158 The system collapsed
Seeing this sentence, the mood of all parties from the online literature industry is really mixed. ↑,
The tens of millions of rewards for opening a book and creating a zào sex turned into a sentence in the mouth of the white-clothed Allure: "It's raining, your mother called you to go home and collect your clothes." ”
It's very cordial, very humorous, but it's this sentence that makes countless people feel convinced.
Under the strong pressure, from the shock just now, countless people finally saw the long-awaited first chapter of "Panlong" "Morning in the Town".
"Wushan Town, the first mountain range of the Magnolia Continent, an ordinary town in the Finlay Kingdom in the west of the Warcraft Mountain Range.
The morning sun is rising, and there is still a trace of cold air in the early morning in the small town of Wushan Town, but almost all the residents in the town have already come out to work, even the children of six or seven years old have almost all gotten up to start the traditional morning exercise.
In the open space east of Osan Town, the warm morning sun shines through the trees next to the clearing, leaving dappled spots of light in the clearing.
I saw a large group of children, and I estimated that there were about one or two hundred.
The group of children was divided into three teams, each team was lined up in several rows, and the children all stood quietly in the open space with solemn faces. The children in the northernmost group of children in this group were about six to eight years old. The middle group was about nine to twelve years old, and the southernmost group was a group of thirteen to sixteen years old......"
This is the opening scene of the first chapter of "Panlong", which is full of picturesqueness.
And this chapter Luoyang wrote 9,000 words, which is a big chapter, about the world view of "Panlong", the early level division, and the overall structure are also directly disclosed, and Luoyang is also in the first chapter, throwing out one of the core cool points in "Panlong", the four ultimate warriors!
When many people saw this paragraph, their eyes lit up, and a strong sense of anticipation that even they themselves were not aware of had emerged.
"On our continent, thousands of years ago, there were four ultimate warriors, and these four ultimate warriors all possessed strength comparable to dragons. They can run rampant among the millions of soldiers by themselves, and take the heads of enemy generals with ease! These four ultimate warriors are the Dragon Blood Warrior and the Purple Flame Warrior. Tiger Striped Warriors and Undead Warriors!"
"There are nine levels of warriors, and I, just a sixth-level warrior, can easily smash boulders and kick broken trees! Even in our Finlay Kingdom, I'm afraid we can be regarded as the strongest people. ”
This is the world of the strong, and this thing belongs to the new world of the white-clothed Allure City, and the mystery has been unveiled in the midst of thousands of calls.
A powerhouse that climbs mountains and seas, a legendary sanctuary, and a powerful four ultimate warriors...... When countless readers, and even the staff in the online literature industry, were surprised to find after reading the first chapter of "Panlong".
Originally, I was indifferent to the so-called Western fantasy. I am looking forward to the plot below "Panlong"!
This sense of expectation has puzzled many people, they didn't expect such a Western world to be boring.
"It's not that kind of mercenary adventure-type fantasy, it's a very interesting beginning, Lin Lei's image is very full, it seems that I have to continue to watch. ”
"Ah, no, I know that the first chapter of Allure didn't write anything good, why am I looking forward to the following plot?"
"Isn't it that I'm not very indifferent to the Western fantasy genre, and I just came to look at it twice when I looked at Bai Da's face. It turned out to be quite interesting? What the hell?"
"When I just read the first paragraph, I almost gave up the book directly, okay, Bai Da's writing has regressed too much, and it is distressing. But when I read it, I found that this kind of writing with such a story is so unexpectedly emotional!"
Even some professionals who have been engaged in online writing for many years are wondering: "Why is it that I have a lot of interest in the plot even though there is no conflict in the plot, where does this expectation come from?"
"Clever. It's really clever!" There are also god-level writers who came with a learning attitude After researching, they saw the subtlety of the first chapter of "Panlong" in a flash of inspiration.
"The protagonist is a child with infinite growth, the first chapter of Bai University will shape this Lin Lei into flesh and blood, although the writing is a little white, but the spirit of self-improvement is all at once through the back of the paper!"
"Although it is a Western fantasy, the protagonist Lin Lei created by Bai Da in this way makes readers feel very immersed!"
"Immediately afterwards, Bai Da described the ability of a strong man in the article, becoming a high-level warrior, you can have the ability to open mountains and break stones, which will make readers instantly think, the protagonist works so hard, and the talent looks very good, he will almost definitely have this ability in the future, what a majesty it will be!"
"This is the sense of substitution that Bai Da made, which made everyone have such expectations, and at this time, Bai Da released another fierce news, that is, the four ultimate warriors in the legends of the mainland!"
"In general, if it is written like this in a novel, it must indicate something, does this mean that the protagonist may be one of the four ultimate warriors, or...... In short, at this time, the reader's own imagination creates a huge sense of anticipation for himself!
The subtleties are not difficult to study, as if the principle of some things is very simple, but you can't do it if you change it.
Even if someone thoroughly studies the works of the white-clothed Allure, they can't write works that surpass him, but at this time, there is no time to think more, hurry up and read the next chapter first!
At this time, no matter what kind of purpose the readers came to, they clicked on the next chapter of "Panlong" with infinite expectations at this moment.
However, after a difficult refresh of the web page, the fiction page of the website suddenly turned, and a sentence appeared in the center of the screen......
"Dear users, I'm sorry, because the current flow of people visiting wèn in the new book "Panlong" in white is too high, beyond the system can bear, the guide zhì website system collapsed, the background staff is in emergency repair, and the upgrade will be completed in the short term, please forgive me for the inconvenience caused......"
The page screen is white, and the system is broken!!
The background is still being repaired urgently, please understand......
Forgive me, sister, can you make people happy to read!
Faced with this scene, readers from all over the world vomited three liters of blood.
Do you want to play like this, we just want to read Bai Da's new book......
As a result, you get a red envelope rain for more than 20 minutes, so that everyone has to wait for most of the day, even if you are now, you are directly in the background, and the whole website is out of the moth, it's crazy!!
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