It's okay for the time being, probably
The communication with the editor was very smooth, and he elaborated on the meaning of the existence of the nightclub plot and the overall trend of the future, got a certain understanding, and clarified the main line of the following article.
After being severely warned, the result was not to seal the book for the time being, and try to revise the bad plot.
We can move on.
Sprinkle flowers!
Then explain to you the significance of the nightclub plot.
I have repeatedly emphasized that this is a coming-of-age book, and the main line of the story is the growth of a dog.
Saying that our vulgar three views are not correct, I am quite aggrieved.
The whole plot is structured for three main purposes.
First. Through Li Nuo's elegant small picture to contrast the glass.
In fact, the foreshadowing has long been buried, and the sentence in the "Tao Te Ching" - the world knows that beauty is beauty, and evil is evil. We all know that what is good is good, and what is not good is not good.
It's about contrast.
How do you write a positive book? Just talking about it with your mouth is a bit too forceful and too deliberate.
In a world where there is only nobility and no vulgarity, how can it be right?
Ruri is not a character who lives in a vacuum.
There are enough money worshippers in the real society, her quality is valuable, and her personal image is full and vivid.
Dogs don't realize right away that they have to know enough girls to understand who is good and who is bad.
The second is to write about the growth of the dog.
An ordinary boy, after getting a windfall from heaven, does not satisfy his own desires, and immediately becomes a five-talk, four-beauty, and three-love. That's.
The general direction is positive, and then the light and the dark are seen, and some women are experienced, some routines are experienced, and some reflection is experienced, so that growth can be convincing, and the characters are full enough.
As I said, harem, stallion, single heroine, any kind of simple label is not right.
I didn't put any label on the book when I wrote it, otherwise I would be narrow-minded and limit my inspiration to death.
The dog has experienced all the way, thanked all the way, grown all the way, and finally had a happy ending, my original intention is as simple as that.
There is a part of the reader who says that there is too much water, mental activity, well, I try to minimize.
However, in fact, it is because when I made my intention, I wanted to be a god of life.
So I pay a lot of attention to the details.
Every character is alive, with their own thoughts, mentalities, and behavior patterns, and if they don't explain it clearly, their approach lacks a logical chain and reads floating.
The three girls in the nightclub have the same big core, but their external performance is completely different.
I don't want to show you a thousand sides.
The third purpose is cool.
The repression in real life is released through the pretense of a god, which is very cool.
The dog basically doesn't slap his face, is not so angry, and is focused on himself most of the time.
In the nightclub, the dog's handling of other people's shows off and provocation is very friendly, and there are still people who report the wrong views. I'm also drunk.
The nightclub plot may have to come to a hasty end, so please be mentally prepared.
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And then there's the point.
Thanks to the alliance leaders such as Black Tiger Striker, Sheng Zirong, Feiyanren, Yan Bao, Tiantian, Xiaogu, Fu Yiwen, Maria, and the 92 brothers and sisters in the core group, as well as every dear reader who silently subscribes, rewards, votes, and supports bread with practical actions.
It was your strong support that allowed the editors to see our potential and value, so they didn't hang up directly and got an opportunity to communicate with the editor-in-chief in person.
Really, if it weren't for the high tip on the first day of listing, and a very good subscription, we may have lost contact by now.
Thank you very, very, very much.
And, I ask you to continue to trust me and support the life of the Shenhao to continue to walk.
Each of your subscriptions is especially precious.
If you don't like it, you can delete the book.
But if you're still watching. Please try to look at the genuine version, a few dollars a month, it is not expensive to anyone, everyone's strength accumulates, we can go on together, go long-term.
I just like to see those shameless villains jumping crazy and acting helplessly.
We're strong enough, united enough, they're really just clowns, it's superfluous to scold them, you can nail them with a single click.
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Finally, let me explain a little bit about the internal group.
At first, this was a management group, and I found some familiar book friends to help manage it.
Later, all kinds of articles were deleted tragically, and many readers said that they wanted to see what was not deleted, but there were many people in the general group, and they couldn't put it. In the end, it can only be left to manage the small group.
Everyone was afraid that someone would get in, so they discussed setting the fan value a little higher, don't have an accident, and then slowly add people to it.
In fact, you don't have to worry too much about the unabridged version, even the first version is not a small yellow text, it is nothing more than normal emotional rendering, physical contact, spaceships, etc.
If you can't wait to see it, add a review group 873682125, which requires 5,000 followers.
Otherwise, just wait a little, and after this busy time, you will definitely open a VIP group, and you can enter by booking all.
Once again, I would like to thank you all for your support.
It took two days to update more than 50,000 words, and Meng Xin worked very hard.
In terms of monthly ticket addition, 200 votes for a chapter is equal to 100 votes for 1000 words, and several large chapters have been made up to 1400 votes, and I will give priority to the addition of the monthly pass this month.
In terms of rewards, the alliance owner owes 11 more to the Black Tiger and 1 more to Maria to the New Alliance.
Now it's very hot, and my fingers are very inflamed, so I try my best to write it, and everyone reads it in time. Just the sauce.
I'll have to take a break.