The next morning, March 21. Pen, fun, pavilion www. biquge。 info

Luoyang entered the contemporary comic world, and when the time stopped at seven o'clock, the plot of the first three paintings of "Dragon Ball" was pasted, and when the page showed the words "successful", the corners of Luoyang's mouth hooked up a smile: "Our adventure starts now......"

"Dragon Ball" created by Luoyang has made some appropriate adjustments compared to the anime and animation in the previous life.

is an adjustment, not a modification, Luoyang is appropriately adjusting the plot of the early stage of "Dragon Ball" to make the rhythm of this comic more bright.

This is also what Luoyang has been doing, and the same is true for writing novels, maybe a certain work is a masterpiece, but a masterpiece will also have its shortcomings, after all, there are very few truly perfect things in the world, so Luoyang will occasionally make some adjustments to the work.

This is the case with the previous "Langya Bang", and the same is true with the later "Buddha is the Way".

However, Luoyang also knows that the reason why a masterpiece is a masterpiece is because of the essence hidden in the context.

Luoyang is very sensitive to this aspect, so no matter how it is modified, Luoyang will never move the essence of those works.

And within just five minutes of the release of "Dragon Ball", the data shows that hundreds of thousands of readers have clicked on it - which is due to the previous work "Five Centimeters per Second", and also has the bonus effect of Luoyang's fame.

However, although the beginning is great, how to follow up still depends on the plot.

At this moment, many editors in the contemporary comic world are anxiously waiting for the results of comics......

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Yu Yuanhang is a die-hard comic fan of Gong Xueyi.

He especially likes the comic "Fighting Demons", and he played a very active role in the holy war that caused a sensation on the Internet some time ago.

Because he wants to give "Fighting Demons" the support he can, Yu Yuanhang must resist Luoyang who dares to bully Gong Xueyi, and as for Gong Xueyi's black Luoyang in the comics, it was naturally selectively ignored by Yu Yuanhang.

At seven o'clock the next morning, the alarm clock set by Yu Yuanhang rang.

He opened his eyes, washed up quickly, and sat down in front of the computer: "Dragon Ball should be released......"

Of course, Yu Yuanhang is so active not because he is looking forward to this manga, the real reason why he is positive is to find out the shortcomings in "Dragon Ball", and then use them to team up with other fans of Gong Xueyi to spray Luoyang fiercely.

clicked into the contemporary comic world, and sure enough, "Dragon Ball" has been released and hung on the homepage.

"Hmph, wait, as long as this comic is not good-looking, you can ask for more blessings......"

Between talking to himself, Yu Yuanhang had already clicked on the first page of "Dragon Ball", and the next moment, a large picture appeared in Yu Yuanhang's field of vision, this big picture depicted a child, he was carrying a stick on his back, looking very cute.

What surprised Yu Yuanhang the most was that there was actually a tail on this child's buttocks.

Is this the protagonist?,It's not strange to have a tail or something in the comics.,Yu Yuanhang continued to read.。

Click on the second page of the manga "Dragon Ball", and a narration appears on the page: "In a mountain a long, long time ago, there lived a child, this child is called Monkey King, and our story begins here." ”

Burst......

Yu Yuanhang's expression instantly became very strange.

If you want to have subtitles in the form of a comic strip on his face, it must be the comic-style nits that are teasing me?

Yu Yuanhang felt that it didn't take much effort to get it, and the slot of Luoyang's new work came to say: "The protagonist's name is Sun Wukong, is it possible that this comic is an adaptation of the ninety-nine eighty-one difficulties of "Journey to the West" into a bloody fight, a so-called bear child with a tail and a stick is Sun Wukong?"

When it comes to Monkey King, it is really familiar to every Chinese person.

And "Journey to the West" in the dragon country of this time and space, in terms of fame, it is not lost to the previous world at all.

So when it comes to Monkey King, the first image that comes to everyone's mind is the monkey with a hairy face and a thunderous mouth, and now the protagonist of Luoyang's new comics is called Monkey King, and the character design really has a bit of imitation, which is undoubtedly very strange.

"But let's keep watching......"

Although the name of the protagonist is a slot, it does not affect the whole comic, and it is not convincing to attack Luoyang in this way.

On the second page, the bear child appears, carrying a large saw on his shoulder, stepping on a log under his feet, and letting the log roll forward.

This bear child is the one on the first page, the main character of the comics, Sun Wukong, who steps on a log and transports the wood back to his small home. Then he threw the wood into the air, jumped himself, and actually split the wood with his fist in the air.

"It's kind of interesting. ”

Looking at the nimble skills of the bear child in the comics, Yu Yuanhang thought in his heart.

But there's nothing strange about it, Luoyang's new work is released in such a high-profile manner, if it doesn't have some strength, it can only mean that Luoyang's brain has a problem, so for the occasional highlights in the comics, Yu Yuanhang is not surprised.

After chopping the wood, the bear child returned to the house and bowed to a bead on the table: "Grandpa, I'm going to eat." ”

"Grandpa, what is this bead?" Yu Yuanhang Music somewhat understood, this bead may be the so-called Dragon Ball, after all, the name of this comic is "Dragon Ball".

Immediately afterwards, Sun Wukong began to find food in the mountains. He would swing around with the vines, and he would jump between the waters. Later, he wrapped his tail around the branch and hung himself upside down on the tree and ate the apple.

Seeing Sun Wukong like this, Yu Yuanhang linked it with the Monkey King in "Journey to the West".

However, unlike the Monkey King in "Journey to the West", this bear child Sun Wukong loves to laugh very much, and his smile is very innocent. It seems that there is nothing to worry about in this world, in short, it is a little heartless.

But it was this heartless personality that made Yu Yuanhang want to laugh.

He looked at the Monkey King bouncing in the comics and felt that this Monkey King was particularly cute.

Shaking his head vigorously, Yu Yuanhang began to remind himself in his heart that I was here to find fault, not to read comics!

When he calmed down again, another incident happened in the comics, which made Yu Yuanhang's eyes firmly attracted - the bear child Sun Wukong actually provoked a leopard, and the leopard jumped into a tree and wanted to eat him.

As a result, the bear child dodged in three or two times, and ran in front again, attracting the leopard.

When the bear child Sun Wukong finally ran to the edge of the cliff, suddenly a person flashed, and the next moment the leopard fell off the cliff because he didn't have time to brake, and the leopard also showed a very anthropomorphic tragic expression.

"Hahaha, the bear child Wukong is so funny......"

Yu Yuanhang couldn't help but be happy, the corners of his mouth cracked, and a smile appeared.

However, before his smile could spread completely, he quickly froze on his face again, looking very funny.

Ma Dan, say okay, come and find fault! What does it mean to be so happy to watch? Yu Yuanhang, you are too angry, right?

This tangled teenager had to remind himself again at this moment: "Labor and management are not here to read comics, labor and management are here to find faults, to find faults! It's a very serious kind! Can't laugh!"

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