Leaving Liu Dezhu's office, Old Man Fang was a little embarrassed, he looked at Lin Yi, and stopped talking.

"Old man, don't have that expression. ”

Lin Yi smiled and said: "We are not a raw person, why are you also a witness to the marriage of the two of us, if you have something to say, you might as well say it directly." ”

"That'...... I'm an old immortal, so I'm going to let go of this old face!"

Old Man Fang laughed at himself: "You have also seen the current situation, the script must not be used, and the director will also be replaced." ”

"For a while, I'm afraid it's hard to find the right person and script, unless it's ......"

A pair of old eyes, blazing, staring at Lin Yi.

Get.

Lin Yi stretched out his hands: "Your old man is waiting for me here?"

"Is that not it?"

Old Man Fang said with a smile: "Who doesn't know that the script of the charter man is very good? As a director and actor, it is also the first-class among the first-class!"

"You have such a big Buddha here, and it happens to be such a situation, if you don't use it, then I won't be a fool?"

"Ahem, you see, my old fellow doesn't even want a face...... Do me a favor?"

"Actually, it's not impossible. ”

Lin Yi's eyes rolled, and he was suddenly affected by the money-adding layman, and blurted out: "You have to add money." ”

"Plus! That's for sure, it's going to have to be added. ”

Old Man Fang was overjoyed.

Isn't this how it should be? Let people be screenwriters and directors and starring actors, this is not added to the money, can it be said that in the past?

"That'...... Count you into the shares, fifty percent?"

"That's a lot. ”

Lin Yilian waved his hand and smiled: "I'm just joking." ”

"Not much. ”

Old Man Fang glared: "If you don't accept it, I really can't let you do this job." I know that if you cooperate with Xunteng, they can only get 20% ......."

"That's not the same ......"

"Gotta get it, don't stare at your old man, I promised, can't I promise it?"

Teacher Zhang, Teacher Wang: "......"

o(╥﹏╥)o......

Woooooooo

So, is this the daily life of a rent collector? Always bargaining with people, and the reason for bargaining is because there is too much money?!

This......

What do people say?

"If you say yes. ”

Old Man Fang smiled: "Come on, come on, since you said that there is a problem with the script, let's discuss it, and I also want to know what the problem is." ”

"In addition, it should take time for the creation of a new script, so why don't we disperse first, and then pull the crew up after you finish writing?"

"No, I don't. ”

Lin Yi grinned: "Actually, I already know how to write the script." ”

Old Man Fang: "???"

I'm going, so fast?!

"It's okay to chat, by the way, Mr. Wang, you can rest first, I'll write the tune, please help me register the copyright." ”

"My pleasure. ”

Teacher Wang responded with a smile on his face.

Not long after, the song "Overture to the Dead" was written, and Mr. Wang took Mr. Zhang to register the copyright as if he had obtained a treasure.

Why go with two people?

The value of this score is amazing! What if someone robs someone along the way? Even though no one else knows what it is.

......

After the separation, Lin Yi and Mr. Fang went directly to the dormitory and chatted about the script.

Lin Yi quickly pointed out several deficiencies in the original script, and after the old man heard it, he beat his chest and suddenly became enlightened.

"Sure enough, you're the best at that. ”

Old Man Fang exclaimed: "In just one day, I have seen so many shortcomings. ”

"It's like the musical instrument used by the heroine...... Although the pipa is good, as you said, it is difficult to form an 'opposite' with the piano used by the male protagonist, after all, the form is different. ”

"Changing to a guqin, but it is much more suitable. ”

"Makes sense, it really makes sense!"

"So, how are you going to come to the new script?"

"Actually, it's not a brand-new script, it's based on the original, eliminating the unreasonable parts and increasing the commerciality. ”

Lin Yi chuckled and said his plans and thoughts.

The name of "The Age of Music" is very literary, or rather...... There are no attractive highlights, but it was originally a literary film, which is nothing.

Of course, although Lin Yi is ready to change the music era to a commercial film, he is not ready to change the name.

How to change?

Did it change to "Flash Girl"?

What's this...... It's not as good as the music era. A good movie delayed by the name, do you think this is just talking?

However, in terms of adapting the script, Lin Yi borrowed a lot of elements from "Flash Girl".

For example, in the portrayal of the heroine.

Lovely, resolute, dare to love and hate.

For example, eating meatballs with a water dispenser, the cute scene when it was discovered, naturally it should be added.

In addition, the composition of the orchestra with 2.5 dimensions is also the finishing touch.

And this 2.5 dimension, if you can really pull those three sisters to shoot, it is naturally the best.

Other than that, it's the musical instrument.

The heroine does not use a pipa, nor a dulcimer, but a guqin.

The dulcimer is not actually a traditional national instrument, but came from Persia and is of the same clan as the piano.

It's not that the dulcimer is bad, but it's that the 'opposite' with the piano is not strong enough.

Guqin, which has been passed down for thousands of years, is a real Chinese national instrument, and there is no doubt that the topic will be more suitable than the dulcimer.

And when the male protagonist asks what is a 'guqin' with contempt, it will also be easier to resonate with the audience.

Cough...... Although this 'villain' is played by Lin Yi himself, we can dedicate ourselves to art.

But in fact, strictly speaking, there is no real villain in the whole movie, but the preferences and ideas of the two sides are different.

It's not so much a good or bad guy, but a group of cute musicians who work hard for their dreams.

After all, in the end, the flash girl, the two sides also 'dare to love and hate', Western music lost, but also kept its promise and helped the Chinese orchestra on the stage, isn't it?

is also as Eason Chan said in the play.

"How can music interfere with each other?"

Or maybe it's.

"Music, how can it be divided into classes?"

No musical instrument is inherently inferior, and in the hearts of those who love it, it is a transcendent being!

And the biggest change is 'conflict', that is, 'contradiction'!

As a commercial film, how can it arouse the audience's sense of anticipation without a sufficiently intense conflict?

So, continue to borrow from the flash girl!

The iron gate is arranged!

Western music students do not discuss folk music in their daily lives, although it seems to be a bit ugly to do so...... But in fact, this is like Western medicine and Chinese medicine, in reality, it may be more ruthless than in the movie.

The most exciting part is naturally the "Chinese and Western PK" across the iron gate!

"Good!"

After listening to Lin Yi's explanation, Old Man Fang patted his thigh.