Ask for your opinion

I have encountered difficulties with the subject matter of the new book, and I would like to ask for everyone's opinions.

Here's the thing, first of all, I wrote the beginning of a Xianxia background, about fifty or sixty thousand words, the original content outline, probably the protagonist Zhong Ji, yes or Zhong Ji, because Zhong Ji is the ultimate homonym, and the strong is over. So Zhong Ji, this kid, traveled to another world, and found that this is a world of immortals, and the cultivation pays attention to the spirit and Taoism, Zhong Ji is full of anger, of course, he was rejected by the immortal way, and Zhong Ji, who was annoyed and angry, decided to break out of the sky by relying on his own system plug-in.

So, this is the story of the two-dimensional ability VS the avenue of five immortals.

But as I wrote, I suddenly found that the description of the fights between the Taoist arts seemed to be particularly laborious, and the dialogue of the characters couldn't help but be free to write, and it was very troublesome to write. So I simply rewrote the beginning, and wrote about seventy or eighty thousand words.

The new theme is like this: Zhong Ji - or he - has crossed over, this time the background is an overhead city, the theme of superpowers, the world is ruled by the coalition government, which is glamorous on the surface, and all kinds of dirty things in the secret, so Zhong Ji worked all the way from school to the government's superpower agency, and finally became the highest combat power of the government (well, I've been watching One Piece recently), and gradually discovered the discord behind the coalition government during this time, so he simply defected, and then started from the conquest of the Western Continent, gradually government the world, and created the ultimate Gensokyo.

It was originally written well.,But when I wrote about a high school student's superpower exhibition match.,I suddenly found that this urban theme is a little more limited.,Because of urban superpower.,If you fill in the upgraded setting.,It always feels weird.。 Then under the premise that most people don't have the ability to upgrade, the protagonist's ability is too incomprehensible.

Later, I finally realized that the most free subject matter was fantasy!

Completely overhead, similar to the ancient background of the West, there is a clear upgrade system (the ready-made novels of all walks of life can be used directly after a little change, and no matter how lazy you are, you don't even have to think about the name, one, two, three, four, five levels), you can add various races, and you can add a different dimension setting - what the heavenly realm, the demon world, and the upper limit of combat power is also higher - directly set a creation god. With this kind of openness and freedom, even if I write about the perverse behavior of the government and the destruction of the world by the protagonist, I will not be blocked.

The most important thing is that the character dialogue can be in the modern vernacular, and the fighting style can also be inclined to the second dimension, all kinds of magic, swordsmanship, and bizarre abilities are also very compatible with the second dimension, and even, Zhong Ji seems to be able to COS the major bosses?

Of course, it is a very heart-wrenching thing to abandon the previous manuscript and add up to more than 100,000 words, and the background outline that wraps the two novels has been written in thousands of words, but how to say it? I really don't want to be a eunuch this time.

The big lottery eunuch is because there is nothing to write about, and the back is nothing more than Kannaten being besieged, and then KO, or being put in prison. Then he will appear again in the fourth war.,Become the final boss of the Xiao organization.,The final ending will be talked about.。 The strong game is that the chapters are sealed, and I feel a strong malice, plus the mentality is explosive, so I don't bother to write.

I really want to write a long story this time, at least I have to write a million words, even if it's not up to the grade, even if it's very refreshing, in short, it's cool.

So what do you think? The Xianxia background is 50,000 words in the manuscript, the urban super theme is 80,000 words, and the overhead fantasy is still zero. I can't make a decision yet, so I postponed the release of the chapters a little longer, and I tried to save 300,000 to 500,000 words of manuscript, and then in the process, set up detailed background settings, outline settings, and details in the outline at each stage - I was fed up with the experience of not being able to think of the text temporarily, and even regretting the change later.

Which one would you like to see, or do you have any good suggestions? Leave a message and I'll consider it seriously.