For these long-term things that Li Mo thought in his heart, whether it was December or Ye Ge, he didn't think of going there, and December was paying attention to whether he could get such a good script worldview.

But what Ye Ge was thinking about was how to change the script in the shortest possible time, so that everyone nodded in agreement, the things in front of him had not been done yet, and of course he didn't have the heart to care about other things.

December was a little excited, and after seeing Li Mo say this, he immediately said: "Then thank you Miss Li, as for the script, you can put twelve hearts, I will definitely do my best to change it in the shortest possible time." ”

"Okay, then you talk to Ye Ge first, he has already figured out how to write the script, you can communicate well, so you can start writing as soon as possible. Li Mo nodded and said with a smile on his face.

Hearing this, Ye Ge made a gesture of invitation to December, and the two walked towards the pavilion together, and after sitting down, Ye Ge asked first.

"Mr. Script, how much have you read and do you have an idea?"

December said: "After reading the content of the first half, what impressed me the most was of course the world view part, which is very novel, very thick, and very promising, but the story told, I tell you the truth, it's too old-fashioned." ”

"Well, what else?" Ye Ge nodded, expressing his agreement with December's opinion, and continued to ask.

"The plot is very old-fashioned, the story is very thin, and there are some inconsistencies in some places, from the perspective of micro-films, there are a few unreasonable places in the short forty or fifty minutes of plot, which is a bit too much. December said.

"That's what I thought, so I had to revise the story content of the entire script, leaving only the world view and overall structure, and we rethought the rest. Ye Ge nodded and said.

"I'll tell you what I think, you take note of it, and then we'll talk about how to start writing. ”

"Don't wait for the other two brothers, Miss Li told me that two old friends are also coming over. December heard this.

"Let's talk about it first, the plot and so on, there won't be any problems in the general direction, it's the details that matter, and my idea is to divide the script into three parts, and each of you is responsible for one part. Ye Ge said.

In this way, even if you have any different ideas, you can add them directly when you write them, and when you finish writing them for the first time, we will run in and revise them again. ”

"The most important thing is that the story must be complete, exciting, unconventional, and bring out the best in the world structure. ”

"That's it, that's very demanding, Mr. Ye, are you sure you have to accomplish so many things in such a short time?" December said.

"Sure, this is a basic requirement, it must be met, and if it is not met, then there is no point in revising the whole script. Ye Ge immediately said categorically when he heard this.

"Well, all I can say is, I do my best. December thought for a moment and said.

The author is not a fairy, the creation of a story takes time and patience, it is not easy to tell a story well in a short time, but also to tell the story perfectly, without loopholes, where is it so simple.

The two continued to communicate, Ye Ge told December his thoughts completely, there were things he didn't understand, and he also explained and analyzed, and December listened to it with great admiration.

Although the specific text was not written by Ye Ge, the story in his mind was indeed very exciting, as long as it could be fully displayed, it could meet the requirements he said before.

December felt a lot of pressure, and began to hope that the other two brothers who were traveling with him would come soon, and he couldn't bear it alone.

After saying all his thoughts to December, Ye Ge took the initiative to leave, leaving the space for him to think.

Finding Li Mo, Ye Ge asked, "There are two more authors, when will they arrive?"

"Those two people are no longer in City A, one of them is still far away, and they need to take a plane to come, and then pick them up from the airport after landing, and it is estimated that they will arrive at about five or six o'clock in the afternoon. Li Mo said.

Hearing this, Ye Ge frowned, and said: "If you arrive at five or six o'clock, it's too late to discuss the storyline, so let's find a way to contact them, let's have an online video discussion first, and we can start directly after we arrive." ”

Li Mo hesitated for a moment, the person had just arrived and had to start working immediately, this matter seemed a bit harsh, the author is also a person, and they invited him, how should he let people take a break.

"I'll contact them first, talk to them about it, and then I'll talk to you. Finally, Li Mo said.

"Okay, you've got in touch with ......" Ye Ge nodded as usual, and before he finished speaking, there was a noisy sound outside.

"What the hell, Lao Tzu wants this courtyard, are you stupid, dare not keep it for Lao Tzu and give it to others?"

At the same time as the voice came, I saw a young man in his twenties, dressed in a flowing manner, walking in from the door, in addition to him, there were also four or five warblers and Yanyan, women dressed as flowers.

Ye Ge frowned slightly, after the young man came in, his eyes first fell on him, and then looked at Li Mo, a trace of stunning and obscene light flashed in his eyes.

"Who dared to intercept Lao Tzu's Hu at that time, just your grandson, right? Lao Tzu is in a good mood today, don't worry about you in general, get out of here, this money will be treated as Lao Tzu's reward for you, and you will still earn it." The young man said, took out a stack of money from his handbag and threw it at Ye Ge.

Li Mo's face turned cold when she saw this, of course she was very angry when she insulted Ye Ge like this.

Ye Ge's face was indifferent, he didn't even look at this person, and said directly to the manor manager who came in: "Manager, we have already contracted here, we need to be quiet for the past two days, don't let them in." ”

"Damn, boy, you listen to arrogance, it's crazy, Lao Tzu is an idle person, etc., blind your dog's eyes! Don't be embarrassed, get out of your own way, get in the way of Lao Tzu's eyes, so that you can't eat and walk around." The young man said with an arrogant attitude.

His eyes fell on Li Mo's expression, and the corners of his mouth hooked up a lewd smile and said: "It's that you are a good chick, you can stay and have a good time with Lao Tzu for two days. ”

When Li Mo heard this, he was about to step forward and lash out at this person, but Ye Ge stopped him and said lightly: "Have you finished calling, you can leave after calling, my patience is limited, so it's best not to make me angry." ”