Xie Tianhong couldn't read it anymore after watching it for more than half an hour, silently closed the script, first looked at Lin Su himself, and then looked at Chen Wensheng, not knowing what to say.

Seeing this, Chen Wensheng took the initiative to ask, "How do you feel?"

Xie Tianhong pinched his brows, and then spoke: "Teacher Chen, if you really let me say it, I can just say it, I have always spoken more directly." In the end, his gaze swept lightly from Lin Su.

The implication couldn't be more obvious.

Lin Su immediately followed suit: "Director Xie, you don't have to take my feelings into account. ”

"If this book wasn't handed to me by Mr. Chen, I wouldn't have read it again after turning two pages, but fortunately, Mr. Chen explained in advance that this was a script written by you, otherwise I would have to wonder if Chu Yang had pulled a small gunman from the outside to prevaricate me, this level is really inconsistent with Chu Yang. ”

Xie Tianhong really said something, and even asked Chen Wensheng for confirmation in the end, "In Chuyang, it is estimated that you can't even reach the passing line, right?"

Chu Yang's position in the circle is there, and the works he has produced are also obvious to all, even if they have not been exposed to crime themes, and the internal screenwriters may not be good at it, but they will never write like this.

Moreover, Chu Yang can also hire screenwriters from outside.

Therefore, he really felt that if this script hadn't been written by Lin Su, it would have been impossible for it to appear in Chuyang, let alone show it to himself.

However, this also confirms a point from the side, Chu Yang or Teacher Chen really values Lin Su.

Xie Tianhong thought of this, squinting at the little beauty beside him.

Chen Wensheng listened to his question, showed helpless eyes, but did not respond.

Silence, however, is an answer in itself.

Lin Su also knew in her heart that she had always known that she was far from Chuyang's standard, and Xie Tianhong's words today made her realize how big this distance was.

Xie Tianhong originally wanted to continue, after all, the few words just now were just the beginning, but he silently closed his mouth after noticing Lin Su's state.

When I first saw her downstairs, this girl's clear and beautiful eyes shocked me, and I immediately felt that she was like a lily blooming in the morning, fresh, simple and charming, and I couldn't help but want to tease.

It wasn't until they spoke before that they realized that she was actually alert and clever, not as easy to bully as she seemed, and her eyes were even brighter when she was scolding.

At this moment, Lin Su was a little distracted, and his eyes were dim.

For the first time, Xie Tianhong's mouth was as sharp as a knife and couldn't say cruel words.

Just as he was struggling, he heard Lin Su speak by himself, "Director Xie, I know that the script I wrote is very bad, and Mr. Chen also mentioned me yesterday, and said that you are the best at shooting this kind of theme, so, if you can, I would like to ask you to guide me to make the second change." ”

"Let me guide you to change the script? Hehe, I'm a director and not a screenwriter, I'm not good at writing scripts, and besides, if you have Mr. Chen by your side, why don't you need to find someone else." ”

Chen Wensheng continued his words, "I haven't touched the crime subject, otherwise I wouldn't have asked you for help." ”

Xie Tianhong understood as soon as he heard it.

It turned out that Teacher Chen had already given this girl an idea to let her find herself.

Lin Su said again: "Director Xie, I am the author of "Chasing the Murderer", I want to adapt it well, so that it can be liked by readers and audiences, if you don't have a work arrangement for the next period of time, I really beg you to stay and guide me, any conditions or requirements you can put forward, I will try my best to meet it." ”

When Xie Tianhong heard that she was the author of the original work, his eyes flashed with surprise, and then he looked at Chen Wensheng again, and suddenly understood.

And in the face of the sincere Lin Su, he couldn't say anything to refuse for a while.

"Xiao Xie, in fact, you are a bit like this girl, you have given up the safe and comfortable circle, and turned to explore the unknown road for your ideals. Chen Wensheng said a few words to help.

Xie Tianhong's eyes flashed slightly, squinted his peach blossom eyes and smiled: "I don't have any ideals, it's just a fool of nothing." ”

Lin Su belongs to the people who actively strive for goals when they have them, and they don't like to beat around the bush, so he continued: "Director Xie, can you tell me what the biggest problem of the script is so far?"

Xie Tianhong glanced at her, then at Chen Wensheng, and finally compromised: "Rhythm." ”

"Actually, there is one problem with your script, but it is also a fatal problem, and that is the rhythm. You may think that this is just one problem, but this problem determines the success or failure of your work, and the reason why I just said that Chu Yang will not have such a script is because Chu Yang's screenwriting teachers know this. ”

When Lin Su heard this, he also told him his distress truthfully, "The teacher also said that there was a problem with the rhythm, but I don't know what the problem is." ”

Xie Tianhong actually understood a little after knowing that she was the author of the original work.

She is too familiar with the original book and relies on the original book a little, so the adaptation only turned the content into the corresponding lines and actions and other lens language, but because she is not familiar with the camera, she can't grasp the rhythm.

Chen Wensheng saw that he didn't speak, so he followed: "This is your first time coming to Hengzhen, don't be in a hurry to leave, I'll let Lin Su take you for a good walk." ”

Xie Tianhong smiled bitterly, Mr. Chen wanted to help Lin Su polish the script by himself.

"I owe this favor first. Chen Wensheng added again, and said it seriously.

The words have already been said about this, and Xie Tianhong no longer shirks.

Fortunately, he has no itinerary for the future, since he has decided to return to China to see the film and television industry, Chu Yang is a good object to understand.

He looked at Chen Wensheng, his peach blossom eyes narrowed slightly, "Okay, but we have to make it clear first, we have to eat and live, and I can only give a simple guide or two, and Lin Su has to figure out the script himself." ”

"It's enough to have one or two. ”

Chen Wensheng is very confident in Lin Su, she is smart and willing to work hard, and she has quick thinking, drawing inferences from one another, as long as she sees where her problem is, she will give her time for the rest.

In fact, Xie Tianhong also saw this before agreeing.

The logic and professionalism of "Chasing the Murderer", as well as the characters and lines, are very good, and the only flaw is the rhythm.

As long as Lin Su can solve this point, "Chasing the Murderer" can definitely become a great crime drama, and the director will be handed over to him later.

In fact, as early as when he saw "Chasing the Murderer", Xie Tianhong was guilty of occupational diseases, and he imagined what it would be like to make it into a TV, so some shooting styles were already in his mind.

He winked at Lin Su and said with a smile: "Lin Xiaomei, I hope we have a happy cooperation." ”

"Thank you for your willingness to advise, I will definitely revise the script. ”

"Hey, what is your name Director Xie, rusty, called Brother Hong, kind. When Xie Tianhong said this, he showed a not very serious appearance, and his peach blossom eyes narrowed into a small crescent moon, which was not charming.

Lin Su: "......"

If I hadn't known that he was a friend of the teacher, I would definitely have retreated when I met him.

She suddenly had a feeling that the days ahead might be mysterious.