Song Mengcheng took the manuscript of the poem and looked through it carefully.

After all, Huang Haibin has been writing poetry for a long time, and many things can be understood at a glance.

This time the poems were much better than the one he published, but some of the habits may have something to do with the time in which he lived.

For example, in his poems, the writing in the front is good, and at the end, he likes to engage in two lyrical sentences or things to summarize the previous parts.

Song Mengcheng has a feeling of reading argumentative essays, such an expression may be very cool as an author, and he wants to express what he really wants to express.

But for the reader, it's just a kind of painting.

Readers will only make their own evaluation of the work based on their own feelings and experiences, rather than relying on the author's narration and monologue.

Most of the poems in his works have a weakness, that is, they are too emotional.

The whole article is very cool, but it is still empty, and it is completely an emotional catharsis.

Song Mengcheng hesitated, but there were only these two shortcomings, as for the language, although it has a bit of a translation flavor, and the spoken language is not thorough enough, but it is also a big problem.

Huang Haibin nodded helplessly and said: "You're right, this is what I've been used to for many years, our era needs lyricism, so when it comes to the end, I can't help but show my emotions, but it destroys the poetry of the whole poem."

As for the emotional thing, I really didn't think about it, I just felt that the feeling came, so I kept writing it, and I wrote it like this unconsciously. ”

Song Mengcheng said with a smile: "There is a famous poet abroad, I don't remember the name, he said that people are not suitable to write poems when they are particularly happy and when they are particularly sad, because at this time, the author is often immersed in his own emotions and cannot extricate himself." I think it makes sense that what is written is very destructive to the text. ”

Huang Haibin was also very touched when he heard this sentence, "It's true that sometimes my emotions will infect my own words, making him fall into an unconscious excitement, but I think sometimes it's not necessarily a bad thing." ”

Song Mengcheng said with a smile: "Of course, everything is a matter of degree, and it is not good to be too late and not to reach it." Therefore, our ancestors talked about the golden mean. ”

"Can I ask you how long you have been writing poetry?" Huang Haibing was very curious about the concept of Song Mengcheng's poetry, after all, poetry is accompanied by life experience and experience, and from the perspective of age, life experience must be lacking, so there is only experience as an explanation.

Song Mengcheng said with a smile: "It's been a long time, I don't remember much, I started when I was in high school, and I read some poems by foreign poets at that time, such as the poems of poets like Borges, Rilke, and Yam." I read less in China. ”

After chatting with Huang Haibin all morning, both of them were big smokers, smoking cigarettes one after another, and the whole tea room was a smoke set.

When it was almost time for lunch, Song Mengcheng proposed, "Let's have a meal at my place." ”

Huang Haibin is a self-cooked, and he didn't refuse.

Song Mengcheng said: "By the way, Selena transferred to Nanhai University, I will call her at noon, shall we?"

Huang Haibin said suspiciously, "Selena?"

Apparently he was no longer at it.

Song Mengcheng reminded: "Last time I had dinner at your Red Wall Manor, Zhou Kaisheng's daughter. ”

Now Huang Haibin remembered, "Oh, you mean her, Hong Kong is not a good city? Why did you go to Nanhai University to study, shouldn't it be for you?" ”

Song Mengcheng waved his hand and said: "Zhou Kaisheng cooperates with Longhu Real Estate to engage in several large-scale real estate projects in Haikou and Sanya. ”

"Oh, I see. Okay, let's blow a meal together. "Huang Haibin doesn't care so much about having one more person and one less person.

"However, I don't have a big hotel like your Red Wall Manor here, so I can only deal with a bite, don't dislike it. Song Mengcheng said with a smile.

"How can it, in fact, don't look at me opening a restaurant, I have a hobby, which is to go to some small places and eat some local specialties, as for the scale, I really don't care about the price, I can eat enough, it's delicious." Huang Haibin said.

"Okay, then let's eat Sichuan food near my school. ”

After Song Mengcheng finished speaking, he called Selena and asked her to have lunch in Xiangmanyuan.

Selena received a phone call and criticized Song Mengcheng: "Brother Xiaocheng, you haven't called me for a month, I don't know the place in Hainan alone, you really can't bear to ignore me." ”

Song Mengcheng smiled and said, "Didn't I call you and ask you to dinner?"

"Then prepare more money, I'm going to eat all the food you haven't invited me to eat in the past month. Selena said with a grin, apparently very happy to receive Song Mengcheng's call.

The three of them ordered six dishes in Xiangmanyuan, and Song Mengcheng also felt guilty about Selena, after all, Selena came from Hong Kong and did not take care of herself.

This is also a matter of no way, I am busy, and I should keep a proper distance from Selena to avoid unnecessary misunderstandings.

Huang Haibin didn't know very well, and joked with Selena: "Selena, you shouldn't like your brother in a small city, so far from Hong Kong to Hainan to study." ”

Selena glanced at Song Mengcheng and said, "You can't talk nonsense, Brother Xiaocheng has a girlfriend, and he is very beautiful." Let her hear that Brother Kojo is going to be in trouble. ”

"You have a girlfriend, why don't you bring it out for me to know?" Huang Haibin said.

Song Mengcheng said: "I just want you to know Selena, so I specially called her out to accompany her, next time, I will definitely call her." ”

"Next time, call her up to the Red Wall Manor, and I'll treat you to dinner. Huang Haibin said.

"Would you like some wine?" Song Mengcheng asked.

"I won't drink the wine, I drove over, and the car stopped at the gate of your school, safety first. Huang Haibin said with a smile.

"Well, try not to drink while driving, your life is your own, and there is only one, so you must cherish it. Song Mengcheng said.

Huang Haibin ate and turned the topic to poetry, which is a habit of poetry lovers.

Song Mengcheng also chatted with him.

Only Selena didn't know much about poetry, so she could only listen to the conversation between the two of them, and couldn't interject at all.

Fortunately, Selena eats with good combat power, and although there are no discs for the six dishes, there is not much left.

At this point, Selena and Fang Xiaoya are very similar.

When she was almost done, Selena said, "You two are talking so much, don't you see that I'm still here?

Huang Haibin suddenly felt embarrassed, and said with a smile: "It's not, I'm embarrassed to forget that there is a little beauty here when I patronize and chat, and I will make amends if I go to the Red Wall Manor another day." ”

Song Mengcheng said: "Selena is joking with you, she is a generous person, and she doesn't care about these little things at all. ”

Selena said: "Who said I wouldn't care, I do. Brother Xiaocheng, I will punish you, and you will invite me to eat at least ten meals a month. ”

Song Mengcheng said with a smile: "Okay, okay, I'll get you a meal card for the canteen, and it's no problem to invite you to eat three meals a day." ”

Selena said, "You think it's beautiful, I want you to invite me to the seafood dinner from last time." ”

"Big meal, no problem. Song Mengcheng readily agreed.

After lunch, Huang Haibin was about to rush to pay the bill, but was stopped by Song Mengcheng and said: "This is on my territory, I must come, in fact, there is a rule in my circle, that is, whoever pays the bill." ”

Hearing this, Huang Haibin really gave up and said, "That's okay, I'll make a few more Zhang Luo in the future." ”

After sending off Huang Haibin, Song Mengcheng accompanied Selena to drink a glass of mango juice at the water bar before returning to his residence and starting to create again.