When reading these comments, Xue Jingshu, Xu Xian and Xu Pan were all there.

The reviews don't have a few good reviews.

They guessed that Lu Yao would probably feel unhappy in his heart, so they comforted him one after another.

Xue Jingshu: "They only read cool texts, and they don't want to use their brains to read books, so they can't see how well this book is written!"

Brother, in my opinion, you are the reincarnation of an ancient writer!

Not to mention anything else, just the title of the book, "A Song of Ice and Fire", is magnificent as soon as you hear it, and it is definitely a masterpiece!

And this plot, this style, there is really no one!"

Xu Xian: "I think it's very well written! Don't listen to those people on the Internet. To be honest, I think: not many people can write a work like this!"

Xu Pan: "With my years of reading experience, this book will be popular!"

Lu Yao: "Yes, have you really read this book carefully?"

The three nodded in unison.

Lu Yao then asked, "Then what is your favorite character so far?"

The question immediately stopped them.

The three of you, look at me, I look at you, I can't say a word for a long time.

"It's all liars!" Lu Yao said pretending to be angry. "You haven't seen it at all!"

The three of them hurriedly waved their hands: "No, I didn't lie to you, I really saw it." ”

"Okay, answer my question. Lu Yao called them one by one: "Jingshu?"

Xue Jingshu: "Ah, I like that, Kai...... Triumphant...... Yes, Catherine!"

"There is no 'Catherine' in the book, only 'Catelyn'!" Lu Yao was speechless, and then turned his head to look at Xu Xian: "What about you?"

"I like Jon, Ned?? Stark's illegitimate son. ”

She had the right name.

"And what's Jon's last name?"

"What's the last name, of course it's Stark!"

Lu Yao was speechless again.

Jon is an illegitimate child, and according to the rules of the North, bastards are all surnamed Snow, Snow!"

Xu Xian: "......"

Lu Yao looked at Xu Pan.

Xu Pan's eyes wandered.

"Let me test you: in the first chapter, the 'Bran' chapter after the prologue, how many ice wolf cubs did they adopt?"

Xu Pan: "Icewolf cubs?" I want to think about it...... Jon said his dad had five children...... No, it's six! Finally he found a white wolf! Is it six, Lu Yao?"

Lu Yao was slightly stunned.

He didn't expect that Xu Pan looked at it quite carefully.

"Hey, I really got you right, it's six. ”

"Ahaha!" Xu Pan was overjoyed and clapped his hands violently, "Well, I'm hit!

He clapped his hands and smiled at Xu Xian's two daughters, "Hehe, I'm hit!"

Xue Jingshu was fine, but Xu Xian was a little impatient, and slapped him on the arm.

"Damn it, what did you hit?"

Xu Pan was slapped and immediately silenced.

"Okay, okay, I know you all mean well, and I'm afraid I'll be hit.

It's okay, this ending, I expected. ”

Lu Yao said with a smile.

He wasn't lying.

Regarding the view of domestic netizens that "this book must be pounced on at the singularity", Lu Yao did not refute it.

In fact, he also knows that what this netizen said is right.

"A Song of Ice and Fire" is a fantasy book that uses the background of the Western Middle Ages, and the names of people, places, customs, etc. are all Western, which is difficult for Eastern readers to remember.

What's more, it's still a multi-protagonist, POV perspective?

Readers on the Singularity, for the most part, are there to relax their minds.

After all, they are already very tired after a day of work and school, and then using their brains to read books will increase the burden on their brains.

Therefore, there is no logical cool article in the air.

There are very few people who are willing to use their brains to read books.

So "A Song of Ice and Fire" is destined not to be read by many people at the singularity.

Domestic readers did not like it, and he expected it.

However, he was somewhat surprised by the comments of foreign readers.

"Oh, God, spare me! Looking at Lu Yao is as dizzy as looking at those tadpole-like notes!"

"Mr. Lu Yao, please, let's go back to making music!

No matter how bad it is, you can make a movie.

Don't write it, it's a big head!"

"Strangers, wildlings, nomads, southerners, the Great Wall, Winterfell, Castle Rock, Trident River, Arryn Valley, High Court, Eagle's Nest, Pantos;

Bran, Ned Stark, King of the North, Robb Stark, Jon Snow, Caitlin, King Robert, Queen Cersei, Jaime Lannister, Daenerys, Viserys, Drogo Kao......

God, I can't even remember how many names of people and places appeared in these first few chapters!

Obviously, this is a multi-line story, a grand background, and a lot of foreshadowing.

But is it really good to write like this?

Forcing so many things into the readers' minds at once, are you sure you can digest them?"

"If the previous piano music of various styles let us see the excellent play of Mr. Lu Yao's genius personality, then the first part of this "Song of Ice and Fire" shows the collision of multiple personalities in his mind.

By the way, the name of the first part is called "Game of Thrones", which is a very appropriate name.

I thought: The reason why this book has one protagonist in one chapter and one perspective in each chapter is probably because the multiple personalities in his mind are based on the same continental background and think about different stories together, right?

It's like multiple personalities vying for ultimate control in his head.

It's really 'Game of Thrones'!"

These are the comments of ordinary netizens.

Probably out of respect for Lu Yao, he was not too vicious.

But all of them are complaints.

Spit on the way he writes.

In this world, there may also be such a POV writing style.

But here's the similarity: they don't have to be famous.

Otherwise, someone will come up with an example to compare with Lu Yao's "A Song of Ice and Fire".

Even well-known foreign writers have an unoptimistic evaluation of "Ice and Fire".

The famous fantasy writer Ralph commented: "From the first few chapters, it seems that Lu Yao's English skills are still very deep, and the writing is good.

But the writing technique is too novel, and in the first few chapters, too much information is inserted, so that the reader is confused.

If this could be changed, there should be fewer readers who abandon the book.

At the end of the day, he's still young, and I guess he's probably trying to innovate, but he may have to take some detours. ”

Whether it is a lover of cool literature or a world great writer, they are not very optimistic about this "Song of Ice and Fire".

Lu Yao's layout can be described as unfavorable.

So much so that a foreign media who have been disliking him since he became famous for his "European Suite" and devoted themselves to hacking him wrote a special article declaring: "Lu Yao wants to take the road of literature? Obviously, this road is not suitable for him!"

He always thought that everything he did was smooth sailing and the spring breeze was proud, but this time he miscalculated.

——Winter is coming！”