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The plot continues.

A taxi driver appears in the shot.

The driver talked about the mountains while driving, and seemed to be chatting with the rear passengers very happily: "So, today's young people are too impetuous and not down-to-earth at all, but through the conversation just now, I found that you are a very good young man!"

The camera cuts to the back row.

An expressionless young passenger sat there, and at the same time, the young passenger's voice sounded in the form of a voice-over: "From the time I got on the train to now, I only said the destination, and I didn't say a word for the rest." ”

Zhao Xin couldn't help but hook the corners of his mouth.

The passengers didn't speak along the way, and all the chat content was the driver's brother asking and answering himself?

"My name is Lu Qiaochuan. ”

"I'm a very sad person. ”

"I don't like to accept new things, I don't want to meet new people, I don't want to cause trouble for people, I don't want to make trouble for myself, so I hate the start of school. ”

The voiceover of the passenger's perspective ends.

And at the moment when the voiceover ended, the driver's voice also sounded again, still in a very familiar tone: "By the way, how many years have you been a teacher?"

"Master, I'm a student. ”

Lu Qiaochuan said helplessly: "It's the old point." ”

Zhao Xin didn't hold back this time, and laughed, although there is no substantive plot yet, the director actually threw out several paragraphs in a row in just a few minutes at the beginning......

Moreover, these paragraphs are not meaningless piles.

Through funny dialogues, Zhao Xin basically understood the relationship between the characters in this drama, Ren Yifan, Zhong Bai and Lu Qiaochuan in the taxi are dead friends, today is the first day of school, and the three of them were admitted to the same university......

Very fresh start!

The style of painting also looks quite realistic!

What surprised Zhao Xin the most was that the level of photography in this drama seems to be very high, both the lighting of the picture and the actors' performances are very professional, and there are no common problems in current online dramas......

"Zhong Bai, I'm sorry. ”

When Zhao Xin re-evaluated the quality of this drama, the camera had turned back to the picture of Zhong Bai and Ren Yifan, and Ren Yifan's lines made Zhao Xin laugh: "My phone was left in a restaurant, I have to go back and pick it up." ”

This is serious.

But at this time, the more serious the actor's expression, the more funny the lines will be.

"Hahahaha......"

Zhao Xin's laughter spread outside the door, and several passing company employees all looked at Zhao Xin's office with strange expressions-

"Ahem. ”

Zhao Xin immediately regained her majesty, as the leader of the eighth group of the online drama department, she is a small leader in the company, how can she lose her image in front of the ordinary small staff of the company-

"Clams, clams!"

Returning to the computer screen, Zhao Xin was happy again.

At this time, the plot has developed to the point where Lu Qiaochuan and Ren Yifan meet, and the two climb the dormitory building together with big bags and small bags.

"My stomach hurts!"

"Shut up, brute. ”

"I can't hold it back, I really have to go to the bathroom, eh, where is the toilet in this dormitory building......"

"Smell it yourself!"

Do you smell the toilet by your nose?

What made Zhao Xin laugh even more was that Lu Qiaochuan really smelled the smell and found the toilet, although after excreting in the toilet, Lu Qiaochuan was very tragic to find that he didn't bring paper at all......

Very dense laughs!

These interspersed jokes Zhao Xin's face was almost stiff!

But soon Zhao Xin's expression became serious, judging from the current level of performance in this drama, she also has to think about more things, she doesn't just have to stand in the audience's perspective!

Zhao Xin continued to watch.

Three consecutive episodes have passed, and the next plot of this drama really did not disappoint Zhao Xin, whether it is the actors' funny dialogues or the rhythm of the plot progression, it makes people feel bright, if there is any shortcoming, that is, the conflict of the plot is not strong enough.

The main line is unclear.

The whole story is a bit like a running account.

However, Zhao Xin feels that compared with the current works with the same theme that are prone to ups and downs and crazy blood, the tepid running account plot is the characteristic of this "Together Through the Window".

"The joke is novel. ”

"The plot is realistic and the style is alternative. ”

"The anti-dog blood routine has formed a new routine, the actors' overall acting skills are online, and the director's ability to tell stories is very strong. ”

Zhao Xin wrote down the evaluation on the paper on the desktop.

This is Zhao Xin's work rhythm, watch the first three episodes of the work first, and then make a preliminary evaluation, if you can't get the person in charge to stick to the first three episodes, then the show is generally of little value.

Fortunately, Zhao Xin finished watching the first three episodes!

Moreover, after watching the first three episodes, Zhao Xin still has the desire to continue watching, so it is absolutely no problem for this show to sign an advertising sharing contract.

"But ......"

Zhao Xin put on the cap of the pen and said to himself: "If you want me to pay to buy out the copyright, you still need to show more things, and I can't afford to take any risks now." ”

She is afraid that this drama will go high and low.

Similar phenomena are all too common in film and television dramas.

Even not only film and television dramas, but also various types of works, including novels, comics, etc., are prone to amazing at the beginning, mediocre in the middle stage, and completely sparse in the later stage.

"Don't let me down......"

Zhao Xin's eyes lit with a spark of hope, and he moved the mouse to click on the fourth episode of "Together Through the Window......

The fourth episode is a common military training plot.

In the original version of "Together in the Window", two episodes were introduced at the beginning of the school, and the military training plot lasted for seven episodes, although the intermediate process was not boring, but there was still a suspicion that it was not compact enough, so Luo Yuan adjusted this.

The introduction of the first episode of the school year is complete.

And the military training was also compressed by him to less than five episodes, the original version of the story with a total of 34 episodes, Luo Yuan finished the story in 30 episodes.

The effect is obvious.

Zhao Xin did not have the slightest impatience in the process of watching this drama, and completely enjoyed the director's narration of a story that was not lacking in the ordinary......

Episode 4!

Episode 5!

Episode 6!

Episode 7!

From eight o'clock in the morning to five o'clock in the afternoon, except for the time to eat, Zhao Xin has been watching "Together Through the Window", and in the process, Zhao Xin even forgot his work as a person in charge......

She completely thinks of herself as a spectator!

From the perspective of an audience, feel the joys, sorrows and sorrows of this drama, and laugh or cry for the characters in it......

See episode 15.

Zhao Xin suddenly remembered something, suddenly picked up the phone at hand, and dialed a number: "Minister, I apply for funds to buy out a work." ”

......

And at the Penguin Video headquarters.

A middle-aged man with glasses stood up: "This "Together Through the Window", I want it!"

......

Meanwhile.

A person in charge of Shuimu.com issued an instruction: "Contact this director named Luo Yuan to negotiate copyright matters." ”