Yi Chao was speechless for a while, pointed at Liang Yue'e and Liu Chunyan and said, "Come, these two real art college art students, you can draw a picture for them to see." By the way, ask them how much money art students spend each year. ”

dragged her to Li Zhikai, and continued: "Do you still want to take the acting test? Don't think you can lie, you will perform." Is it easy to be a star? You still want to be a star if you don't have any culture, you don't have talent? Now, there is also a musician here, and he has his own band. His musical talent is not fake, when do you think he will become famous?"

Li Zhikai smiled and said, "Brother's talent can't be suppressed, it's naturally obvious." But my brother doesn't play the band to be famous, he really likes it. It's not important if it's money! A broken guitar is only 20,000 or 30,000 yuan. ”

Yanzi asked curiously: "Little prince, have you been maintained by a rich woman?

Li Zhikai ignored her words and directly put on sunglasses and closed his eyes to rest.

Liang Yue'e nodded and said, "Don't talk nonsense, the band is usually sponsored." However, it does cost money to engage in art, not to mention that at your current age, whether it is learning to draw or something else, it is a little late. ”

Zhang Moyao pouted, and held back for a long time before saying, "Lao Yi, you are just afraid that I will spend your money." It's a big deal, I'll keep the accounts, and I'll pay you back when I go to work in the future. I can sign up for an internship, it doesn't cost anything. ”

Yi Chao still wanted to criticize a few words, but Jiang Lei stopped him and said, "Okay, you have adapted to the role of the old father on the first day?" ”

couldn't help but say, pushed Yi Chao to go to the pantry, turned around and said to everyone: "Don't rub it any more, a matter of a few hundred words, hurry up and finish editing and send it to the group." ”

The two entered the pantry, busy contacting old classmates and teachers to see if they could help Zhang Moyao find a school to receive them.

Outside, the four whites were editing stories on their mobile phones, and some were chatting with each other.

Teacher Wang Guohui wrote in his notebook for a few minutes, then lit a cigarette and went to the balcony to swallow the clouds and smoke.

Zhang Moyao was bored alone, chatting with the four of them, and for a while she came to Li Zhikai to ask if the guitar was good to talk about, and for a while asked Liang Yue'e if their school was fun.

Half an hour later, several people posted their edited passages to the group one after another.

Jiang Lei and Yi Chao came out of the pantry and looked at what they wrote first.

After a while, Jiang Lei said: "Fatty, what kind of nonsense are you writing? Zhang San and Li Si, you can take people's names!"

Qin Xiangyang was cheeky and said: "I wrote such a wonderful martial arts story, this is through the two supporting roles of Zhang San and Li Si arguing about who is the hero. So as to spread out the entire story of the rivers and lakes, paving the way for the protagonist to be introduced. ”

Yi Chao said: "You have a lot of words, and your imagination is sloppy, and you have barely built a preliminary world of rivers and lakes." What kind of Kanto hero, Miaojiang Witch Gu Master, Qingfeng Pavilion Sword God, there are many characters but there is no focus, and it is not clear who the protagonist is. ”

Jiang Lei emphatically added: "If you take what you wrote as the beginning of the novel, no one will read it." Now the online article pays attention to the golden three chapters, and the most taboo is to use the narrative method of traditional martial arts. Bring the theme with a small character or a small story, and will die quickly. ”

Yi Chao thought for a while and said: "Qin Xiangyang describes the martial arts rivers and lakes, and Yanzi writes about love, and she is coquettish with her boyfriend ......."

"It's not that I'm coquettish with my boyfriend, it's the heroine I wrote who is coquettish with her boyfriend. Yanzi corrected: "I want to be coquettish too, I haven't found any male tickets!"

Yi Chao smiled: "It's just a romantic and warm scene." The dancing brush writing is better than yours, and this is a story about a loser's pursuit of love. ”

Liang Yue'e said strangely: "I obviously wrote the story of a strong woman and a big heroine." The eldest lady and the female elite of the shopping mall defeated the opponent and finally humiliated him in front of everyone. How can you see that love is coming. ”

Jiang Lei flipped through the news and read very emotionally: "Ah, phew!" The beautiful woman stopped, looked back sideways, leaned back, glanced obliquely from under her sunglasses, and snorted at the man who was chasing after her. Unshaven expression, proud gesture, unabashedly contemptuous of each other. It was as if the man was like a dirty poor pug, and said with great disgust: 'Follow me again, and beware of you being a scoundrel.' ’”

Jiang Lei didn't continue to read it, and said: "It's really indistinguishable, it's like a love story that can't be asked for." ”

Liang Yue'e argued: "The tone of your reading is wrong, not to mention that there are only a few hundred words in total, of course it is difficult to distinguish." ”

Yi Chao patted the table and said, "So, this is to bring out the character's character according to the character's tone and demeanor, so as to lead to the storyline." Well, let's do a live COS sitcom show. ”

Zhang Moyao was the first to raise her hand and said happily: "I want to act, I want to act." ”

Yanzi said with some disgust: "What's so good about acting?"

Yi Chao emphasized: "This 'ah, bah' is more colloquial, so the tone is very important, and the wrong tone is another story." I use this to let you know that our descriptions need to be accurate. originally wanted to write a coquettish love drama, but the reader saw it as a state of quarreling between the two. Fatty, you play a role. ”

Qin Xiangyang stood up hesitantly and asked, "Who am I playing with?"

Zhang Moyao beckoned: "I, I!" ran over and pulled Qin Xiangyang aside, and said, "Let's be coquettish and cute first!"

Qin Xiangyang became more nervous, and looked at everyone for help.

Yi Chao reminded: "The girl left angrily, and the boy chased after her, trying to pull her hand, but she didn't hold it tightly several times, and was thrown off by the girl." The girl stopped instead......"

"Lao Yi, are you done talking? I'm about to start acting. Oba ......"

Mo Yao didn't care about Qin Xiangyang's restrained appearance, and forcibly added a lot of foreplay dialogue to herself, so she snorted, turned around and left.

It took about ten minutes for the two of them to finally act decently. followed by three other performances, which made a few whites have a lot of fun.

Jiang Lei suddenly had a flash of inspiration and said: "In the future, when we officially write an article, if we can't write it, we can write a paragraph like this at zero hour, and each person will be divided into several roles to write." I think that's probably a good idea!"

After chatting for a while, Jiang Lei looked at the time and beckoned everyone to go downstairs for dinner. It wasn't until nine o'clock that he and Yi Chao sent everyone home.