Sun Quan, who came home in the afternoon, was a little dizzy because he drank a lot of wine at today's housewarming banquet, so he went to sleep in the bedroom after returning home.

When I woke up, it was already evening.

The sunset outside the window shone through the window and on his face, and when he opened his eyes, he saw an orange sunset.

The head hurts a little, but it's not serious.

Usually he has no interest in drinking, but on today's occasion, too many people toasted him, and before he knew it, he drank a lot.

Lying on the big bed with the smell of milk, looking at the orange sunset outside the window, he was very relaxed.

He likes to smell the milk smell on the bed, and he didn't seem to like it before, but since he had a daughter, he has never been disgusted by the milk aroma on his daughter's body, and gradually, smelling and smelling, he got used to it.

There was a faint sound of footsteps outside the bedroom, and the door was pushed open, Sun Quan didn't have to turn his head to look, just listening to the footsteps, he knew that it was his daughter-in-law Yuan Shuiqing who came.

Sure enough, her voice came from the door, "Wake up, it's time for dinner." ”

Sun Quan turned his face to look and saw her coming over with a smile, he blinked, stretched out a hand, like a child, and smiled: "Pull me up." ”

"Huh...... You!"

Yuan Shuiqing was a little funny, but she still reached out to pull him, just held his hand, before she could exert her strength, Sun Quan suddenly exerted her strength and pulled her down, Yuan Shuiqing exclaimed in surprise and threw herself into his arms.

The feeling of warm nephrite is there, but more of it is that she is pressed to the chest, after all, she is so tall, after marriage, she is plump, and her weight is definitely heavier than that of ordinary girls.

But Sun Quan felt that it was okay, and he could bear it.

"What are you doing, it's time to go down to eat!"

Yuan Shui glanced at him innocently, complained, and was about to get up.

But she was doomed to fail, because Sun Quan's hands were already wrapped around her waist.

and pouted at her.

The meaning is already self-evident.

Yuan Shuiqing pursed his lips amusedly, and kissed him like a dragonfly on his mouth very perfunctorily, "Okay, get up! The whole family is waiting for you to eat!"

"It's too short!

Sun Quan finished speaking dissatisfiedly and pouted again.

"You're almost done!" Yuan Shuiqing still wanted to get up.

But Sun Quan's hands are firmly around her waist, and in this posture, she can't use her strength and can't get up.

In the end, there was no way, Yuan Shuiqing reached out and pinched his nose, lowered her head and kissed him, this time she was not in a hurry to separate, but not for a long time, she didn't see the bridge, but she saw Sun Quan let go of her waist with both hands, and hurriedly pushed her, trying to push her away, but this time she put a smile on her face and put one hand around his head, and continued to pinch his nose with the other, kissing and kissing.

Sun Quan's eyes widened, and it didn't take long for his face to turn red, thanks to his parents, he gave him a male body, and his strength was naturally greater than that of a woman, no, under his struggle, he finally pushed her away, and slapped away the hand she was pinching his nose.

He gasped for breath and glared at her with unkind eyes.

However, Yuan Shuiqing only giggled and got up, not afraid at all, she had been married for so long, she had already figured out his temper, he may have a lot of shortcomings, but he definitely did not beat his wife.

"You want to murder your husband?"

Sun Quan counted her down angrily, and only replaced Yuan Shuiqing with a chuckle, "It's not that you said that the time is too short, and the bad reviews are bad! ”

Sun Quan glanced at her, got up and got out of bed depressedly.

On the surface, he seems to be angry, but in fact, he is happy in his heart.

……

After dinner, Sun Quan and Yuan Shuiqing habitually pushed the stroller and took their three children for a walk in the community.

The earth dog he bought before, the black warrior, shook his head and followed them to spread joy, this dog was raised when Yuan Shuiqing was pregnant with his two sons, it was just a small one at the beginning, and now it is more than half a meter long, and if you add the tail, it is at least more than one meter.

At first glance, it's quite scary.

In fact, it was quite well-behaved, but in order not to scare the other residents in the community, Sun Quan still tied a dog chain to it, and the chain was tied to his daughter's stroller.

"Does your head still hurt?"

Not long after coming out of the house, Yuan Shuiqing cared about Sun in a whisper.

Sun Quan shook his head, "It's much better! ”

In fact, his head is still a little swollen, which is also a big reason why he usually doesn't like to drink.

He had a hunch that he wouldn't be able to find the code word tonight.

