Volume 1 Chapter 75: Still Water

Why "borrow"?

Because they are alone, they have nothing.

The word "borrow" alone is enough to make people uncomfortable.

"Dispel Sorrow" is a song suitable for people like Beipiao who are struggling alone in a foreign land, while "Borrow" is written about "extreme poverty", which is a song written for those who have struggled in hell, which also explains why "Dispel Sorrow" is more popular than "Borrow", after all, not everyone has reached the point of exhaustion.

After carefully appreciating it, I think Mao Buyi not only described the "poverty" of life, but also gave this "poor" fatalistic taste, and there was a feeling of not deserving of "so poor". Presumably, Mao Buyi has some people with low self-esteem in his heart.

The first main song is about "will leave", "a pair of figures on a bumpy road" will be separated, and there is a premonition in my heart.

When realizing that it is inevitable that you are destined to lose the vital things in your life, this sentence "the vast world is biting and cold" almost makes people's scalps tingle.

I remembered that I went to Hohhot last winter to save a relationship, failed and returned, and returned to Beijing in the early morning, Beijing was shrouded in haze, and the square in front of Beijing Railway Station was crowded with people, and there was no warm face at a glance, which was really "biting cold".

The following "Nine Songs of the Ancient River" and "Melody of the Past" are nothing more than remembrance of the time when they are about to be lost. There are many stories, but they all have periods.

Followed by

"The person who was blown away by this wind said that he didn't love deeply, and the person who was drenched by this rain said that he wouldn't be cold, how many people would be covered by the boundless night, it was written in his eyes, and he didn't dare to admit it"

depicts a very humble possession.

This is actually what you and I will look like in the relationship, after separating for various reasons, tell others and tell yourself, "just because the love is not deep", all "will not be cold", unwilling to admit that some things may really be unqualified to have.

(b)

The title song of the second part is about "loss".

"Borrow a touch of parting dusk and the slanting sun", "borrow an unforgettable sentence to come to the future", and the rest of your life can only be separated from each other from now on.

In the last chorus, there is always "the seriousness that the wind blows away" and "the tears that the heavy rain can't erase away", which is probably even more poignant "poverty". If a person is only "serious" and "tear-stained", it is difficult to say whether the person really has something or is destitute.

The last paragraph is the real "borrowing".

"The sun rises in the early morning", "a rainbow and two people", this is the "one side of the paradise" and "ordinary life" that Mao Buyi wants to borrow. The things he hopes for are so ordinary, but the sun rises and the rainbow are two, but for "him" they need to "borrow". It is hard to imagine such poverty and despair as being in a desperate situation.

This is a superficial (and perhaps excessive) interpretation of the song. There are a thousand Hamlets for a thousand people, and everyone certainly feels differently about the song. I can't agree with what Zhao Yingjun said in the show, "You have to borrow and repay", because "you don't have such a life of great poverty."

(c)

There is a saying that in Mao Buyi's creation, in addition to the profound and heavy "loneliness", there is also a "poverty".

This "poverty" is not simply "no money", but "poverty" with "nothing" and no support. This is a deeper, more comprehensive "solitude".

This kind of "poverty" is like the smell of wine in "Dispelling Sorrow", which unconsciously makes people go up; but in this "Borrowing", it becomes a sharp and cold dry branch, which is rooted in people's bodies, which can be said to be painful to the skin.

As far as the music itself is concerned, the song is far better than "Sorrow", it is obviously much more complex, there is a richer structure in musicality, and the tone is more mature and stylish, as I said.

words, I think it is more classy than "Dispel Sorrow".

Because when I listen to a ballad, what I am most afraid of is that words and phrases like "the soul has nowhere to be placed" appear in various forms, which is simply a basin of dog blood. The imagery of "Borrow" always reminds me of the black-and-white underground literary film images, the night in the northwest city, a sense of desolation. not borrowed", and "nothing to return", such a life is very poor.

Because when I listen to a ballad, what I am most afraid of is that words and phrases like "the soul has nowhere to be placed" appear in various forms, which is simply a basin of dog blood. The imagery of "Borrow" always reminds me of the black-and-white underground literary film images, the night in the northwest city, a sense of desolation.

Flying in the Clouds: ......

System:......

