Chapter 725: Setting

After the theme of the story was decided, Sun Quan began to try to write character settings in the document.

Daddy Wen, there are a few characters, which can be set in advance.

For example, Daddy (the male protagonist), how to set up this character?

Sun Quan sat in front of the computer, and many thoughts flashed through his mind, including the name and age of the male protagonist, as well as his family background, growth trajectory, and how the child came to be.

He had seen some of the children in the father's text before, but they were not born by the hero, but just picked up.

But he didn't want to write such a pseudo-daddy article.

Since you want to write a daddy essay, you will write about a biological child.

So, this involves the hero's failed marriage, how did that marriage start, how did it end, what is the personality, and what is the relationship between the couple and the hero?

Is it because it's hanging, so only the hero and the child are left?

Or for what reason, dumped the actor and the child?

Wait a minute.

There are a whole bunch of issues to consider.

And this is the cumbersomeness of opening a new book, every detail must be taken into account, otherwise when writing the text, it is easy to have bugs one by one.

Many times, some characters who don't have a chance to appear in the text need to be set up when writing the outline.

Because it could have to do with what kind of attitude one character has towards another character in the book, or something else.

In front of the computer, sitting for a long time, Sun Quan temporarily wrote down the following setting:

"Huang Shan: male, 26 years old, married 4 years ago, from a young family is acceptable, his father Huang Yongzhi is a pig killer, old to have a son, gave birth to him, before him, he also has three sisters, but because Huang Yongzhi is patriarchal, the three daughters and Huang Yongzhi have turned their faces early, and even with Huang Shan has nothing to do with it.

Four years ago, Huang Shan had just reached the age of marriage, Huang Yongzhi, who had long wanted to hold his grandson, said a kiss to Huang Shan, who had just graduated from college, ignoring Huang Shan's own wishes, and forcibly let Huang Shan get married, without a marriage certificate, because the woman had not reached the age of marriage, the reason why the 18-year-old girl married him was because her father had already passed away, and her mother was still young, and remarried, after remarrying, she also gave birth to a pair of twin sons, the girl's stepfather and mother felt that it was too difficult to raise three children, so let the girl who had just reached the third year of high school drop out of school, make decisions for the girl, and promised Huangshan's father Huang Yongzhi's proposal, and then at the age of 18, and just graduated from college, Huang Shan, who was only 22 years old, got married.

The couple has had no feelings since the day they got married.

The girl yearns for the outside world, for a free life.

What about Huangshan...... Because he was forcibly arranged by his father to go on a blind date and get married, he was depressed, he didn't like this kind of life, he just graduated from college, and he wanted to do a career, but his father's forced arrangement made him lose his vision and fighting spirit for life, he began to get by, and he was perfunctory to work.

But in the second year after they got married, the girl became pregnant, and more than nine months later, gave birth to a ......"

At this point, Sun Quan's brows furrowed.

Because he hasn't thought about the cute baby in this book yet...... Whether it's a boy or a girl.

He used to read the starting point daddy text, and most of the cute babies in the book were girls.

He also knows the benefits of writing a child as a girl in Daddy's text.

For example: girls are cute, easy to like, and it will be much less difficult for the male protagonist to find a partner in the future, and so on.

All in all, there are many benefits.

But he wanted to make it a little more difficult for himself.

If the children in this book were written as boys...... It should be much more difficult for the actor to find a partner in the future, right?

This is the downside.

But he has always believed that everything has both positive and negative effects, and if there is an adverse impact, there will naturally be a favorable impact.

For example, if you choose to write the child as a boy, in the process of the male protagonist and the heroine coming together, the dramatic conflict can be more intense, such as the dissuasion of the heroine's parents and relatives, such as the boy is more naughty and willful, and he strongly opposes the father to find him a new mother at first...... Wait a minute.

And more intense plot conflicts, if handled well, can often create a more touching plot.

For example: if it is a boy, if the relationship between the father and son is written delicately enough, it will also be very moving, and most of the readers of the starting point male frequency are men, and the love for father and son can be better substituted.

Wait a minute.

In a matter of moments, Sun Quan came up with several advantages of writing the children in this book as boys.