But I don't panic in my heart, I have a lot of manuscripts! If I write a day or two less, I won't delay the update at all.

"Did the headhunter give you a letter?"

Sun Quan suddenly thought of this question, so he asked casually.

Yuan Shuiqing shook his head, "It's not so fast, the headhunters are still trying to create opportunities to contact those three targets, those three targets...... Hehe, they are all talents who don't have to worry about finding a job, even if they want to change jobs, they will definitely be cautious. ”

Sun Quan bowed slightly, feeling that it made sense.

He wasn't in a hurry, he just thought of this question suddenly, so he asked.

"Rhona is getting married, you know?"

Yuan Shuiqing suddenly changed the topic here, Sun Quan was stunned, turned his face to look at her, Yuan Shuiqing smiled slightly, and nodded slightly.

This news was indeed a bit sudden for Sun Quan.

But thinking about it carefully, it didn't seem so sudden, he remembered that when his two sons held a full moon wine in the magic capital, when Rona came to say goodbye, she brought her new boyfriend.

What's that guy's last name, what's his full name?

Sun Quan couldn't think of it for a while.

"Really, how do you know? What did she tell you?"

Today, the company moved out, Luo Na specially rushed over from the magic capital to participate, Sun Quan wondered if it was revealed to Yuan Shuiqing when Luo Na and Yuan Shuiqing were chatting casually.

Yuan Shuiqing hummed, "She invited us to attend her wedding today, hehe, will you go then?"

When she asked this, she quietly paid attention to Sun Quan's expression.

Luo Na liked Sun Quan at the beginning, but she already knew it, although she also knew that Sun Quan and Luo Na had never been in a relationship, and there was no behavior beyond the line, but he suddenly heard the news that Luo Na was going to get married, was he a little sorry?

Does Sun Quan feel sorry in his heart?

He didn't think so, he was more emotional.

When Lorna was in M City before, the two boyfriends she had had died unexpectedly, which really scared many people at that time, and there was no way not to wonder if she was the legendary Kefu life.

Later, she went to the magic capital, and he, Kuang Longfei and others were also worried about experiencing the tragic relationship of the first two times, would she still have the courage to date a new partner?

Now that he heard that she was finally getting married, Sun Quan had no regrets in his heart, only emotion.

Maybe a little more comforting?

It seems that there is!

He is not so selfish, he doesn't think that Rona liked him before, and he hopes that Rona will not be able to marry for the rest of his life, and his psychology is not so dark.

"Who is the bridegroom? Is that the person we met at the full moon banquet of Dabao and Xiaobao?"

The relieved smile on Sun Quan's face fell into Yuan Shuiqing's eyes, and Yuan Shuiqing's smile also had a touch of relief.

Shaking his head slightly, "I don't know, I didn't ask, why don't you call her now and ask?"

Sun Quan thought for a while, "Did you tell you the time and place of marriage?"

"Hmm. ”

Yuan Shuiqing nodded.

Sun Quan chuckled, "Then don't beat her, when we go to their wedding, we will naturally know if the groom is that person, what do you say?"

Although he didn't remember the man's name, he still had a little impression of the man's appearance, and he believed that when Rona got married, he would see the groom with his own eyes and recognize whether the groom was the guy who had gone to the full moon banquet of his two sons.

"Okay, okay!"

Yuan Shuiqing did not object.

……

Night, the moon is dark.

In the study on the second floor, Sun Quan boiled a pot of tea, turned on the computer, his head was still a little swollen, he didn't want to code words in this state, but he was used to sleeping late, and he slept for several hours this afternoon, and at this time he didn't feel sleepy at all, so he didn't go to the bedroom.

After the computer was turned on, he logged on to QQ to see if anyone had sent a private message to him in the past two days.

Don't say it, there really is!

After briefly replying to the questions of several peers and book fans, Sun Quan looked at the last private message and did not rush to reply.

This private message was sent to him by Dayu, and it was sent at four o'clock this afternoon.

- "The outline of the script, I have made it, I will send it to you to see? If you think it is okay after reading it, I will write it according to the outline, if not, you give your opinion, and I will revise it." ”

Under this private message, Dayu also sent him an offline file.

Sun Quan didn't rush to reply to his private message, first received this offline file, and then clicked on it to read.

When he watched it, he was looking forward to it.

Dayu is really reliable, before writing the script, he actually made an outline, and before he wrote the screenwriter Dong Bao of the Salted Fish Studio, he didn't do this, in comparison, he made a judgment.