"System, is the author selling miserably? I feel like he is begging the reader's attention to trigger the reader's sympathy, and then give him collections, recommended tickets, cheers, monthly passes, clicks, and so on. ”

Yun Zhongfei affirmed the words of the system, "No need to guess, you don't have to say anything there to feel, I can be sure now, the author is just for collections, recommended tickets, cheers, monthly passes and clicks or something, selling miserably here, what age is this, now is not the old society of the past, how can there be people who don't sell miserably here??? The author should not think that there is still some sympathy for selling miserably in the current social state, especially in the face of the public, as long as it is a normal human being with long eyes, it can be concluded at a glance that this is a person who is impermanent in the world and has nothing to do every day to do things. Yun Zhongfei said.

"Yes!!" the system echoed, "and you said that if you have less water, right, you sell it badly, readers will definitely accept it, after all, everyone has a difficult time, first of all, your inspiration is a little exhausted, you need to find inspiration, you water a little we have nothing to do, water is water, and I will forgive you, but your thousands of words and thousands of words of water, then it is unforgivable, this is not uninspired, but you are from the heart in the water word count, isn't this just deceiving my feelings???? Or say that you water once in a while, a little too much water, we also admit it, make do with it, but how many times do you say that the author has watered. I've been in the water since the first few chapters.,You water is water.,You also send a notice to readers.,The key is that the first half of this notice thinks it's the same as you're apologizing.,There's no water in the back.,As a result, you're behind it.,The painting style suddenly came to a big pant and told them,The back is still water.,You're a little too much.,After sending the notice.,The back is updated.,The title you actually changed to water??? how much are you not afraid of readers scolding you! Or do you want to rely on readers to scold you.,Scold yourself for fire.,Scold yourself as a god??? Then you're just thinking about fart, the premise of someone scolding you is that someone has to read this book, but if you look at your favorite clicks and recommendation votes, does that look like someone is watching????? no one will read it at all if there is that bleak data!No one will see what you have to drink??? no one will scold you, no one will scold you to the throne, and if you want to be scolded as a god???? you want to rely on the talents in the comment area to make yourself a god??? You said that your book should be well written, and some people scolded it, but you wrote this book like a scumbag, the author you wrote the protagonist like a retarded, this will not be seen at all, and there is no scene of pretending to be forced, you write so much fart, and you still play digging with me, do you want to grow hair like a certain author surnamed Chen??? If you want to see it, you have to improve the IQ of the protagonist.,The kind of sand sculpture that the protagonist is mentally retarded is outdated.,Now readers like to see that kind of IQ.,Even if it's just a little bit.,That's going to be better than now.,Now the protagonist has no IQ.,IQ EQ doesn't improve or you only improve IQ.,Or improve EQ.,But you won't make the IQ and EQ so low like now.,Your protagonist won't pretend to be forced.,Just a little bit.,Let readers feel good-looking.,There's no place to feel a little cool.,It's all up to you to make this matter out of thin air.,It's okay.,Keep saying it here. ,Keep writing.,Pale and weak than the wind.,The bad writing is like shit.,And it's not cool.,The key is that you also have a title that belongs to the cool text.,And then open it and take a look at the first one.,Well,It's okay.,It's okay.,Do you look good and find out? Cool, uh, it may be an article with an IQ, it's all foreshadowing, to the last touch, pull a hair and move the whole body, directly raise the level of that article to him more than a few grades, and then look at the water full of water, like the sea, keep pouring water to the readers, and then tell the readers, I am in the water, and then start to die, do the opposite, against the reader's psychology? But readers may not buy it, they won't vote for you, and then you will slowly hit the street, it is impossible to become a god, it is impossible to think about it, it is impossible to become a god in this life, everyone in the street group is talented, what is the use of becoming a god? He has a lot of money to become a god, a lot of money to become a god, what does he want to do when he becomes a god, even if you break the change, there will be readers who will vote for you to cheer for you, your manuscript fee will still be there, and there will even be a lot of brothers, you see what you are doing now, you can only rely on full attendance to write like this, this little money to continue your life, and you don't even dare to break the change, but you don't want to write, when the leadership is scarce, you are still writing, can it be a good thing? It's all water, it's all water, it's strange if no one can buy it, I don't know if no one gives you a reward, vote for you to give you some collections, and add clicks to you to promote, then you're just thinking about fart. ”

Author:......

Flying in the Clouds: ??????

Oh, I'll go, why didn't I find out that the system's mouth cannon is so profound before???? this is not his mouth, it's an anti-aircraft gun, this cannon is one shot after another, I estimate that the author's psychological defense line has collapsed, how can this cannon be so powerful? Why didn't I find out before? I'm messing with the system, what if the system points the muzzle at me???