Chapter 40 As long as you call your aunt, you are not a master
For his second brother-in-law, Xu Yan was very obsessed with him for a while when he was a child.
After all, in the eighties and nineties, Uncle Liang Qi was regarded as a representative writer of domestic martial arts novels.
The book he wrote, "Scholarly Enmity and Enmity", was the earliest remake of a martial arts novel, which was broadcast when there was only a black and white TV in a village in the countryside at that time, and it was very popular for a while.
Xu Yan also liked to watch "Scholarly Enmity and Enmity" when he was a child, and he especially liked Xiao Daxia in it.
When I knew that this was a novel written by my second brother-in-law, I was even more pestered to live directly in my second brother-in-law's house one summer vacation, and I wanted to learn art from a teacher with a dead face.
At first, of course, he thought that the second brother-in-law could write such a martial arts novel, and he must be a great martial arts master.
Therefore, he wanted to learn martial arts, but later found out that his second brother-in-law was so fat that it was difficult to turn around, and he couldn't even beat him when he was in elementary school.
Therefore, after Xu Yan learned the truth, he retreated to the second best thing and asked his second brother-in-law for advice on how to write martial arts novels.
At that time, Xu Yan was still relatively naïve, and after being fascinated by martial arts TV series, he not only wanted to become a martial arts hero himself, but also wanted to be like his second brother-in-law, and created an invincible martial arts hero in the world.
And Uncle Liang Qi was at the peak of his life at that time, so he was happy to brag and teach in front of this little nephew.
Strictly speaking, Xu Yan really figured out all the routines of Uncle Liang Qi writing martial arts novels during that summer vacation.
Heroes are righteous and powerful, and their martial arts are the best in the world.
The villain is inhuman, despicable, and has very powerful martial arts but is a little worse than the hero.
The heroines are all infatuated, they only love the hero, and they are willing to die for the hero.
The supporting characters are all heroes, so powerful! Heroes come to us! When you encounter danger, you should quickly find heroes. When he was dying, he held his last breath in order to say, "If only the hero was here".
In fact, it was precisely because of what he learned from Uncle Liang Qi that Xu Yan completely lost interest in martial arts novels.
Looking at Uncle Liang Qi's other martial arts novels, including the works of other domestic martial arts writers, Xu Yan, who knows the routine, is not interested at all.
In the next ten years, his second brother-in-law produced a martial arts novel that was almost no different from "Scholarly Enmity and Enmity" at a rate of about two years.
This made Xu Yan slowly go from admiration at the beginning, to disappointment later, and then to despise the second brother-in-law's practice of disrespecting literature, not working hard to innovate, and completely insulting the spirit of "chivalry".
It's just that......
What Xu Yan never expected was that one day he really wrote a martial arts novel and posted it on the Internet, and the first one to bombard himself with the flag was his second brother-in-law, Uncle Liang Qi.
Not only that, Xu Yan looked at other related Weibo again, and the second brother-in-law still has many allies.
They have made a very professional criticism of the novel "The Condor Heroes" in terms of "the style of the novel", "the life experience of the protagonist", "language and diction", etc.
Especially the second brother-in-law scolded him, Xu Yan really felt ...... Won my heart!
is worthy of the second brother-in-law, all the points have been caught, and even ...... Even the abuse point that has not yet come out, the second brother-in-law seems to have predicted it in advance.
In his critical article, he said, "The son of a villain like this is the protagonist, and he acts so perversely and weirdly, if you write it normally, there will definitely be no good end in the future."
Moreover, Uncle Liang Qi also concluded at the end of the article.
"I am very sad to see that the martial arts novel "The Condor Heroes" is so popular on the Chinese Internet of the End. In the past, everyone said that martial arts were dead, but I never wanted to believe or admit it.
I don't know who the author of the book "The Condor Heroes" is, if this author has a teacher, then his teacher is the biggest sinner in martial arts novels.
Look at the students he taught, what are they writing? It is not in line with the true chivalrous spirit of martial arts novels at all, how can such a protagonist like a villain really expound the essential spirit of evil not prevailing over good in martial arts novels?
Now, I have to admit that under the popularity of martial arts novels like "The Legend of the Condor Heroes", martial arts are really dead. And the teacher of the author of this novel dug up the grave for martial arts, and the author of this novel personally strangled martial arts and buried it, and then used this book "The Condor Heroes" is the best epitaph......"
Ooh!
Sprinkle with joy!
This critique is almost 8,000 words.
According to Uncle Liang Qi's manuscript fee, at least at the level of 1,000 words, this manuscript is really equivalent to a month's salary of a salaried person.
"The second brother-in-law is really reasonable! The more you scold, the more critical mistakes you make, I believe that readers who read this review will not read the book "The Condor Heroes" anymore, and can cool down my book in time......
