"Can I take a look?" Yu Jiansheng's gaze fell on the computer screen, and the gaze under his eyes was very bright.

Feng Huanyan generously moved out of the way, gave the position to Yu Jiansheng, and drank the milk by himself.

Yu Jiansheng read the script very seriously, Feng Huanyan finished drinking the milk, moved a chair again, and sat next to Yu Jiansheng.

It's better to read than to write, Feng Huanyan wrote a whole afternoon and evening, and Yu Jiansheng watched it, it only took more than an hour, which was still his meticulous and serious reading.

Yu Jiansheng took off his eyes and turned his head, but he met Feng Huanyan's gaze, the two were very close, and they could feel each other's breathing when they were close.

Feng Huanyan drank the milk, and there were still milk stains on his lips without knowing it.

Yu Jiansheng looked at Feng Huanyan's beautifully shaped lips, wanted to kiss, wanted to taste the taste, was it like drinking milk?

Thinking so, Yu Jiansheng moved a little closer.

Time stopped, the atmosphere was beautiful, and Feng Huanyan's brain lost the ability to think for a moment, but it quickly recovered.

Feng Huanyan stepped back in a panic.

"That...... What do you think, how is the script?" Feng Huanyan changed the topic at the right time and brought Yu Jiansheng's sanity back to reality.

Yu Jiansheng was disappointed, and he almost tasted it.

With a dry cough and an awkward distance, Yu Jiansheng put forward his views on the script.

"I think the main line is very good, but the twists and turns are not enough, the conflict is not enough, and the transformation factors of the protagonist in the later stage are too thin!"

Speaking of the whole thing, Yu Jiansheng is still very serious.

Feng Huanyan scratched her head, what Yu Jiansheng said was also something she had never been sure about.

"It's better to add a little background to the heroine, for example, relatives doubt her ability!" Feng Huanyan took out a pen and paper and began to think.

"The relatives are too weak, it's better to add a boyfriend, the betrayal of feelings!" Yu Jiansheng said.

"It seems that Mr. Yu is quite experienced?" Feng Huanyan said.

Yu Jiansheng touched his nose: "Anyway, I am also from Kai Entertainment Company, so I naturally understand the taste of the public, but you are very easy to cause public resonance, but the strength is not enough, the audience is emotional, the more abusive, the more there is a way out!"

As the owner of a big entertainment company in the entertainment industry, you must understand this industry, know what the audience likes and what you don't like, and look at the market to make a steady profit.

"I think it can also be put into the + emotional drama, in addition to the oppression of relatives, and the comparison between the company's employees, calculations, and suppression, it can be richer and more powerful, and more vigorously express the workplace experience of young people with dreams in modern times. Feng Huanyan wrote the idea on the paper while thinking in his mind. Every now and then, I stop writing and get completely immersed in my creation.

Yu Jiansheng silently accompanied him while putting forward his own opinions.

Before you know it, it's early in the morning.

"It's almost, go to sleep, go to the company tomorrow to write, I won't arrange things for you recently, just concentrate on the script!" Yu Jiansheng put away the pen and paper, not wanting Feng Huanyan to continue to stay up late.

"It's so late, it's hard tonight, you should rest early!"

Yu Jiansheng didn't mention it, but when he did, Feng Huanyan felt a sense of sleepiness.

"I'm fine, go to sleep, before going to bed, remember to wipe your mouth, there are milk stains on the side of your mouth!" Yu Jiansheng admired Feng Huanyan's instantly red face, and then thoughtfully closed the door and left Feng Huanyan alone in the room.

She has been holding on to milk stains for so long, which is really embarrassing.