Chapter 767 Dong Bao's script

Yuan Shuiqing got up suddenly, took the mineral water bottle in his hand, got up and walked a few steps forward, standing against the wind, with his back to Sun Quan, who was sitting on the bench.

As a result, Sun Quan couldn't see her expression.

She could smell the faint smell of perfume blowing from her body in the sea breeze.

It was a familiar taste for him.

For a while, Sun Quan frowned and looked at her back, not knowing whether to walk over and ask her, or just sit here and wait for her decision......

Her back is very beautiful, taller than ordinary women, slender and long.

The sea breeze blew her hair lightly.

His hesitation did not last long, and he was not a person who sat still, so he got up, threw the cigarette butt in his hand, hesitated and walked over, walked to her side, stood side by side with her, and looked at the dark sea in the distance, as if expecting a ship to return.

In fact, they both knew they weren't expecting anything.

If he had to say yes, it was also the decision he expected from her, a good decision.

The couple stood there for a long time, and finally Yuan Shuiqing turned his face, smiled faintly at Sun Quan, and whispered, "Go back! ”

？？？

A string of question marks popped up in Sun Quan's mind.

What does that mean?

What does she mean exactly? Is she not forgiven? Or has she been forgiven?

Frowning and staring at her eyes for a moment, Sun Quan asked, "Shui Qing, have you forgiven me?"

Yuan Shuiqing smiled slightly and asked rhetorically, "Is your heart still with me?"

Sun Quan nodded hurriedly, "Of course! I can't wait to take out my heart to show you." ”

Yuan Shuiqing looked at him with a smile, raised his left hand, and gently touched his cheek, Sun Quan thought she was going to say something, but unexpectedly she suddenly leaned over and kissed him on the mouth.

After kissing, she put her forehead against his forehead and whispered: "As long as your heart is still with me, that's enough, I'm glad you can confess to me, but come home with me tomorrow......! Unless we're both together. ”

Sun Quan: "......"

At this moment, Sun Quan's heart was rolling, he knew that he had done nothing wrong tonight, and he felt that the hearts of the two of them were close together again.

So, he opened his arms, hugged Yuan Shuiqing in his arms, and lowered his head to kiss ......

was unexpectedly blocked by Yuan Shuiqing's hand.

At the same time, I heard her chuckle: "You just smoked, and I won't let you kiss you because of the smell of cigarettes." ”

Sun Quan: "......"

Sun Quan, who was speechless and helpless, suddenly bit her shoulder, Yuan Shuiqing exclaimed, and hurriedly stretched out his hand to push him, Sun Quan hugged her tightly, but he didn't let go.

"You let go! You're a dog...... Don't bite me, I'll get rabies......"

On the beach at night, the sound of fighting spread far away.

......

Sun Quan has no objection to Yuan Shuiqing's decision to let him go home with her tomorrow, although if he stays in the magic capital, it will be more convenient for him to communicate with Wang Zheng and others, and it will also be more convenient for him to control the quality of the second season of "Wish of the Dead".

But since his wife has spoken, then he listens.

Compared with the quality of the second season of "Dead Wishes", for him, of course, the relationship with her daughter-in-law is more important.

What's more, even if he returns to M City, Wang Zheng can use the computer to transmit the filmed scenes to him every day.

Not much impact.

......

A week after returning to M City, Salted Fish Studio.

On the second floor, Sun Quan was coding words in the office.

There was a knock on the office door.

"Please come in!"

He didn't raise his head, and shouted casually.

The door opened, Sun Quan turned his face and glanced at it, and it was Dong Bao, a professional screenwriter recruited by Fu Lei before, who entered the door.

and the villain Dong Tianbao in "Tai Chi Zhang Sanfeng", the name is only one word different.

It was also because of this that Fu Lei had only told him the name of this person once before, and Sun Quan remembered it.

The image of Dong Bao and Dong Tianbao is very different, Dong Bao is not tall, a little fat, more than one meter and six, and weighs about more than 160 pounds.

I also shaved a marinated egg hairstyle, or no hairstyle.

But he ingeniously grew a small tuft of beard on his chin.

He wears a pair of round-rimmed glasses and has a smile on his face when he walks in.

Glimpsing him entering the door, Sun Quan asked casually while continuing to code, "Teacher Dong, is there something?"

Sun Quan's tone was very casual.