He didn't rush to write this setting in the setting just now.

Instead, I look back at the setting I just wrote.

He didn't write these settings just now, and every paragraph has his intentions.

For example, the actor's name is taken as "Huangshan", this name seems to be taken out very casually at first glance, and it is easy to wonder if this name was given when the phone bill was charged.

Not really!

It's not that he can't come up with a better name for the male protagonist.

He did it on purpose.

The name "Huangshan" is simple and easy to remember, Sun Quan flashed this name in his mind just now, and when he wrote this name into the document, a thought flashed in his mind: this name is convenient for drawing out some related plots later in the book.

For example: Because of the simple and easy-to-remember name of "Huangshan", the male protagonist's classmates and friends from childhood to adulthood still remember his name clearly after many years.

Some of them frequently used the name Huangshan and made fun of the male protagonist when they were students.

See you after many years, see the down-and-out male protagonist, and come forward to laugh at the male protagonist again, which is very convenient to pull hatred, and it is also convenient to create a few substandard opponents for the male protagonist.

Also, because of the name "Huangshan", the popularity of the male protagonist when he was a student was actually very good, because many classmates like to make fun of his name, which is conducive to the male protagonist's good classmates when he was a student.

Therefore, it is also logical to set up a few classmates with a good relationship with the male protagonist.

Even, one or two female classmates who have a crush on him can be set up from this.

Of course, Sun Quan named the male protagonist "Yellow Mountain", and there were other considerations.

For example, the name Huangshan reflects the cultural level of the hero's father Huang Yongzhi, a pig killer, and at the same time, this name also pins on Huang Yongzhi's expectations for Huangshan's son, hoping that this son can be as strong and tough as a mountain.

......

In addition, Sun Quan set up three sisters for the male protagonist Huangshan in the setting just now, which is also useful.

First, the existence of three sisters can well explain the reason why Huang Yongzhi is old and has a son.

Because Huang Yongzhi is a pig slaughterer, when he was young, his income was not low, and the food at home was good, and Huang Yongzhi himself was tall and big, and his appearance was not ugly, so under normal circumstances, Huang Yongzhi's age of marriage would not be very late.

But Sun Quan wants to add an old and good son to the identity of the male protagonist.

Therefore, he had to give a suitable reason to explain why Huang Yongzhi was old and had children.

Of course, if you want to reasonably explain why Huang Yongzhi is old and has children, there are actually many ways.

For example: Although Huang Yongzhi is tall and big, the income from killing pigs is not low, and it is not too late to get married, but because he failed to get his daughter-in-law pregnant for N consecutive years after marriage, he did not give birth to Huangshan until N years later.

This reason is perfectly fine.

This setting also flashed in Sun Quan's mind just now, but he was useless.

Because he feels that if he adds three sisters to the male protagonist Huang Shan, the plot later in the book can not only enrich the image of Huang Yongzhi, but also reflect the hot and cold world and the complexity of people's hearts through the indifference and even hostility of Huang Shan's three sisters to him.

By describing Huang Yongzhi's contempt for his three daughters, we can shape Huang Yongzhi's very traditional patriarchal thinking, and at the same time, it can also reflect his importance to Huang Shan's son, and then we can reasonably explain why Huang Yongzhi wants to control his son Huang Shan's life so much.

Because he attaches too much importance to his son, and because of Huang Yongzhi's obsession with traditional succession, when he is old and his health is getting worse and worse, he is eager to let his son Huangshan get married as soon as possible, and then hold his grandson in his lifetime.

......

As for, in the setting just now, why did the age of the male protagonist's ex-wife and the male protagonist when they get married set to 18 years old?

Sun Quan also has many considerations.

It is the so-called invincible youth.

Sun Quan thinks that the age of the male protagonist's ex-wife and his marriage is set at 18 years old, the benefits are obvious, the 18-year-old girl is white and beautiful, and her youth is invincible, so it gives the male protagonist Huangshan a very complex psychological feeling.

On the one hand, Huang Shan, who had just graduated from college, was very disgusted with the family business arranged for him by his father.

When he was in college, he had a girl he liked, and that girl also had a crush on him, and before he got married, he mustered up the courage to call the female classmate.

