Chapter 628: A Breakthrough in Writing Skills
Three days later.
Modu, Red House Maternity Hospital, B-ultrasound room, Yuan Shuiqing was lying on the B-ultrasound bed, Sun Quan was by the side, looking at the fetal picture that appeared on the B-ultrasound screen, Sun Quan's feeling in his heart was indescribable.
He could see two fetuses with hands and feet on the screen, and he could hear the heartbeat of "dong dong", and the feeling of being a father again made his mind full of complicated and indescribable thoughts.
Originally, there was only one daughter, but now ...... In a few months, his grandson will be the father of three children.
Two of them are twins who look exactly the same.
That...... The feeling of the continuation of his life made him, an atheist, feel that the rest of his life had meaning.
He has always believed that death is like a lamp going out, and if he dies one day, he does not believe that his soul still has a chance to be reincarnated.
Like the grass and trees in the wilderness...... After the seeds of plants and trees fall to the ground, there is a chance to grow new plants and trees, but the withered plants and trees will no longer have the possibility of life.
Although his rebirth made him waver in atheism, he still did not believe in reincarnation, he only believed that children were the continuation of his own life.
Looking at Yuan Shuiqing, who was lying there quietly on the B-ultrasound bed, letting the doctor examine her, looking at her bulging abdomen, looking at the smile on her eyebrows and eyes, and the corners of her mouth, the love in Sun Quan's heart unconsciously swelled up.
Before being with her, he was not a very emotionally dedicated person, either in his past life or in this life.
Before he was reborn, the departure of his ex-girlfriend had already changed his outlook on love.
But after being with Yuan Shuiqing, he was like a small boat that had been drifting on the sea for many years, and finally found a harbor.
He had no idea about the other women outside.
Even if he occasionally has some thoughts due to hormonal drives, he can control his trouser belt.
At first, he was with Yuan Shuiqing, mainly because of her beauty.
At that time, she was the most beautiful in his social circle, and out of biological instinct, he wanted to conquer her.
In fact, in the past two years, as his social circle has become bigger and bigger, he has met a lot of all kinds of beauties, and in terms of appearance, there have been a few who can compete with Yuan Shuiqing.
But he was still willing to just guard her.
Because of what?
There may be many reasons, such as: she gave birth to a child for him, for example, he subconsciously wants to prove that as long as a woman does not live up to him, he will never fail the other party first, for example, Yuan Shuiqing is still very beautiful and has a good figure......
But the most important thing is that because his heart has a home, it is very stable, and he knows that this is happiness, the happiness that he dreamed of before he was reborn, and he cherished it.
He didn't want to grieve her because of himself one day, he loved her, and she loved him.
And now...... He had two more reasons to love her, the two children in her womb.
......
"What are you thinking?"
When he went down from the hospital upstairs, Sun Quan supported Yuan Shuiqing, Yuan Shuiqing seemed to notice that he was a little distracted, glanced at him with a smile, and asked softly.
Sun Quan laughed silently and whispered, "I'm thinking about the future, our future." ”
A look of curiosity appeared in Yuan Shuiqing's eyes, "Yes, then what do you think of? What do you think of our future?"
Sun Quan: "I thought of two possibilities. ”
Yuan Shuiqing: "Let's talk about it." ”
Sun Quan: "One is that the two little things in your stomach now, both are girls, then we will have three daughters, and in a few years, we will have three sons-in-law, and then we can take turns to go to the three daughters' houses every year, just like traveling, constantly changing places, it's quite pleasant to think about." ”
Yuan Shuiqing couldn't help but smile at the corner of his mouth, "Then what if these two are sons in my stomach now?"
Sun Quan: "That's not bad! When they grow up, they can protect you and Xinxin for me, you and Xinxin will not be bullied for the rest of your life, I thought...... From an early age, it is necessary to cultivate the habit of loving and supporting each other between the two brothers, and this aspect must be cultivated well, and the brothers must not be discordant. ”
Listening to Sun Quan say this, Yuan Shuiqing's face was unconsciously overflowing with a happy smile, the former goddess of the iceberg had long since disappeared from the iceberg.
......
Late at night.
The couple were lying on the bed, their daughter Sun Jiexin was already asleep, and was hugged in his arms by Yuan Shuiqing, and Yuan Shuiqing was hugged by Sun Quan, with his back against his chest.
They hadn't fallen asleep yet, and they were still whispering.
Yuan Shuiqing: "Husband, how are you preparing for your new book?
Sun Quan: "It's already written." ”
Yuan Shuiqing: "What about the title of the book?"
Sun Quan: "The tentative name is "He Can See Ghosts", but I have never been satisfied with this name, if I can think of a better name, I should change it." ”
"He Can See Ghosts" ......"