And Dong Bao hurriedly said: "Mr. Sun, don't scorn me, in front of you, how dare I call me a teacher, just call me Xiao Dong or A Bao!" ”

In fact, he was several years older than Sun Quan, and he was already in his thirties.

Of course, for men, more than thirty is not too big, if it is calculated according to the standard of "man forty-one flowers", he is still a flower bone in his thirties!

Sun Quan chuckled, and just as he had finished writing a paragraph in his hand, he stopped his hands and stretched out his hand to signal him to sit.

After Dong Bao sat down, Sun Quan glanced at the folder he was holding in his hand and asked with a smile: "What are you holding in your hand?

"Oh, yes! Mr. Sun, this is the first episode of the script that I tried to adapt according to your meaning, hehe, I want you to take a look, if you think you write like this, then I will write it in this style later, if you think it can't work, you just say it, I will adjust it immediately, until you are satisfied!"

In terms of attitude, Dong Bao's attitude is very good.

This point is not comparable to the screenwriter of "Wish of the Dead".

Fu Lei tried to let the screenwriter of "Wish of the Dead" come to Salted Fish Studio to work, and by the way, she helped train a few newcomers to learn to write scripts.

But the screenwriter politely declined.

Although the tone is tactful, the attitude is refusal.

"Okay!

Sun Quan stretched out his hand, and Dong Bao hurriedly handed the folder in his hand to Sun Quan.

Flipping through the folder, Sun Quanneng could see that the script of this episode should have just been printed, the paper was very flat, there was no trace of looking through it, and there was even a little warmth left on the paper that had just come out of the printer.

It's like a person who has just died, and the body is not cold yet.

Uh, that doesn't seem like a good analogy?

Well, don't worry about the details!

Title: "This Daddy is Extraordinary"

Theme: Modern city

Original work: "This Daddy is Not Ordinary"

......

Sun Quangang read a few lines, suddenly remembered, looked up and said to Dong Bao, who was looking at him: "Eh, I have tea on the table, you pour yourself a cup to drink, you're welcome!"

"Oh, oh, good!

Dong Bao responded, subconsciously got up, and went to take the teacup and pour the tea, Sun Quan had a complete set of tea sets on the table, and he had become a habit of cooking a pot of tea before coding words every day.

Dong Bao...... This screenwriter, Sun Quan heard Fu Lei say before, he was recruited from an unknown small film and television company.

Unfortunately, not long after she poached Dong Bao here, the small film and television company went bankrupt.

Therefore, perhaps the reason why Dong Bao was poached by her was because he knew in advance that the film and television company he worked for was going to go bankrupt.

From Sun Quan's point of view, Dong Bao's script is written in a very rigorous format, with a single board and a glance, and there is no self-play.

But the biggest advantage of this script may be the rigor of the format.

The degree of restoration of his original work "This Daddy is Not Ordinary" is extremely high.

is almost completely adapted from the plot direction of the original book.

At the beginning, Sun Quan was still slow to see and looked very carefully.

But after watching it for a while, he found that the plot direction in the script was completely based on the original book, and he read it very quickly, and it didn't take long to sweep all the scripts of this episode.

After sweeping, Sun Quan closed the script in his hand and put it on the table in front of him, frowning and groaning.

Seeing that he finished reading this episode of the script so quickly, and after reading it, Dong Bao, who was sitting on the side, was a little nervous, and subconsciously put the teacup in his hand back on the table, and his sitting posture was quietly upright.

Sun Quan looked at the script that had just been placed on the table, and then turned his face to look at Dong Bao.

I sighed in my heart.

Really...... Those with a good attitude generally have no ability.

Those who have the ability are somewhat temperamental.

It seems that this is true.

Dong Bao's attitude is what he likes, but Dong Bao's talent in screenwriting is ...... Sun Quan really didn't see it.

If you don't have anything to play yourself, what kind of talent can you embody?

Speaking of self-play, in fact, Sun Quanting is afraid that the screenwriter will change his work beyond recognition.

But he also doesn't need the kind of screenwriter who exactly copies his original book.

The kind of adaptation that is exactly the same as the original book is ...... for fans of the original book What's new?

Sun Quan decided to mention Dong Bao, or clarify his attitude.

He was a little suspicious that Dong Bao was working here and wanted to shoot his sycophants, so he deliberately made the script completely according to his original book and suppressed his own performance.

