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"Slow down, you two...... It's obviously late, and there are people who laugh, it's really scolding. ”

"Mingqin sauce is itchy, sister, I can help you solve it. ”

"It's terrible, this woman, Rimer protects me. ”

"Hee-hee. ”

It seems to have come to an end.

"It's been a long time since I've seen the smile of Xueyu, so I miss it. ”

"This ......"

"Miss Shiyue can have a smile of snow and rain every day, so jealous. ”

"Ri-e can have a lot of smiles on her face every day, so there's no need to be jealous. ”

"Haha. ”

"Haha. ”

"These two women are so pompous, Limer. ”

"You really need to be steady, and so does Mingqin. ”

"Okay, I see. ”

"It seems like it's lunchtime. ”

"Is it all here, then let's go out to eat, the things in it are expensive. ”

"It's okay, I can have a treat. ”

"Miss Shiyue's invitation, we can't afford to pay it back. ”

"It's okay, you don't have to pay it back. ”

"No, you have to go out to eat obediently. ”

"Okay, okay. ”

"Hahaha, what, these two people, were they stupid by the corpses in the haunted house?"

"Does Xueyu find it boring to come to the amusement park?"

"No, it's a pleasure to be with everyone, Rimmer. ”

"But when I play with the amusement facilities, I can't see any change in Xueyu's expression. ”

"Maybe it's because I'm not very good at it. ”

"Ordinary people should have normal physiological reactions. ”

"I do feel weightless or something, but I don't seem to be scared. ”

"Although it is usually inconspicuous, the snow and rain are really strong in some aspects. ”

"This ...... Hee-hee. ”

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"Hmm~"

"What's wrong?"

"I'm tired of reading books, and I'm so bored. ”

"That's right. ”

"I really want to write it myself. ”

"It's true that I've been watching other people's for a long time. ”

"The library is really inconvenient, there are so many people and noisy, and I can't use my own computer. ”

"It can't be helped. ”

"Why don't you go to the hotel. ”

"Huh?"

"That's it, I'll go back and get the computer, and then I'll ...... Rendezvous, goodbye. ”

"Are you okay?"

"No problem. ”

After Dai Monogatari finished speaking, he left, and Ling Yiyin smiled bitterly and left with him.

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"A room. ”

"Please ask if it is a single room or a double room. ”

"Whatever, single room. ”

"Okay, please show me your ID. ”

"Give. ”

"Ah~ I'm sorry, Miss is still underage and can't open a room. ”

"Give, proof of work. ”

"Sorry, I'll do it for you. ”

Ling Yiyin stood aside, feeling like a roller coaster.

"Miss, please keep your room card. ”

“Tha

ks。 ”

"Let's go. ”

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There was a fragrance wafting from the room, everywhere was relatively clean, no lights on, a little dark.

"You don't have to turn on the lights, it's a great environment for creating. ”

[Indeed, in a dark environment, there is an occasional surge of thoughts.] ]

Ling Yiyin thought so.

Dai Monogatari took out the notebook and put it on the bed, and said.

"Sit down. ”

"Good. Say you can open a house with a job certificate?"

"Of course, and I occasionally need to come to this kind of place for inspiration in my job. ”

"Indeed, this kind of place is good for writing. ”

"But it's a bit too much to write anything worthwhile. ”

"It's normal that you can't write it, this kind of thing is not good, it depends on the feeling. ”

"Interest can be like this, but to work, there must be stable updates. ”

"It's a bit unapproving. ”

"It's okay, you'll understand later. ”

"I don't want to understand. ”

"Don't bother, if you keep complaining, get out. ”

"It's a bit excessive, forget it, you can write it. ”

"I'm writing what I'm calling you for. ”

"What are you going to do then?"

"Of course, let you read my article and make a valuable opinion. ”

"Oh, okay. ”

[It's okay to make him a free critic.] ]

"Okay, first of all, let's take a look at this chapter, I'm very tangled in what I wrote, you can see if you can improve it. ”

"Good. ”

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"Although I understand it generally, I can't do it without looking at the details in front of me. ”

"There's a lot of content in front of you, so if you want to read it, you have to read it very quickly. ”

"Okay, though I don't like to watch it too fast. ”

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Dai Monogatari looked at Ling Yiyin, who was reading the documents on the computer at a glance and ten lines, and said boredly.

"I knew that I would have let you read it before we came to communicate with us. ”

"Don't think about what you don't have, think about what you can do. ”

"Are you the old man fishing in the sea?"

"Okay, I'm done. ”

"It's fast. ”

"First of all, it's a bit different from the front. ”

"Well~ indeed. ”

"Then, there are too many words from the characters here, and the more you want to make your feelings clear, the more you can't say clearly, which is simply counterproductive. ”

"Well, I've been thinking about how to make it clearer, and I haven't thought about anything else. ”

"Also, why does the weather environment always change with the mood of the characters, are these characters weather messengers?"

"Isn't it all written like this in novels? When you are happy, it is sunny, and when you are sad, it rains, and this is the role of environmental description, do you understand? ”

"I don't understand it at all, it's just far-fetched. ”

"So you're too young, I'll seriously consider the previous suggestion, and forget it. ”

"Forget it, whatever you want. ”

"Anything else?"

"This chapter seems to be gone, but there's a lot of it ahead of it. ”

"What a poisonous tongue. ”

"Didn't you ask for advice?"

"Well, be gentle. ”

"Okay, no, what's your wording?"

"It's a figure of speech that personifies. ”

"But it sounds like goosebumps. ”

"Don't worry about that. ”

"Well, let's talk about your novel. ”

"Well, let's get started. ”

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"Hmm~ It's too much, it's too much. ”

Dai Monogatari was lying on the bed, leaning sideways, her eyes full of tears of grievance.

[The first time a novel has been criticized so badly, and I don't know how to refute it.] ]

"Ah~ I don't know why I'm in a good mood. ”

Ling Yiyin sat on the edge of the bed and touched his stomach, as if he was full, but in fact he didn't eat anything.

"No, I'm going to criticize you too. ”

"But I didn't. ”

"Anyway, it's also on the Internet, just log in. ”

"It's not all, forget it, let's show you, didn't you read it last time?"

"I looked at it a little, but because I have to go to school and work, I don't have much time, what about you?"

"I've read what you sent, but there are a lot of suggestions I want to make. ”

"Don't mention it, you're too rude. ”

"Well, my look, just give me an opinion, and I'll refute you with all my might. ”

"Why do you have to quarrel with each other? ”

"Just be realistic. ”