Xu Yan smiled and looked at the Weibo circle, saying that he was quite satisfied with the offensive of this friendly army!
Including the comments posted by a group of traditional writers, almost all of them are crusades against "The Condor Heroes".
Isn't that nonsense?
Those traditional writers have always been unhappy with online novels, and when they catch a popular online novel, they can't wait to take a magnifying glass to find various angles to criticize it.
The funniest thing is that these traditional writers say that online novels are too colorful......
Is this bullying our netizens and readers not to read local novels?
You go and take a look, in the seventies and eighties, that is, the chairmen and members of the major writers' associations today, their famous works back then were all written about the of the educated youth going to the countryside.
One book is more yellow than the other, all kinds of descriptions, all kinds of fantasies, all kinds of details......
Gee!
It's really enviable!
After all, those who write online novels can't even write from the neck down now.
As a result, it has become like this, and some traditional writers are still clamoring for online novels to be too sunny and need to be completely killed.
This is also the reason why Xu Yan has been particularly disgusted with traditional writers like Uncle Liang Qi in recent years.
The books you write yourself don't conform to the current market and trends, so you can suppress and belittle the emerging online literary novels in all kinds of ways.
From their current siege and bombardment of "The Condor Heroes", it can be seen that it is general.
Xu Yan was originally quite happy, and having Uncle Liang Qi take the lead in criticizing it will definitely make readers stay away from "The Condor Heroes".
But seeing those traditional writers squirting feces, I couldn't help but want to have a good fight with them.
"Well, forget it...... What's the point of arguing with them about this? You can never wake up someone who is pretending to be asleep. ”
Shaking his head, Xu Yan didn't pay attention to it anymore, but ate something and couldn't wait to start creating the next content of "The Condor Heroes".
Don't ask why Xu Yan is so diligent, because he is also chasing more!
If you don't write it out, you will read it more slowly in your head!
This damn novel is so good......
I really want to know the plot later!
This Yang Guo is very interesting!
He really betrayed the Quanzhen Sect and was about to betray his teacher.
So what should he do?
Oh yes! it's out......
The dragon girl who appeared earlier!
Is Yang Guo going to go with her?
Grandma Sun was killed, and before she died, she asked Miss Long to take care of Yang Guo.
Oh, my God!
Writing this, Xu Yan couldn't help but breathe rapidly, and his whole body became a little uncomfortable.
He knew very well that the setting behind it was ...... The protagonist and the later master got along, and there was such a master-apprentice relationship that he carefully designed.
And that's not all......
What's more, in Xu Yan's design, the protagonist's master is going to cuckold the protagonist.
Substituted into the current plot direction......
Oh my God!
Xu Yan's heart immediately pinched......
Don't!
Miss Long is Yang Guo's next master?
Oh, no, it can't be......
Yang Guo, you must not worship the Tomb Sect, and you must not recognize Miss Long as your master!
Xu Yan's heart screamed and roared infinitely, but it didn't work!
He watched as he typed the next plot into the computer word by word.
Yes!
Yang Guo successfully betrayed the Quanzhen Sect, and then worshiped the tomb sect of the little dragon girl.
However, what made Xu Yan still have a glimmer of life was that Yang Guo did not call Xiaolongnu his master, but "aunt".
"Haha! I must have been overthinking. Worshipping the Tomb Sect may just be an inconsequential overkill in the middle, Yang Guo's real master will definitely not be Xiaolongnu's. Otherwise, how could she just call her aunt......"
Relieved, Xu Yan had the thrill of riding a roller coaster, but the final result was still good, at least Xiaolongnu didn't become a real master of Yang!
Right!
As long as the mouth is called aunt, it will not be Master's.
sent it out again this time, and Xu Yan clicked on the page data of "The Condor Heroes" again, but he was completely stunned.
"The Condor Heroes"
Click: 1367889
Recommended ticket: 234568
Collection: 236789
Comments: 156780
Forehead?
What's going on?
Hit a million?
It's just another day!
Who!
And who did the good deeds!
Although Xu Yan doesn't know much about online literature, he has also understood that it is impossible for a book to increase by more than 200,000 collections in one day!
After all, the readership of the end of the Chinese network at this time is so big in total!
As a result, look at the comments......
Xu Yan completely understood.
"I saw Mr. Liang criticizing this book on Weibo, so I will criticize it too. ”
"Alas, don't really say, this book is really different from the martial arts I usually read. When I first read it, I didn't like it very much, but I ended up reading a few more pages, and there was something!"
"I also came from Mr. Liang's Weibo, and many writers are saying that this book is not good, but I look pretty good!
......
[Tomorrow's three watches!