The first volume of King Warriors 298 rhythm adjustment

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After finishing the dinner with Xu Yonghui, Luoyang returned to the apartment to continue updating "Buddha is the Way".

This book is the pioneering work of the previous life, and it is destined to lead the trend in the future, so Luoyang's expectations for this book are still very high.

After writing today's three chapters, Luoyang uploaded them one by one, and also took a look at the progress, and found that "Buddha is the Way" happened to be updated to the twenty-first chapter today: "Gray Face".

After the update, Luoyang glanced at the fan list again.

Like the previous two books, there are more than 300 alliance leaders on Luoyang's readers' fan list, all of which are prefixed with the White League, with a neat and consistent ID format, and a domineering mess.

Luoyang's gaze turned to the book review area of "Buddha is the Way".

As a result, he found that the comments in the book review area were not harmonious, and countless review posts were mixed with various voices.

"This book, I've read it these days, how do I feel less and less like it's in white capitals......"

"I feel that Bai Da is not suitable for writing Xianxia, this "Buddha is the Way", all of which are boring murders and treasures until now, do not have the passionate and bloody feeling of "Panlong" at the beginning. ”

"That's right, the beginning of the book didn't give me the idea of chasing more......"

"It may be the first time that Baida has written a work of cultivating immortals, so it's a little uncomfortable, let's give Bai Da some time, and when Bai Da finds a feeling, presumably the plot will become exciting. ”

"It's also possible that Bai Da is really not good, the update of the online article this year is too fast!"

"Many new authors have emerged, although they are following the trend of Bai Da, but some authors have become more and more of their own style, if Bai Da does not improve, it is likely to be eliminated......"

"Upstairs is alarmist, Bai Da can't be eliminated, the supreme god with the highest status in the online literature world is not a joke!"

"Or there are too many white caps entities, some of which can't be controlled, after all, the online text and the entity style are different, and it is inevitable that the head is a little confused when switching back and forth. ”

"Anyway, I believe in Bai Da, because looking at all Bai Da's works, which one is not a masterpiece? Besides, you say that "Buddha is the Way" is not good, but you are just comparing it with "Panlong", if it is compared with ordinary authors, Bai Da is still profound. ”

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From these comments, it is not difficult to see that readers are now divided into two camps.

One faction is the supporters, they don't think that Luoyang will go downhill, the reason why the story is not exciting in the early stage is just because Luoyang has not been used to the rhythm of the new type for a while, after all, Luoyang has never had the experience of writing Xianxia.

On the other hand, there are skeptics, who feel that Luoyang's new book is not ideal. The previous plot is very repetitive, and it is all about making the protagonist progress in killing people and grabbing treasures, and there is no blood-boiling feeling in previous works.

One comment after another made Luoyang frown slightly.

It is true that the early stage of "Buddha is the Way" has not been as good as that Cheng dù, but many readers have too high expectations for themselves......

And the early plot of "Buddha is the Way" is not enough to support this expectation, so readers will have a polarized attitude.

Luoyang also knew it in his heart.

"Buddha is the Way" is a novel with mixed reputations.

The first half of the protagonist of this book is cultivating immortals in modern times, killing people and grabbing treasures in various ways, until the protagonist enters the world of immortals, and turns into a plot of mythical immortal cultivation, and even the writing is advancing by leaps and bounds, becoming semi-literate.

This is a typical work that is smooth in the early stage and supernatural in the later stage.

But the problem at hand now is that the smooth plot in the early stage of "Buddha is the Way" has caused dissatisfaction among some readers.

The plot hasn't started yet, and the reader is already in a hurry.

It's okay if Luoyang is still a newcomer, you can update it slowly, anyway, sooner or later everyone will find out the excitement of this book, and you can also get a name for becoming a god in a book, but on the contrary, he is the first supreme god in the online literature industry.

Readers' expectations for his new book are quite high.

"What can I do to change this......

Luoyang fell into thought.

He also considered that "Buddha is the Way" can only be regarded as an ordinary plot in the early stage, which may cause dissatisfaction among readers, but he didn't expect that after only a dozen chapters, readers would complain.

After thinking about it again, Luoyang finally decided

He wants to adjust the plot of the early stage of "Buddha is the Way".

He had such an idea once before, but "People Grow and Hate Water Changdong" also needed to be greatly revised, and his energy was limited, so Luoyang wanted "Buddha is the Way" to develop according to the rhythm of his previous life.

But now that the reader's grumbling has appeared, he can't sit idly by.

After all, "Buddha is the Way" is still a long way from his truly wonderful place.

As for the content that has been released, Luoyang is not ready to revise it, anyway, there are only more than 20 chapters, which will not affect the overall situation, what he wants to modify is the next plot, and shorten some unnecessary plots as much as possible.

It seems that "People Grow and Hate Water Changdong" is going to slow down first.

Luoyang opened the document and began to create the plot behind "Buddha is the Way".

[Xiang Hui knew that this senior brother's cultivation was profound, that is, he loved to admit death, of course he didn't dare to tell him the purpose of his four-person coming, so he lied all over the sky: "Senior brother, aren't we joining the dragon group now, just got the news, the monster alliance has an internal bombardment, and the Tianxuan Blood Demon is seriously injured, then Ling Fei of the Kunlun faction wants us to check it out, we just arrived here, and we met these monsters." ”】

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The next plot is already a little different from the previous life.

But if you really want to say that the modification is not enough, after all, the appearance of some characters in the early stage is still necessary.

Luoyang mainly adjusts the rhythm of the book, an online article, only if the rhythm is good enough, can readers read it happily.

Originally, "Buddha is the Way" did a good job in the early stage, but the rhythm of "Panlong" was still weaker than that of "Panlong", so Luoyang was making careful adjustments.

Some people may not know what the rhythm of the online article means, in fact, it is also simple to say, that is, the sense of hierarchy and organization of the protagonist's development all the way, so that readers have a clear and clear understanding of the development of the plot.

And those who have read "Buddha is the Way" know in their hearts that the plot of this book will not be completely unfolded until the protagonist enters the earth fairy world, and the plot before the earth fairy world, his path is no different from that of ordinary immortal cultivation novels.

Therefore, Luoyang has to adjust the pace, speed up the progress, and let the protagonist enter the earth immortal realm faster.

You must know that "Buddha is the Way" did not enter the plot of the earth immortal world until chapter 193.

If this life continues to let the protagonist Zhou Qing enter the Earth Immortal Realm in one hundred and ninety-three chapters, then I am afraid that the reader's resentment will be great, after all, the previous plot of the Earth Immortal Realm is really not exciting.

Luoyang began to speed up the codeword.

Countless plots jumped in Luoyang's mind.

The rhythm is distinct, the layers are clear, and between the veins, re-invent and reassemble.

Click, click, continuous typing pause, the latest chapter of Luoyang has been written.

At the same time, after a lot of analysis, he basically calculated the order of the new rhythm in his heart.

According to his new idea now, deleting some unnecessary plots in the early stage of "Buddha is the Way" can make the Earth Immortal Realm appear about fifty chapters in advance, so that when the more than one hundred and forty chapters are written, the plot can be truly exciting......

"That's the limit of what I can streamline!"

"One hundred and forty chapters, as long as you survive the first one hundred and forty chapters, a new genre will be born, and all dissatisfied voices will disappear. ”

(To be continued.) )