After a while, Nangong Yan sent a message.

"Congratulations!"

Just these two words, she didn't scold Le Chao for shaking her, but except for the word "congratulations", there was no other word, which not only showed her self-cultivation, but also showed that she should be unhappy at this time.

Also!

Being shaken like this, who can be replaced, who can be happy?

Le Chao sent a smiley face expression.

Then he wrote another sentence and sent it, "Angry, don't be angry! When I get this money, I'll go to your city to find you, and then invite you to a big meal, how about it?"

About half a minute later.

Nangong Yan: "You came to my city just to invite me to a big meal?"

Le Chao: "Hehe, what do I mean, can you still not understand? You understand!

Nangong Yan: "Are you serious?"

Le Chao: "Of course, what do you want me to say so that you can believe in my sincerity?"

Another moment passed.

Nangong Yan: "Let's wait until you really come to my city!"

Le Chao: "By the way, you have more experience in coding than me, give me an idea!"

Nangong Yan: "What's the idea?"

Le Chao: "Have you read my book "God of Fighting"?"

Nangong Yan: "I didn't finish it, I only read the first few chapters, what's wrong?"

Le Chao: "Didn't my old classmate tell me to cut the heroine into a single heroine, I don't want to change it beyond recognition, but I can't think of any good modification plan for a while, or, can you take the time to help me take a look? After reading all the chapters I've published now, and then give me a suggestion, tell me how to modify it, okay?"

Nangong Yan: "How many words do you have in this book now?"

Le Chao: "About 300,000." ”

Nangong Yan: "I can't finish reading so many words for a while, so let's do it! You can briefly describe the current emotional line in your book! I'll listen to it." ”

Le Chao: "This ...... There are currently three heroines appearing, and the first one is ......"

It took Le Chao a few minutes to clarify the emotional line of "God of Fighting".

After reading his brief description, Nangong Yan was silent for about two minutes and sent him a suggestion.

"You probably want to make the changes as small as possible, right? If it's this idea,It's simple.,All the current chapters don't need to be changed.,But in the next few chapters,You let the first female owner appear again.,In front of the male owner.,Kill the third female owner who just appeared recently.,In this way,The third female owner naturally received a box lunch.,And the first female owner killed the third female owner who the male owner liked very much recently.,The male owner can logically be disgusted with the first female owner.,Even hatred.,Or,Write directly that the male owner through this incident.,Found the true face of the first female owner.,Disappointed in her.,The love for the first female owner in my heart is gone in an instant.,And then the rest of the emotional line. , Naturally, it's the emotional line between the male protagonist and the second female protagonist, so that your book will immediately become a single female protagonist!"

In front of the computer, Le Chao was surprised after reading this suggestion.

I was surprised that Nangong Yan could come up with such an idea, and I was also surprised that this idea was absolutely amazing.

actually let the first heroine kill the third heroine, so as to abolish these two heroines at the same time.

But his brows were furrowed, and he thought about this suggestion carefully, and was not very satisfied.

Le Chao: "Do you have any other suggestions? The milder kind, the first heroine kills the third heroine, it's too intense." ”

This time, Nangong Yan was silent for another two minutes before sending the second suggestion.

"If you think this is too intense, then I'll give you the gentlest one!No need for the first heroine to kill the third heroine, the current plot of more than 300,000 words, you don't need to modify it either, you just need to castrate his feelings for the first and third heroines in the psychology of the male protagonist.

To put it simply:You can let the male protagonist suffer a serious injury.,Or seriously ill.,And then arrange for the second female owner to save him carefully.,The kind of effort and sacrifice that is great.,Completely moved the male owner to don't want it.,And then the male owner suddenly realized that the second female owner is the one who loves him the most.,At the same time,He also suddenly felt that it was enough for him to have a second female owner in his life.,Let him take the initiative to realize that he shouldn't think about the first female owner and the third female owner anymore.,Otherwise, I'm too sorry for the second female owner.,This idea is gentle enough, right?

As long as you let the male protagonist psychologically self-emasculate his feelings for the first female protagonist and the third female protagonist, this book will naturally become a single female protagonist, anyway, in your previous plot, the male protagonist and the first female protagonist and the third female protagonist did not have anything inappropriate for children, right?"

Le Chao: "......"

After reading the second piece of advice given by Nangong Yan, Le Chao's eyes lit up, and his heart was full of joy.

The second suggestion given by Nangong Yan won his heart, he felt that this suggestion was much better than the first suggestion, and he really couldn't accept the suggestion that the first heroine kill the third heroine.

At the same time, because of the two suggestions given by Nangong Yan successively, he really felt that Nangong Yan was much more experienced than him in writing essays.

Changing the multi-female protagonist to a single female protagonist, this kind of thing that annoys him, in her place, there are two highly feasible suggestions at her fingertips.