"Ahem"

Sun Quan coughed lightly and said to Dong Bao, who was looking at him: "Well, that's the case! I think the online adaptation does not have to be completely in accordance with the plot order of the original work, such as the beginning of the first episode of the script, you can try to change the angle of entry, and in other aspects, it can also be appropriately deleted to make the plot more compact, after all, there is still a difference between online texts and TV series, what do you say?"

Sun Quan noticed that every time he said a word, Dong Bao nodded his head once, and after he finished speaking, Dong Bao nodded at least a dozen times, nodding his head while mmmmm

An attitude that fully agrees with his statement.

The attitude couldn't be better.

This made Sun Quanxin frown secretly, but on the surface, he couldn't say anything, he couldn't count him down because Dong Bao's attitude was too good, right?

There is no such reason in the world.

"Well, then you can go back and change it again, and if it's corrected, bring it to me and show it to me, okay?"

Sun Quan decided to look at the quality of his modified finished product.

"Okay, okay! Mr. Sun, don't worry, I'll change it, and I will change it until you are satisfied!"

Dong Bao hurriedly got up and made a guarantee.

Sun Quan nodded slightly and handed him back the script on the table. Watching Dong Bao, who nodded and bowed, go out.

When he went out, Dong Bao consciously helped him close the door, and before closing the door, he didn't forget to give Sun Quan a humble smile.

As everyone knows, his smile fell in Sun Quan's eyes, which made Sun Quan sigh in his heart.

Sun Quan saw that this Dong Bao was not confident in his talent.

A truly confident person will not show such a humble smile.

......

Three days later.

Dong Bao knocked on Sun Quan's office door again and handed Sun Quan the revised and reprinted script.

It's still the same smiling and humble attitude.

Sun Quan took the script he handed over, flipped through it and read it from beginning to end, and couldn't help but feel a burst of despair in his heart.

Have you changed this script?

The answer is yes.

Changed!

Moreover, the magnitude of the changes is not small.

But the direction of the change ...... Let Sun Quan be indescribable.

This time, the script really did not follow the plot order of the original book, and Dong Bao even added some content at the beginning of the first episode by himself.

In the revised script this time, the first to appear is the daughter-in-law of the male protagonist Huang Shan...... The daughter-in-law who is about to abandon her husband and son and run away.

Dong Bao's addition of this scene made Sun Quan smell the smell of dog blood.

At midnight, this sleepless woman quietly got up and got out of bed, squatted next to her son's shaker, and looked at the child in the shaker with a reluctant face by the moonlight shining in from the window.

Not only that, but in this script, the woman also silently shed tears, falling down with a click, and even made her mumble to herself, and the words she said were all reluctance to the child and despair of the current life.

After reading the scenes that Dong Bao added to the "heroine" in the script, Sun Quan had a feeling that it was not her fault that this woman left with the money and abandoned her husband and children!

It can even be said that it is correct!

The fault is this family, it is her husband Huangshan.

Sun Quan seems to be watching a bloody family ethics drama.

And this is where he feels hopeless.

He really wanted to ask Dong Bao - who is the protagonist of this drama?

Is it Huangshan?

Or is it this woman?

This woman was whitewashed at the beginning, so when the audience watched this drama, how did the audience feel about the actor Huang Shan, who had just appeared?

Deserve?

Damn it?

The original work is a daddy text! The woman is whitewashed at the beginning, what is the meaning of the role behind the male protagonist?

Is the audience still interested in looking down?

Daddy's script, you do this for me?

Do you have a brain?

Sun Quan really wanted to smash this script on Dong Bao's face, and then scold him.

But the despair in his heart made him dispel this idea again, and he was too lazy to lose his temper.

Just like when I was a student, there were always a few hopeless students who were given up by the teacher, and the teacher didn't even bother to teach two sentences on weekdays.

In the end, it's all because it's hopeless!

Holding back the anger in his heart, Sun Quan smiled, he could still laugh, only to see him put the script on the table, turned his face to Dong Bao and said, "Teacher Dong, you go down to work first! I'll take a look at this script, and when I read it, I'll give you advice, okay?"

Dong Bao blinked, a little surprised, but his attitude was as good as ever, and he quickly got up and nodded, and said, "Okay, okay! Then Mr. Sun, you are busy, I'm going down, I'm waiting for your opinion, don't worry!"

Sun Quan smiled and nodded, "Well, you go downstairs first!

When Dong Bao politely left and closed the office door, the smile on Sun Quan's face turned into a touch of helplessness, sighed, and looked at the script on the table speechlessly.