Zuo Ya carried a breakfast bag and walked into You Zhi's office.

You Zhi hadn't come yet, she put the bag on the table, and when she turned to leave, You Zhi came in.

"Breakfast, put on the table for you, wheat milk and bread. Zuo Ya said with a slight smile.

"Thank you. You Zhi hung up his shoulder bag and nodded at Zuo Ya. Zuo Ya was looking at him.

"Didn't you sleep well last night...... Zuo Ya asked.

"How do you know?"

"Your eyes tell me ......"

You Zhi smiled reluctantly, which could be regarded as recognition.

"It's for her......" Zuo Ya looked out the window, the sun was shining, but there were two dark gray clouds floating in the sky, aimlessly, walking with the wind.

You Zhi sat down, stared at the breakfast bag on the table, and was stunned for a while, "The manuscript of the Changsheng Group must be ...... quickly"

"You haven't answered my question yet. Zuo Ya didn't want to change the subject.

You Zhi looked up at Zuo Ya, and he saw eagerness and eagerness in her eyes. He understood what she was thinking.

"You're too careful. You Zhi said.

"It seems that my feelings are effective......" Zuo Ya's tone was jealous, "she is married, and besides, she has children......"

"The manuscript of the Changsheng Group, Xie Fei has done it, you can polish it again......" You Zhi said again.

"There are many ...... in front of the widow's door," Zuo Ya pressed aggressively.

"Xie Fei's manuscript is too hard, you focus on making some adjustments in the tone......" You Zhi continued his topic.

"You don't always get off the hook. Zuo Ya became serious.

"Right now, my main focus is on work. I mean, you're really overthinking......" You Zhi explained.

"Well, I hope you're telling the truth. ”

Zuo Ya went out, and You Zhi was stunned again. He understood what Zuo Ya meant. Yes, understood. You Zhi knew that Zuo Ya was a good girl, she had never been married, and she had only talked about a boyfriend, and later broke up because of her incompatible personality. She came to Zhihan Culture Company after breaking up with her boyfriend.

Over the years, Zuo Ya and You Zhi have gotten along well, mainly because of their tacit understanding at work. But sometimes, the tacit understanding also fissions. You Zhi didn't know, and many times the hints reminded him.

But You Zhi couldn't make up his mind, first, he was five years older than her, and he was married, he didn't want to take such a big advantage, and he didn't want her to suffer. Second, You Zhi is not sure about her feelings, but she likes it, but it is only because of the similarity of the way of doing things, not in that sense.

So, he's been dodging.

Just thinking wildly, Zuo Ya knocked on the door again and came in.

"Xie Fei's manuscript is written, do you want to discuss it......?"

You Zhi thought for a moment, "You can arrange it......"

Changsheng Group is a well-known large enterprise in Changshan City. This time, the draft was also revised several times by the secretary of Chairman Liu Sanli, but he was still not satisfied, so he found Zhihan Culture Company.

Conference room.

You Zhi said to Zuo Ya: "You first introduce the basic situation to everyone. ”

Zuo Ya: "The task of Changsheng Group's manuscript is mainly to make a typical speech at the provincial meeting, and the content is mainly to introduce their enterprises to help poor villages in mountainous areas get rid of poverty......

After Zuo Ya finished speaking, she nodded at You Zhi.

You Zhi: "Director Zuo introduced the basic situation just now. But one thing we must be clear about is that Changsheng Group has not signed a long-term cooperation intention with us, this is just a trial, that is to say, the success of this draft is directly related to whether we can retain this big customer. ”

You Zhi continued: "Xie Fei's manuscript is already in everyone's hands, and I believe I have read it. I think it's a very well-written manuscript. Xie Fei has this strength. Fortunately, the opening is high, the content is very rich, the main points of the refinement are also very prominent, the structure is also very reasonable, there is no bias, and there are some small touching details......"

You Zhi said, and everyone nodded frequently. Xie Fei on the side was also complacent, and the embarrassment of making mistakes due to typos before was also somewhat eased.

"However, it's good, it doesn't mean the best, I think, there is still room for improvement......", You Zhi looked at Xie Fei, "Of course, if it is handed over to the customer, I think, it can be said, but we can do better, why not?"

"Let's talk about it, what problems need to be paid attention to if you want to deal with similar drafts?" You Zhi finished speaking, looking around at everyone.

Xie Fei coughed twice, "I'll talk about it first." In fact, I put a lot of effort into writing this manuscript. First of all, I have to consider that Changsheng Group is a large enterprise, and we must consider the value of large enterprises in economic and social development and the role they play in poverty alleviation. I also refer to some national, provincial and local policy documents on advocating enterprise assistance. Of course, it's not easy to combine a few years of work into a fifteen-minute draft, and I spent a lot of time here......"

You Zhi: "Xie Fei has considered it very comprehensively, and it can be said that his foothold and starting point are good. As he spoke, he set his eyes on Li Jing, and Li Jing and You Zhi's eyes collided, and he hurriedly slammed his head on the table.

"Li Jing, tell me what you think......"

The more timid Li Jing is, the more she can't dodge. This is also a question that You Zhi often considers, young people, don't be afraid to say, he wants to exercise their courage to be good at arguing, isn't a lot of wisdom produced in arguments?

Li Jing looked at everyone timidly, and smiled very unconfidently, "Teacher You, I, I think it's good." ”

You Zhi nodded, "It's good, but don't you have any ideas?"

Li Jing pursed her lips, still timidly and said: "I, I think, can highlight the moving ......", she immediately explained, "However, I haven't thought about it yet, I just feel ......" After speaking, she hurriedly lowered her head again.

After hearing this, You Zhi applauded, "Okay, very good, Comrade Li Jing has made great progress......" Li Jing's face turned red when she heard this.

You Zhi continued: "That's right. Li Jing said it very well. A report draft, ten minutes, not long, but not short, to know that the leader's time is precious, how to make the leader in the shortest possible time, which requires the text of the arrangement. ”

You Zhi took a sip of tea and continued: "Let's think about a scene, since it is a typical speech, it is bound to not be a family of the prosperous group. Then, if you want the leader to remember, you should let the audience play a shocking role at the beginning. What can shake the audience is emotion. I don't know if you know, Liu Dong has an 85-year-old mother, so can you take this information as a sentence? I think it's completely okay. ”

As he spoke, he looked at Xie Fei again: "Among the many materials provided to us by the Changsheng Group, you may have overlooked this detail, but I took a cursory look and remembered it. ”

Xie Fei recalled, looking at You Zhi intently.

You Zhi continued: "Everyone found that no, in the first few drafts provided to us by the Changsheng Group, why did they not pass. I think they overlooked an issue, and that is the age and identity of Liu Dong. He is the chairman of the group and a man of fifty. If a person of such age and status sings a high profile like a slogan at the beginning, yes, he is not easy to speak. If it's young, it doesn't matter. However, when talking about his mother, it doesn't matter what identity and status he is, anyone can be moved. Therefore, what Li Jing said just now is very good. I think the first sentence at the beginning is, on the morning of the first day of the Lunar New Year, after kowtowing to my eighty-five-year-old mother, I will go out of the city and the village......"

You Zhi talked eloquently, and Xie Fei, who originally thought that there would be no new angles, also secretly admired in his heart that You Zhi's level of official documents was definitely not something that ordinary people could surpass.