Chen Wensheng was still in his heart in the morning, but he felt a headache at noon.

This girl writes the script very quickly, but the quality is ...... If you want to put it in the early sun, it is impossible to let her pass.

It's not that the script is bad, the storyline and content are very good, there is nothing to be picky about, but the flaws of the script are too obvious, as long as you are a mature screenwriter or director, you can see the problem at a glance.

"Girl, after you finished writing, did you read the script in its entirety?"

Since Lin Su handed over the script, he had been silently observing the teacher's reaction from time to time all morning, so he already had a bottom in his heart at this moment.

His own adaptation of "Chasing the Murderer" failed.

She suppressed the panic and sadness in her heart, and replied softly: "I have read it, I read it twice before handing it to you." ”

She has always read books quickly, so it only took a few days to read them twice, but she definitely read them seriously.

That's why she's so upset.

I checked it twice, but I couldn't see the problem, but the teacher only took less than half a day, so I can see that my problem is obvious, whether it is the script written or my own ability.

Lin Su lowered his head slightly, his heart was shrouded in a layer of dark clouds, and his whole person lost his spirit.

Chen Wensheng saw that the little girl who was usually full of confidence and energy suddenly became decadent, and knew that she had noticed the problem.

It's just a pity that this girl doesn't know what the problem is.

After more than a month of getting along, he also has an understanding of Lin Su's personality, she said that after reading the script twice, she must have really read it, and it was not just a perfunctory casual glance.

After reading it carefully twice but not finding a problem, it can only mean that she doesn't know what the problem is, or that she doesn't realize the problem at all.

She is a newcomer in the end, and she is the first time she has come into contact with the script, so she can understand it.

Chen Wensheng spoke, "Lin Su, your script is not a big problem, but it has a fatal flaw. ”

"What are the shortcomings?" Lin Su immediately raised her head when she heard the teacher's words, panicked and surprised, at this moment she just wanted to know what the problem was.

"Rhythm. ”

Although it was only two short words, Chen Wensheng said it sonorously and powerfully.

Although Chu Yang has never made a crime drama, and he has never created it, but he has seen crime works, and the rhythm of this kind of work is really important.

In addition to logic and story, the audience also wants to experience excitement and tension.

"Rhythm?" Lin Su carefully savored these two words, but still couldn't understand what the teacher meant.

Is it saying that the pace of the script of "Chasing the Murderer" is slow?

But she is adapted from the original book, and even omitted some unnecessary plots, the rhythm should be faster than the original book, and the original book does not have a problem with the reader's reaction rhythm.

Chen Wensheng seemed to have perspective eyes and could see through the confusion in her heart, so he smiled and said: "It is different from TV series, the former relies on imagination, you reason step by step according to the setting, so as to promote the development of the story, as long as the plot is not disjointed, it can give people a compact feeling, but the latter is intuitive visual effects and picture impact, and the speed of the plot is clear at a glance." ”

"You're not familiar with the camera, so you don't see the coherence of the whole scene. ”

Lin Su fell silent again.

When she was writing the script, she could imagine many scenes in her head, but she really didn't think about what it would look like when they were connected.

Chen Wensheng knew that her mood at the moment must be very complicated, but the problem must be solved, "I have never been exposed to this subject matter at all, I can only talk about my own experience, so I plan to find a senior for you to guide, do you agree?"

Lin Su was stunned, and then nodded subconsciously, "Okay, I agree." ”

"Coincidentally, he's going to come to Hengzhen tomorrow to have a look, just so he can guide you, and you can also run in with each other in advance. ”

Lin Su finally came back to his senses, suppressed the thoughts surging in his heart, and wondered, "Teacher, who are you talking about?"

"Xie Tianhong is the director I found for "Chasing the Murderer", and he is the director I personally admire the most about the current domestic directors who shoot this kind of theme. ”

Lin Su was surprised to hear that the teacher had such a high opinion of this director, but he couldn't help but ask, "Does Director Xie also have a study of the script?"

"He may not be good at writing scripts, but it's definitely okay to point out the problems of your script, don't worry, it's not a big problem to have him guide your script. ”

"Okay, I'll listen to the teacher. ”

Lin Su knew that there was a problem with his script, but he didn't know how to change it, and now that there was an insider who wanted to guide, he naturally couldn't ask for it.

In the evening, she deliberately checked Xie Tianhong's file on the Internet.

After searching for a long time, I didn't find the director Xie Tianhong, the only one who was close was a photographer Xie Tianhong, who had held a personal photography exhibition, and some of his works won international awards, but there were no film and television works on the information, and there were no photos.

Lin Su could only give up and wait for Director Xie to arrive.

When she went to work the next day, in addition to pulling films, all she thought about was this great director.

Pulling the film is also commonly known as "pickpocketing drama" in the circle, which is to peel off the cocoon of film and television dramas and deeply interpret every scene.

This is Chen Wensheng's advice to her yesterday, let her watch foreign crime suspense dramas and learn the lines and rhythm emotions in them.

After reading too much, she will naturally be able to discover the problems of her script.

Just when Lin Su's eyes were sore, a mobile phone rang in the office.

Soon, Chen Wensheng picked it up and said, "Xiao Xie, have you found it? Do you want me to come down and pick you up later?" Okay, then you come up by yourself and I'll be on the fourth floor." ”

Lin Su blinked, and immediately volunteered: "Teacher, is it Director Xie, I'll go down to pick him up?"

"Okay, but it's still a few minutes away, he's coming to Chuyang for the first time, and it's hard for him to navigate all the way. Chen Wensheng couldn't help laughing at the end.

Lin Su also answered with a smile: "It's okay, I'll go down and wait for him first, my script still counts on him, I must show my respect for him as soon as possible." ”

"Huh...... You girl, what you say makes sense, then you can go. ”

"Okay. Lin Suying left the office with his mobile phone and floated into the elevator with brisk steps.

After waiting for about ten minutes at the entrance of the hall downstairs, a Land Rover off-road vehicle stopped at the main entrance of Chuyang, and soon, a man in a red jacket opened the door and jumped down, and did not forget to cut his hair in the rearview mirror and straighten his clothes.

Lin Su's eyes flashed with surprise when he saw him, this can't be Director Xie, right?

Just as she was hesitating whether to step forward, she suddenly heard the other party come over and shout casually: "Hi, beauty." ”

Lin Su: "......"

I didn't believe that this person would be Director Xie in the teacher's mouth!

"Are you an employee of Chuyang?" Xie Tianhong touched his chin and looked at the little beauty in front of him, these eyes were really good-looking.

The visitor is a guest, Lin Su hinted at himself, and smiled reluctantly at the big sao bag in front of him, "If you are here to find someone, you can go to the front desk to register." As he spoke, he pointed to the front desk of the hall behind him.

"K, I'm looking for Mr. Chen. Xie Tianhong picked the corners of his mouth and walked inside.

Lin Su was stunned.

Looking for Teacher Chen? This person is really Xie Tianhong!