"Then let me tell you, the three teachers are all professionals, and I will be ugly. ”

Wang Ye, one of Xitian's screenwriters, often appears in the second and third places of the screenwriter's signature, belonging to the kind of technical screenwriters, that is, on other people's scripts, change it to be more reasonable, more cohesive, and have a better rhythm.

Forty or fifty years old, smiling.

"Teacher Ji, you said. ”

"Oh, hehe. Ji Ming was frightened by his sentence "Teacher Ji": "Teacher Wang, don't be like this, I can't say anything." ”

"You're welcome, hurry up. Zhang Fan waved his hand and clicked on the notebook.

"Okay, this must be the story of a literary film, we won't consider the box office, the remaining three points, one is the way it was filmed, and we have to find a director. The second is the way the performance comes from, which is the actor's thing, and the third is the way it is - that's the story. ”

Oh yo, kind of interesting.

Ji Ming is not a professional screenwriter, and he has not even written a script, but more than a dozen versions of "Thunderstorm" and the effects they show, more than 20 books on the stage of "Actor", fierce discussions with screenwriters, actors, and teachers, and immediate inspection from the audience and mentors - these are actually absolutely Ji Ming's script training.

When he was in the section of "Blind Mountain", he tried his best to suppress Sun Qian, not entirely by virtue of the teacher's authority, but because he was indeed able to give a better handling and decision - at least it was acceptable to both parties and could meet the artistic height.

"Director and actors, let's not talk about it, let's talk about the story. This book, a Chinese teacher who is obsessed with ancient poetry, is very young, messing around in the original school, not taking serious classes, only talking about Tang poetry and Song lyrics, of course, he can't stay. Then this person made up his mind to chase poetry and the distance, and ran to Qianyang Dong Village - of course, people would not allow him to mess around, after the ideal was shattered, through the way of extracurricular poetry clubs, combined with Dong songs, so that poetry in this land, be perceived and loved by more people......"

"Let's talk about the core of it first, it's very messy, poetry, education, countryside, ideals...... The core of the story needs to be cohesive......"

"Besides, the character of Li Alang is inexplicable, he seems to be stupid when he reads poetry, and the logic of his behavior is difficult to understand, so if this is the case, why should he read poetry? Li Alang must have the shining point brought by poetry...... Characters need to be reinvented......"

"The plot, in fact, is very vulgar, and the whole advancement and contradictions are very conventional......"

Ji Ming sat down, the brush in his hand brushed over, swiped over, and dismantled the entire script from the inside out, from thick to fine, little by little, and he didn't have the ability to change a completely better book, so in the end, there were a bunch of problems, full of loopholes.

The three screenwriting teachers, and even Zhou Xiyan - she herself is the background of the Chinese opera and literature department, and the screenwriter is in the industry, plus Ji Ming himself, after a period of discussion, and even after a dispute, there was no egg under the chicken feathers all over the ground.

There is only one consensus: the script needs to be magically changed.

“...... I really doubt it now, Ji Ming, are you trying to harm me?" Zhang Fan sighed: "Since there are so many problems, why do you want to shoot it?"

"As I said yesterday, temperament, stories are often there, but temperament is not often. ”

Tut.

I hate these drama idiots the most, mysterious and mysterious, what temperament, what thoughts, what characters are alive, and what sentence has the eight wildernesses of the universe...... Anyway, Zhang Fan couldn't feel it himself, so he had to go to see Wang Ye.

Wang Ye nodded: "The book does have merit, but the problems that Teacher Ji said do exist." Moreover, if you want to move, you still need to move a lot, and this creation is more labor-intensive, especially if it is not a simple technical change, which is equivalent to a re-creation. ”

Zhang Fan felt a little headache.

Wang Ye's implication, he can hear it, I'm afraid this is not even what Wang Ye and they can do - obviously Ji Ming's idea is at a very high height, and such a script is only unavoidable, even if "The Far Side of Ah Lang" already has the "temperament" that Ji Ming said, but it is still difficult to finally come up with a good script.

"Ji Ming, you have to be mentally prepared, the books you came into contact with before, those dramas, movies, are all classics, maybe you can't easily find scripts of that level. Zhang Fan hesitated for a moment and made a bottom: "But after listening to what you said so much, I can hear a little bit of its value...... In this way, Ruyi, you sort out the opinions of a few teachers just now, and I'll go outside to contact and take a look - it turns out that their director will definitely not be needed. ”

I'm sorry, Director Song.

Ji Ming was just a little embarrassed in his heart, and suddenly thought of the wish Zhou Zilong gave him: to cooperate with Wen Yan once.

Tsk, koi life!

“...... Mr. Zhang, why don't you ask Director Wenyan? She is also a very good screenwriter, and if you want, it is quite appropriate to work on the script together. ”

"The banquet of "Carnival"?

"Hmm. ”

Zhang Fan sighed: "Your rod directly poked the award-winning director of the Golden Horse?"

"If you don't think it's enough, then hand it to Li An, or Zhang Guoshi, Jia Zhangke?"

“......”

Am I not enough? I don't think you have a B number.

"Why do you mention Wen Yan? Do you think she is suitable for this subject?Or do you know her?" Zhou Xiyan thought of Ji Ming's connections, and it didn't seem to be particularly shallow: "Have you met?"

"I thought it might be a good fit, and most importantly, I really liked her movies. ”

you.

"There is no news of a new film after the literary director "Carnival", maybe he is also looking for a good opportunity," Ji Ming seriously suggested, if Zhang Fan doesn't look for it, no matter how awesome the koi is, he can't control his thoughts and behaviors: "There must be a lot of people who handed her the book, and one more is not much." ”

Zhang Fan looked at Zhou Xiyan, he was a little moved.

Wen Yan, the director, after winning the best director of the Golden Horse and the China Directors Association, still attracted the attention of major production companies, especially her participation in the production and production, and then directed the two feature films "Watermark Street" and "Carnival", which are all quite high-level films - but this director is only afraid of literary films, and he doesn't even care about commercial films, so the opportunities for cooperation are limited.

But from this point of view, maybe she is really likely to be interested in "The Distance of Ah Lang".

"Hmm...... I'll make an appointment. Zhou Xiyan patted the script: "Sort out these views first, Ruyi, you work hard." ”

"Good. ”

After the meeting, Zhou Xiyan finally invited Ji Ming to dinner, this time it was a big meal, a luxury box, a chandelier with thirty or forty bulbs, a few executives at home, three screenwriting teachers, plus Ji Ming.

Ji Ming was a little impulsive to pack some bird's nest soup for Chu Qing.

Shame, shame.

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God knows I wrote it three times...... Today is still the fourth watch, don't worry about it will be less, thank you