The beauty of these two suggestions is that he doesn't need to make any changes to the currently published chapters of "God of Fighting", he only needs to slightly shift the direction of the plot in the following plot.

At this moment, his idea of taking down Nangong Yan was unprecedentedly strong.

He had a hunch that as long as he could win Nangong Yan, with this woman's talent and experience in writing, he would definitely be able to become his virtuous helper in the future, and help him a lot in writing.

In comparison, his current girlfriend Han Li is much inferior.

Nangong Yan is like a strong teammate, and Han Li is equivalent to a cheerleader who can only shout 666 for him at most.

On this long road of life, whether to choose a strong teammate or choose a cheerleader who can only shout and cheer, how others choose, Le Chao is not clear, but at this moment he is very clear about his thoughts, he wants a strong teammate.

"Swallow, your wisdom fascinates me, what if I love you more? ”

A moment later, Le Chao sent such a meaty sentence to Nangong Yan.

Nangong Yan replied with a rolling expression.

Then he sent another sentence: "I'm older than you, you still call me Sister Yan!"

Le Chao replied: "OK! Sister Yan! haha......"

Nangong Yan: "By the way, can you accept the love of sister and brother?

Le Chao's next reply was amazing, and he actually replied: "The female junior hugs the gold brick, why can't you accept the love of sister and brother? If the object is you, I think I can hold two or three pieces! Believe me, I can do it!"

Nangong Yan: "......"

There are many people who say this to the female junior holding gold bricks, but then they say that they can hold two or three pieces, there shouldn't be many, right?

Seeing Nangong Yan reply with a string of ellipsis, Le Chao smiled proudly.

He was very satisfied with the reply he had just given, and he felt that his reply could almost be used as a textbook answer to the question of "sister and brother love".

However, Nangong Yan's next sentence made his smile freeze on his face.

Nangong Yan: "So...... You can't hold four gold bricks, can you? Then let's forget it, don't force it!"

Four pieces?

Le Chao's smile froze on his face, and he was instantly dumbfounded.

He silently calculated in his heart, the female junior holds the gold brick, three, four, one twelve, so, this Nangong Yan is 12 years older than me?

Is there so much bigger?

Can I hold so many gold bricks with my physical strength?

His heart suddenly felt a little weak.

At the same time, the image of a thirty or forty-year-old aunt flashed in my mind.

Nangong Yan is so old?

It's not like ah! She has a photo of her life in QQ space, and she looks like she's about 30 years old, right?

He was stunned for a long time, and finally gritted his teeth and replied: "In that case, it seems that I can only tell you the secret of my heart - in fact, my favorite is still four or five gold bricks, I have liked it since I was a child! ”

When this passage was sent, Le Chao had a bitter face, reached out to touch the cigarette on the table, and nodded with a sad face.

Maybe there are indeed women in this world who like four or five gold bricks, but he really isn't!

But thinking of Nangong Yan's approximate net worth, and the help she can give him in writing in the future, there are ...... The photos in her QQ space that looked quite young and were quite aesthetic, although the four gold bricks were a bit beyond the limit of what he could bear, he still decided to grit his teeth and resist it.

He took a few puffs of cigarette with a sad face, but it still failed to alleviate the depression in his heart.

And at this moment, Nangong Yan sent a private message again.

"Hehe, do you really believe it? You fool! Haven't you seen the photos in my space? Do you think I'm that big in the photos?"

"Huh, you just lied to me?" Le Chao perked up, his eyes lit up, and he muttered happily to himself.

Blinking, he typed energetically and asked, "Huh, how many gold bricks are you?"

Nangong Yan: "Don't think about the gold bricks! I don't! Also, are you 22 or 23 this year? I'm three or four years older than you! Hehe, if you are really a teenager, even if you can accept it, I can't accept to find you so young, heh, if you really like a woman with four or five gold bricks, then we still don't seem to be suitable." ”

"Haha......"

In the rental house, Le Chao laughed loudly.

Her heart blossomed, not only because Nangong Yan said that she was three or four years older than him at most, but also because she was willing to be friends with other people psychologically because she was willing to be friends with others after reading the content of Nangong Yan's recent private messages.

Is it because my "God of Fighting" is about to sell 300,000 royalties?

So you're impressed with me?

……

This evening.

Le Chao, who was in a good mood, directly scrapped the only more than 10,000 words in his hand, and then rewrote the new plot according to Nangong Yan's advice to him.

He arranged a strong enemy for the male protagonist of "God of Fighting", and then the male protagonist would be seriously injured by that enemy, and the second female protagonist, the "twin" girl, would do her best to save the male protagonist's life.

Next, the male protagonist will be deeply moved by her, and then psychologically take the initiative to castrate his feelings for the first and third heroines.

The plot of more than 300,000 words in front of him doesn't need to be changed a word, and Le Chao couldn't help but want to laugh when he thought of this.