao's tone changed, "Oh, by the way, the plot of my "God of Fighting" has been changed, and now she is a single heroine, old classmate! Do me a favor, okay? Let the staff of your studio review it as soon as possible, and then let's sign the contract as soon as possible! I want to get the copyright fee as soon as possible, and then buy a villa as soon as possible and propose to Han Li, don't you know that she just told me that she gave me a slap before she broke up with me, I guess I don't have something real this time, she is afraid that she is really going to break up with me, how about it?" Can you help me with this?"

"Oh, really, so quickly?"

Sun Quan was surprised again, quite surprised.

At the same time, I also estimated in my heart that Han Li's breakup with Le Chao this time was probably a little true, and how much could it be redeemed?

And also...... Le Chao was anxious to get the 300,000 copyright fee at this time, did he really want to use it to buy a villa?

Or is it ...... He just used this reason to take advantage of the fact that Han Li had just broken up with him, and he was afraid that the time would drag on for a long time, and if Han Li hadn't reconciled with him, I wouldn't buy the adaptation rights of his "God of Fighting" anymore, so I was anxious to get the copyright fee first?

Le Chao: "Well, it's been changed, my previous plot hasn't moved, but in the recent chapter, I asked the male protagonist to psychologically give up his feelings for the other two heroines, so now it's a single heroine." ”