Yuan Shuiqing groaned and said, "This name is indeed a little ordinary, do you have any other alternate names?" If so, say it, and I will give you a reference. ”
Sun Quan was silent and shook his head slightly, "Forget it, I'll think about it again, and I'll tell you when I'm ready." ”
In fact, he has thought of several new titles these days, two of which he is more satisfied with, but he has not yet decided which one to use.
Yuan Shuiqing was silent for two seconds, and sighed lightly, "Okay! Then you think about it slowly, by the way, are you going to stay here for a few days this time?
......
The couple chatted casually, the topic was not very nutritious, but it was very warm.
Two more days later.
Sun Quan drove back to M City, returned to his villa, and that night, he sat in front of the computer in his study, opened a blank document, hesitated, and typed in two new titles.
One is: "The Last Wish of the Dead".
One is: "Ferry of the Dead".
The second title, apparently in the style of "Soul Ferry", feels that the word "undead" is more accurate than "soul".
Because living people also have souls, the name "Soul Ferry" is not very accurate, and it cannot be seen at a glance that it is a ghost story.
And "undead" must refer to the soul of a person after death.
He prefers the name "The Last Wish of the Dead", because according to the main line of the outline of this supernatural essay he recently wrote, after the male protagonist awakens the Yin and Yang Eyes, the main line of the story is to help the undead fulfill their last wishes.
Once the wishes of these undead are fulfilled, they will soon be sent to the underworld by the ghosts.
Compared with the title of "He Can See Ghosts", "The Last Wish of the Dead" is also slightly higher in block B.
In front of the computer, a pot of tea and a cigarette, Sun Quan's thoughts slowly precipitated, and slowly calmed down in the supernatural world constructed by the outline.
After reading the beginning of the previous article, he closed his eyes slightly, took a puff of cigarette from time to time, and the smoke slowly exhaled out, his eyes closed, but the thoughts in his mind were exceptionally clear.
At the beginning of the tens of thousands of words he had just finished reading, he replayed it repeatedly in his mind, and in his spirit, he had long forgotten the outside world, leaving only the story in his mind.
Maybe it's because the outline of this supernatural text is complete enough, maybe it's because his ability to structure the plot is really much better than before, or maybe it's because the plot of his new book is a series of small stories, making the plot of each small story easier to grasp.
Anyway, at this time, the first little story about the book in his mind - the story between the male protagonist and his deceased girlfriend, he slowly formed a complete plot line in his mind.
Where should suspense and foreshadowing be buried, and where should the beginning and end be combined...... It became clearer and clearer in his mind.
When he opened his eyes again, he had already finished smoking a cigarette in his hand.
Pressing the cigarette butt into the ashtray casually, Sun Quan seemed to delete and delete the tens of thousands of words at the beginning of the story that had been written before without thinking.
When the thinking is good, it is so confident.
Half an hour later, the original opening tens of thousands of words were revised by him.
The plot of the story is much tighter, and every part is the effect he wants.
This kind of control over the plot was something he didn't have before.
Although he is already the platinum author of the starting point, the platinum god in the eyes of many people, his control over the plot was really not so strong before.
Specifically, in the past, he often wanted the effect, but after he put it into writing, he could only achieve about 80% of the effect at most.
And now, just talking about the tens of thousands of words at the beginning of the book, he feels that he has achieved more than 90% of the effect he wants.
There is no doubt that this is a step forward.
His ability to control the plot of the story he writes has improved.
......
Time is like water, day after day.
Sun Quan returned to M City this time, and it was like entering a state of retreat, most of the time every day, he locked himself in the study of the villa, sat in front of the computer, and wrote the plot in the outline little by little into the text, and the more he wrote, the clearer his thinking became.
He knew that his skills in writing had finally broken through to a new level.
This level has never been reached in his writing career.
That kind of control over the plot, like the painter's control over the brush in his hand, has reached a new level, if you want to draw a straight line, you can draw a straight line at will, if you want to draw a circle, you can draw a very round circle at will.
It's a good feeling.
During the time when Sun Quan was in retreat to write his new book, everything in the outside world was still going on, and the world was still wonderful.
For example, the general agency right of 99 yellow stewed chicken in the city is selling more and more.
For example: "Run! Brother" The variety show suddenly launched on the market, and the ratings and word-of-mouth continued to rise, and in this variety show, the 99 Yellow Braised Chicken advertisement that was also inserted pushed the popularity of 99 Yellow Braised Chicken to a new height, and there were more merchants who chose to join 99 Yellow Braised Chicken.
For example, on the author's forum, there are more and more voices that doubt that he may not write new books anymore.
For example, in the book review area of "Sword in the Clouds", while everyone is discussing several popular variety shows under his name, there are more and more book reviews calling on him to publish new books quickly.