Chapter 108: Script Comparison
In the morning, Lin Su walked into the office before eight o'clock, and began to study the script after a brief tidying up, and it didn't take long for Chen Wensheng and Xie Tianhong to come.
Seeing her, Xie Tianhong teased her as usual yesterday, "Morning, little beauty, did you sleep soundly when you went back last night?"
"It's good, no dreams all night. ”
"Hey, I said, you really don't have a boyfriend, do you want me to introduce you to one?"
"Don't bother Director Xie, I have a goal. ”
With Fu Chenhui's reminder, Lin Su had a little more awe of Xie Tianhong, knowing that he was not so casual on the surface, so he didn't care about his occasional words and teasing, and just get along with him in the next few days.
When Xie Tianhong heard that there was a goal, he thought it was a certain person from Chuyang Company, and suddenly became a little interested, "Who can win the hearts of beautiful women." ”
"An alumnus who is now studying in country M. ”
Lin Su used Fu Chenhui's identity, thinking that you don't know anyone and are not in China, so you shouldn't be able to inquire now.
"I'm familiar with country m, I'm going to go over in August, which university is he in, do you want me to take a look at it for you? ”
Lin Su: "......"
No matter what you say, this great director can pick up the conversation!
After a pause, she shook her head, "No need, I haven't been sure about his relationship, even if he has a girlfriend, it's normal." ”
"You can think about it, since it doesn't matter, and the person is abroad, why are you still thinking about him?"
"I'm so happy. Lin Su looked at him with a smile and saw what else you could say.
Xie Tianhong opened his mouth and closed it silently, he really had nothing to say, turned around and poured a cup of tea, and then compromised: "Okay, you can just be happy." ”
Lin Su wrinkled his nose and snorted softly, feeling a little joy of victory in his heart.
Chen Wensheng watched the two bickering the whole time, and at this time he also showed helplessness, shook his head with a smile, and then began to busy his work.
After the vignette, Xie Tianhong and Lin Su also became serious and began to continue analyzing the script.
"Yesterday we talked about three things, and we are still missing the last rhythm, which is the most important thing you need to pay attention to. ”
"I went back last night and finished the remaining half of the script, and you kept all the seven cases in it, according to the rhythm you wrote, the script is divided into five 4-episode cases, two 5-episode cases, a total of 30 episodes. ”
Speaking of this, Xie Tianhong looked at Lin Su and asked, "Have you watched any crime mystery dramas?" ”
"I've watched a forensic theme in China, I've watched several foreign films before, and I've been practicing pulling films recently, and I've watched the M drama "Crime". When it came to "Crime", Lin Su also quietly raised his eyes and swept the big director in front of him.
"Watching "Crime"?" Xie Tianhong raised his eyebrows slightly, then raised the corners of his mouth and said with a smile: "How do you feel about this film?"
"It's beautiful!" Lin Su said definitely and seriously.
She's not a fool, the director is sitting in front of you and letting you evaluate the work in person, can you say it's not good?
Xie Tianhong rubbed his chin, "What's good?"
Lin Su swallowed his saliva, quickly recalled the plot, and then said: "The rhythm is very fast, you can't be distracted when you watch it, otherwise you won't be able to keep up with the progress of the plot, the emotional expression of the characters is very vivid, and the people who watch it are easy to resonate, and the atmosphere is both tense and relaxed, sometimes nervous and sometimes can't help laughing." ”
After answering this question, she suddenly understood something, and showed a look of sudden realization.
Xie Tianhong noticed her eyes and smiled even more dazzlingly, "Where did you pull the tab?"
"I've just watched three episodes. ”
Lin Su only started watching it yesterday morning, and he arrived just after watching an episode Xie Tianhong, and the latter two didn't continue to read it when they were analyzing the script, but after chatting with Fu Chenhui in the evening, they knew that "Crime" was his work, so they continued to study it.
Three episodes are enough, Xie Tianhong glanced at her and said lightly: "Do you remember how many episodes of the first case were told?"
After watching three episodes last night, I have already started to talk about the second case, Lin Su thought about it carefully and replied: "More than two episodes, less than three episodes." ”
"Yes, two and a half episodes. ”
Xie Tianhong nodded and then fell silent, and after glancing at his watch, he squinted and stared at Lin Su with burning eyes.
Gradually, Lin Su was a little uncomfortable, his eyes were not only bright but also very sharp, staring at him so motionless was really testing.
The point is that she doesn't understand why she thinks so much of herself.
Carefully recalling the previous conversation between the two, they talked about the first case of "Crime" and talked about how many episodes, and the answer was two and a half episodes, is there any problem in this? What is the first case about? What are the details?
Lin Su's brain was running rapidly, thinking about the strangeness.
Suddenly, her eyes opened and she found the answer.
"Figured it out?" Xie Tianhong smiled when he saw this, and then leaned back on the back of the chair, his hands crossed on Erlang's legs, and his face looked relaxed and leisurely.
Lin Su nodded with a calm face, "Well, I understand." ”
Xie Tianhong glanced at his watch again, less than ten seconds before and after, his reaction was quite fast, he put down his legs and sat up straight with satisfaction, and said seriously: "This is the rhythm I said, similar types of cases, "Crime" has only written two and a half episodes, while "Chasing the Murderer" has four episodes. ”
Lin Su clenched his fists silently, this is indeed a big gap.
"You may think that there are two suspects in the first case of "Chasing the Murderer", the relationship between the characters is more complicated, and the plot content is naturally a little more, but if you watch "Crime", you will know that the third case in it is also a double suspect, but there are only three episodes. ”
Lin Su exhaled, "The rhythm of "Chasing the Murderer" is slower than "Crime". ”
This is a fact, and she will not refute it or find a reason.
Xie Tianhong saw that she had a good attitude, so he continued: "In fact, similar cases can be found in many crime dramas at home and abroad, so in my experience, the entire script of "Chasing the Murderer" can be compressed to twenty-four or five episodes, which is a very good rhythm in China." ”
From thirty episodes to twenty-four or five episodes, the content of each case has to be cut.
Lin Su's expression was very serious.
"The first four cases in "Chasing the Murderer" are enough for about three episodes, and the last three can be adjusted appropriately, the penultimate case is very good, and there is no problem in expanding the length, and the penultimate can also appropriately increase the content, together with the previous female lawyer's case, properly bury the thread, lead to the real boss behind the scenes, and end decisively in the last case, which cannot be delayed. ”
Xie Tianhong said so much in one breath, and felt that his throat was a little dry, so he picked up the tea on the side and drank it slowly.
Lin Su's expression changed from serious to surprised to serious.
She thought that Director Xie would analyze the rhythm problem with herself like yesterday, but she didn't expect him to directly give a reference to the modified content, and she couldn't help but feel surprised, and then thought carefully about his proposal and how to change the content.
Xie Tianhong drank tea and looked at her again, "Since you also know the problem of rhythm, let's formally talk about the specific aspects of the problem." ”