On the phone, he confessed, and the female classmate agreed to try dating him.

But the place of tragedy is also here.

The female classmate only agreed to try to date him.

But Huang Shan's father desperately wanted him to get married and have a baby as soon as possible.

His father, Huang Yongzhi, also verbally gave him a choice: either he would bring a woman home to get married, or he would marry the 18-year-old girl he arranged.

Huang Shan, who had just graduated from college, couldn't resist his father's will to let him get married.

He had no choice but to propose to the girl on the phone the next moment when he had just agreed to try to date him.

Obviously, the success rate of such a proposal is certainly extremely small.

Huangshan unsurprisingly failed.

The female classmate felt that he was a psychopath, unreasonable, and although he was slightly entangled, she still rejected him very firmly.

Huang Shan could only be depressed, obey the arrangement of his father Huang Yongzhi, and marry the 18-year-old dropout girl.

Therefore, after marriage, on the one hand, he felt that his daughter-in-law was very beautiful, and he liked to sleep with her, but he never forgot the female classmate in college, and he always had deep regrets in his heart.

This laid a hidden danger for his marriage from the beginning.

And the 18-year-old girl who married him dropped out of school to marry in the third year of high school, and she had a very good academic performance, and her unwillingness was certain.

She has a deep resentment towards her fate.

She felt that her fate should not have been this way.

She has a lot of ifs in her mind.

Like what:

"If my dad hadn't died that soon......"

"If I take the college entrance examination......"

"If I get into college and finish ...... university"

"If I choose to run away from marriage before I get married......"

"If I fled now to a city where no one knew me......"

......

Because there are always so many ifs in her heart, her heart has always been restless, she doesn't like her current life, she doesn't like the husband who has no feelings, and she doesn't like the daily laundry, cooking, and baby......

So, finally, in the fourth year after their marriage, on a dark and windy night, she packed her things and quietly fled.

fled the family to an unknown city, leaving behind the three men of the family: Huang Yongzhi and Huang Shan, and her and Huang Shan's son.

......

In terms of logic, Sun Quan thinks it is OK.

It makes sense.

Not only does it make sense, but it can also make readers have a complex emotion about the male protagonist Huangshan and his ex-wife.

There is a hatred for Huangshan when he got married, he succumbed to his father's will and did not dare to fight to the end.

also has a ...... for Huangshan's ex-wife The feeling of wanting to hate, but not hating.

Of course.

Sun Quan didn't intend to set these at the beginning of the book, so he threw them all out.

He intends not to explain in detail the reasons why Huangshan's ex-wife abandoned her husband and children in the early stages of the book, so that readers can temporarily condemn and hate Huangshan's ex-wife.

In this way, it is also convenient to win the sympathy of readers in the early stage of this book, when Huangshan was depressed and miserable.

After the plot slowly advances and Huang Shan's life gradually improves, the real reason why his ex-wife abandoned her husband and children will be slowly released, which should make many readers change some impressions of Huang Shan's ex-wife.

At this time, the relationship between the male protagonist Huang Shan and the female protagonist already has some foundation, but it is not so stable.

At this time, pull out Huangshan's ex-wife and add some plot.

It can add some suspense to the love between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, which will be more interesting and increase the reader's interest in the follow-up plot.

Actually, it's not all.

In the setting just now, in fact, it is logical to introduce a female protagonist - the female college classmate of the male protagonist Huangshan.

Before Huang Shan got married, he called her, and she agreed to date, but because she did not agree to marry him, the female classmate who regretted missing out was undoubtedly a knot in Huang Shan's heart that was difficult to solve.

During the time when he was abandoned by his ex-wife.

Huang Shan inevitably often falls into a decadent mood, especially in the dead of night, and he inevitably thinks repeatedly about the female classmate he agreed to try to date on the phone before marriage, the female classmate he had a long-time crush on in college.

This regret, even after the first heroine appeared, has always existed in the depths of his heart.

Like a scar, every time I recall it, it is as if I tear the scar at the bottom of my heart with my own hands.

Three heroines.

can enrich the emotional line of this book, while making the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist full of suspense, it is also a process of enlightenment for the male protagonist Huangshan.

It allows him to grow.