At the beginning of the outline, Sun Quan was very satisfied when he read it.

I feel that the beginning of this outline is more intentional and feeling than the beginning of his original work.

At the beginning of the story, Dayu did not advance or postpone the time point of the story, and the original book remained consistent, at the beginning of the story, the heroine Huang Shan's daughter-in-law had fled, leaving the male protagonist Huang Shan alone in the bedroom against the baby who was sleeping sweetly, and the baby who was still in swaddling clothes.

In this opening, Dayu sketched a picture in a few words, the night outside the house was deep, the wind was howling, and the howling wind blew the windows to sway, making a squeaky sound.

The actor Huang Shan sat on the sofa by the window, his brows condensed, there seemed to be an indissoluble melancholy and melancholy between his eyebrows, he pinched half a lit cigarette in his fingertips, and in the small shaker next to the big bed in the bedroom, his infant son was sleeping sweetly, and there was even a happy smile on the corner of his mouth.

At the beginning of this outline written by Dayu, Sun Quan saw several sets of hidden contrasts.

For example, the dark night and howling wind outside the house form a set of contrasts with the light and silence in the house.

For example, the melancholy on the face of the actor Huang Shan and the smile on the corner of his son's mouth in swaddling clothes also form a set of contrasts.

Sun Quan remembered that in his original book, he didn't write about the howling wind outside the house, and inside the house, he didn't write about the smile on the corner of the baby's mouth in the swaddling clothes.

His writing style does not have so many skills, he focuses more on portraying the psychology and character of the male protagonist Huangshan, and Dayu's writing skills are obviously much more mature than him.

Some metaphors have been added to it.

The wind howling outside the house indicates that the hero's peaceful life has ushered in the wind and rain, and the happy smile on the corner of the sleeping son's mouth and the melancholy on his own face symbolize the beauty and hope of life, and the other symbolizes the hero's current predicament.

In addition, Sun Quan feels that there should be another layer of metaphor: can the actor Huang Shan bear the burden of life, keep the smile on his son's face, and let his son have a happy childhood?

After only reading such a beginning, Sun Quan felt that it was a correct decision to ask Dayu to help adapt the script.

The plot outlined by Dayu is obviously more suitable for adaptation into a TV series.

And "This Daddy is Not Ordinary" written by his Sun Quan is not suitable for direct adaptation into a TV series.

……

When Sun Quan finished reading the entire outline sent to him by Dayu, a satisfied smile already appeared on the corner of his mouth.

Dayu's plot structure ability is really a first-class level.

He didn't touch the big plot of the original book, but it was more like polishing "This Daddy is Extraordinary", adding some details, transforming some psychological descriptions in the original book into the specific behaviors and lines of the characters, and ...... It's not embarrassing.

Sun Quan felt that "not embarrassing" was very rare.

He has watched a lot of TV series before, and he is often scorched by some lines in the play.

For example: "What you lost was only a leg, but what she lost was love!"

Lighting a cigar, Sun Quan sent Dayu a jitter window.

Not long after, the bridge was missing.

I saw Dayu reply: "You're finally online, how about it? I sent you the outline of the past, have you read it?"

Sun Quan replied: "I just finished reading it." ”

Immediately, I sent another thumbs up emoji.

For this outline written by Dayu, Sun Quan really thinks it is very good.

Dayu replied with a smile, and then replied: "I've finished reading it all?"

Sun Quan: "Well, I've read it all." ”

Dayu: "Don't you have any opinions? If you have an opinion, you can say it directly! Don't wait for me to write the script, you can tell me your opinion, it's just an outline, if you have any opinions, I'll revise it." ”

Opinions, of course, Sun Quan has some.

Dayu's outline, although Sun Quan thinks it is very good, but it refers to the feeling given to him as a whole.

As for the details, he definitely has some opinions.

They are all story-writers, picky, and they are all good at it.

In the next two hours, Sun Quan exchanged some details of the outline with Dayu on QQ and discussed with each other, especially the second half of the outline.

Because "This Daddy is Not Ordinary" is still being serialized, although Sun Quan's manuscripts are many, after all, the whole story has not been written, and the outline given to Dayu is only an outline after all.

Therefore, some parts of the outline written by Dayu according to the outline at the back of his book must be different from Sun Quan's ideas.

Dayu was very patient, the two communicated very selflessly, and when the conversation was over, they found that more than two hours had passed.